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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 130)

Peda Senior Member

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Hi Aqualine

The one thing about ASRs' personality in IPK that used to really irk me was that he was always portrayed as very sharp minded who could read people really well, yet he always failed miserably with Kushi.

It was therefor very welcoming to see Lord Arnav trying to connect the dots in the forest. I earnestly pray that he does not stop there even though time is of the essence.

I wonder will he analyze his encounter with the General and connect more dots...that Master Gupta is indeed correct in his feelings of being watched. Also will he recall the Generals and Kushis heated argument at the lake.

Eagerly awaiting to read more.

Have a lovely weekend

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A_Soul IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged

Chapter 173: A Bitter Proposal

"What took you so long?" Kushi asked anxiously, rushing towards him, and Ram paused in wonderment, on seeing how shaken she looked, as though she'd seen a ghost. 

Ram, the one you are referring as ghost here, he himself is having a 'ghost' as companion.
Fab equation between Ram &Khushi… Loved it! LOL

"I said COME WITH ME!" he said in a low mincing voice and both Kushi and Ram were taken aback by his tone.

Hayee kya aawaz pai hain, yeh bande ne….!
Lordy, 'tum jo gussa bhi karo to mujhe pyaar lagta hain, jane kyun?' 

Lord Arnav turned about and walked towards the side of the castle where the shadow of the wall fell upon him and concealed him from everyone's view as he waited. His eyes were trained on the procession, keeping particular watch over a certain person whom he had to take care to avoid for a while

Who? Shyam..  Yeah Right….!

The wind died.  
Or Kushi thought it did. 
In fact, it was her own breath that had been held back as the insane words coldly echoed with the heartless wind.

Ohhh.. I loved it… From very start you explain human's feeling with use of nature so well… lovely!

Kushi felt her legs get weak. She was certain she would throw up if she stood there any longer listening to what this strange apparition spoke to her of. Go away, nightmare, haunt me some other night….
"While the procession makes for the Temple, we need to take the other road," said thevoice from the nightmare and Kushi opened her eyes. 

Lovely scripting….!

With her back pressed to the door, she stared at the silent Library she was in, the room lit by a single candle propped on the table candlestick.

I so knew this, that the main conversation will be done at library… In our take Library is very important just like poolside in show!!

…but she found herself walking to the candle, hoping it will give her the strength to rise from the darkness that was beginning to full her insides.

SUPERB…! She is searching ray of hope to lighten sudden appearance of darkness in her life.. FAB!

.. Mayhap, when they were halfway to wherever he was planning to take her, he would stop and laugh and tell her he was only teasing with her.

Ohhh…  poorkhushi.. (just thinking how delighted moment it could be if her thought is true Wink)

His smirk was cold before he turned confidently towards his horse, his back to her, "I saw your father before coming here and warned him that my brother will hesitate to marry if I am not present."


.. But all she felt was a numbness, born of a disbelief of all that was said and was to be done.

Mere touch of bodies but so much difference in it between two incidents - the earlier one where he saved her and now… 


Who is this HE & SHE…. She I can guess, she is LH  but 'HE'?? Lady on Hood came with Man on Hood (is he her husband? I mean through their talk I find it so..typical husband-wife convo)

HE: "You really make the most startling entries, you know."
SHE: "Everything about me is a suprise."

This is so damn true…

"I think you to be quite daring," her voice replied, "I don't let many people talk to me so freely as I let you."

Such a ATTITUDE she has… LOVED IT!!

"I am a hermit," he pointed out, "Its one of my rightful privileges to be attuned to your demands."

WHAT!! HE is he talking to LH with his spiritual power.. hmmm!

He grunted, "Left without a goodbye, too!" 

So funny..this is..!! LOL!! Truly enjoyed the convo..!

And then he paused and looked up at the stars, ascertaining something from the way the constellation was spread over the dark sky, "Well, I knew from the moment they wandered into the premises of my hut that I was meant to bind them together. And look at me: Fullfiling just that!" are just breaking your own records of MINDBLOWING endings…. 
You turn whole incident into something else… Amazing, Fabulous, Fantastic, Thrilling, Exciting, Incredible and this n that… hhh…… I LOVE YOU!

Following are outstanding thoughts of yours to incorporate in tale & they hold so much significance…

         Ram being a partial witness

         Khushi pass a msgfor family

         Lordy thought to take Nani's permission

         AND the biggest that HE & SHE!!!



Bikhre Bikhre Hai Armaan, Saare Sapne Hai Toote
Kiya Jispe Bharosa, Wohi Dhaage Hai Toote

Dard Yeh Kaise Sahoon, oh oh oh oh
Chup Bhi Kaise Mein Rahoon, Yeh Nahin Baat Zara si

Jisko Apna Kiya Hai, Woh Hai Harjayee
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Tha, Kuch Nahin Baki


Dil jala hoon bohot main, Saari duniya jaladun
Uski raahon ki saari, Roshni mai bujhadoon

Mujhko chahe zamana, Aur ussai ye dil chahe
Mujhko thukra ke kaise, Chain se woh rehpaye

Mujhe tanhayee daseoh oh oh oh
Mujhpe duniye ye hase, Pyar ki hai ruswayee

Maine aitebar kiya hai, Naa raha baaqi
Thoda sa pyar hua hai, Ab bhi hai baaki

[These lyrics are from very famous serial of that time 'Kahi to hoga', I so wish i could have find audio clip of it to make you guys hear (if you have not) its awesome...!
If you know the tune of song 'Thoda sa pyaar hua hain' then do read it with that in mind... You will enjoy it more..!]


