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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 129)

MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
awesome update..really very well written...the fanfic is progressing very well..keep up the good work going..please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile

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Jo_Pinchy Goldie

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Lord Arnav clutched his fists and then looked at Kushi sternly, "Tonight, I will wed you."
The wind died.  
Or Kushi thought it did. 
In fact, it was her own breath that had been held back as the insane words coldly echoed with the heartless wind
Green heart or must say The Brave heart. After being betrayed by a friend, she was completely shaken by the truth and then when she saw Lordy, she felt calm but the coldness in his eyes got her into worry. and then the bitter proposal. How could this women be so strong. She embraced the doom for the well being of her sister.

And then before she could think clearly or let him realize what was happening, she turned on her heels and raced into the Castle
This whole scene i was laughing, I don't know why. Just like khushi,didn't know why she was running.

His smirk was cold before he turned confidently towards his horse, his back to her, "I saw your father before coming here and warned him that my brother will hesitate to marry if I am not present." 
Well this didn't happen right?
Yay! finally the Lady in the Dark hood.The Divine. I Liked the conversation between them. It was like I was in Hermit's place 
he paused and listened to the wind. Then he shook his head and sighed,  
But i was like mouth wide open, like screaming she is here, she is here.
So now this is official marriage. 

 "I don't let many people talk to me so freely as I let you."
Well Lin, How are you like, when she narrates the story to you? Just like the Hermit?Wink


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shijinareneesh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged
wow was mindblowing...but Khushi is shatterd...why he is all cold now don he knw its Gen doing...frm Shashi's word he grasped it ,right?bt did Gen words gave him wrong conclusion about Khushi... the Hermit will be there for their wedding..did he hav any special roll,other than bind them together...and Ram hope he wont go to Gen first...

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Chapter 167:
Oh, thank goodness that rein broke! Goodness, The Mistress of Mischief is a magnet for trouble, isn't it? As Harry once said to Mr. Weasley, "I don't go looking for trouble. Trouble usually finds me." 

It is so like Khushi, to check everything was alright and begin to walk away to her destination and then stop short as she realizes she doesn't even know the way there. I can even imagine her expressions! LOL And she actually thought the horse would be remorseful of his actions and come looking for her!! Ah, well, I guess Lord Arnav and Shadow were written in her fate. 

It's like, for Arnav, care=anger, concern=anger, attraction=teasing, for Khushi, that is. God, that man needs some lessons. ;) Haha, it was so funny to read of Khushi just nodding or shaking her head as responses to Arnav's questions. LOL Poor dear. 

Oh, I love you. I love you, love you, love you.

You made Arnav put an actual ring on her finger!!!!!!!! *big attack hug coming your way* Hug

Oh, why do they have to fight when I'm basically dancing away to glory in my head? Such romantics, these two. Uff! LOL I love how the feel of Arnav's body steadying her takes away Khushi's fear of riding Shadow. *sigh* The Feels.

That last word of assurance. Arnav would remember it when the time came, wouldn't he? Wouldn't he?

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Chapter 168

Your description of Anjali's baby bump reminded me how silly it was that she never had one in the show. Perfect midriff from pilot to end. Argh.

Ooh... Secret, shared glances, eh? Ahem ahem. BUT, nothing escapes the omniscient Lady Anjali! LOL It's actually, the way she teases him.

"Of course and it is good you are not that interested," said his sister, watching him slowly climb the steps, "Because that girl deserves a man who will sincerely love her and since you claim yourself heartless, I don't see how I will be helping her fulfill HER dreams. Nonetheless, I am certain after her sister is wedded off, her parents will immediately set out to seek a worthy man for her." 

What the. I have to give it to Anjali. The queen of reverse pychology. LOL Hmm, this gets me thinking that if and when Arnav and Khushi drop the bomb of their marriage over her head, she would be more than a little disappointed and affronted with her brother, more than Khushi. Even if she does not condone it. 

Ah well, atleast she has him thinking!

General Shyam. I don't know what to make of him. On one hand he is a lying, deceiving gentleman and on the other hand he seems to genuinely care about the child. Or maybe he cares enough to find it a source of his nightmares. *shudders* He's starting to give me the heebie-jeebies. 

What I don't understand is, he can always come forward about Khushi being the cure, can't he? Not tell his wife about his feelings for the girl, but he can tell her that Khushi might be the one to cure of him, isn't it? Unless, unless being the cure means you are somehow deeply connected to the cursed. Tears of a pure maiden. I am not getting this part. Doubt.

Oh, oh, how