Edited by A_Soul - 21 June 2013 at 11:19am

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19sayana Senior Member

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Ohhh poor khushi..

it must be bad no worst feeling in the whole world to get such proposal from the man she is in love with..

m not blaming lord.. he is smart n quick planner than arnav.. but I love them both a lot..

n thanks for an honour for invite from lady in dark hood..

love I Lin..

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kushipugly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 5:35pm | IP Logged
Chapter 157:
enygesis & loutra ceremony, never ever have heard before but learnt it through aquiline & through arshi in arhsia.lovely update, thankyou Smile
 what the whate what the happend in the rear roomBlushing

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:01am | IP Logged
Now that I'm refreshed and in better spirits, I begin reading the rest. :)

Chapter 171:

I can just sense it, you know, from your narration that Arnav has built a fresh, new, stronger wall of resolve and detachment around himself and his emotions. Like a shield to conceal his battered self. 

Oh, he actually asks for her hand. Oh. Oh my. And how respectfully. But, this is surprising! I never ever thought he would go about things with a level head! Linnie, I like this. LOL

Oh goodness, this is awesome!! I have fallen in love with this tale all over again! I mean, Arnav is being harsh, but he's actually trying to grasp at whatever clues are being thrown his way! AND Khushi's father is able to warn him, somewhat, something we were left yearning for for ages!! Muah!! Thank you for doing this right!!

"The Curse of Seeing a Beast Become"? Does this mean that what happened to Master Gupta was simply the repercussion of seeing the General transform? But... Shyam knew of this, didn't he? And he used that fact in his favour. Wow. I can see why you like your Shyam so much Linnie.

Awesome, super chapter. It's got me jumping up and down and rubbing my hands in glee. LOL

Edited by maverickmartin - 22 June 2013 at 12:26am

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Chapter 172:

I feel so sorry for Khushi at the end of that chapter. There is such a greater storm to befall on her and she does not have a clue. But this is certainly good - to see Arnav go about trying to actually get through the rituals for the sake of the families, and not just Khushi, for the marriage. He actually goes and gets the rings himself. 

Shyam is too clever for Arnav, methinks. He correctly draws the right conclusion about what Arnav has presumed and simply eggs him on. Making Arnav's theory gain more ground. Argh.

And I think the General is simply toying with Arnav. He wouldn't just take her away like that, it's too risky a thing to do for someone as calculative as him. He must see some use that this hurried marriage will bring him - a better chance to keep Khushi close, have the best of both worlds? And I still can't hate him.

Edited by maverickmartin - 22 June 2013 at 12:50am

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Chapter 173:

"Tonight, I will wed you."
The sheer finality of that one line. Hah, gave me shivers. 

Oh my god. So much happened!!! Why did Khushi take flight? Out of fear? To run away from the nightmare she was willing this to be? Oh, drat that General and his scheming ways. 

The entire description of the confrontation and the consequences seems so much better, Linnie! Oh, and Arnav actually lies to her 

Thankfully, she tries to take control of her senses and keep calm. But, well, it was in vain, after all this is the First Lord Arnav, ready to go to desperate measures to keep his Di's happiness intact.

Dear, valiant Ram. I feel so sorry for Khushi. To find love and be betrayed in one single day is such a blow to that gentle heart. :(

Don't get me wrong, but the Lady is a lot like the male lead of her story. *winks* "Everything about me is a surprise." She's very, erm. sure of herself. :D  Haha, the hermit and the Lady have quite a relationship, don't they? Poor dear, he makes me want to pat him on the back and say, "Oh, don't mind her. She's not even a hermit!" LOL

And so, the stage is set for the marriage. The Bride and Groom are on their way and so is the man to join them in holy matrimony. With the gusts of wind, of course. ;)

Edited by maverickmartin - 22 June 2013 at 1:58am

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s_mg Senior Member

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Posted: 22 June 2013 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Hello Lin ...

The marriage ceremony u have written is really beautiful and unique... i have completed all previous chapters... till the last chapter... i have no words to comment ... romance ... thriller ... mystery... darkness... u combine all elements here... hattts off to u ...

Lord Arnav is real angry at this tym... but i think general slipped out so much in his haste and foolishness... i hope Lord Arnav will think abt them too after all this marriage mess .. but it seems too far ... for now they have to face their families disapproval and annoyance...

and sorry for being late ... congrats to you for your new post and we all know you are absolutely worthy of it... Love u...

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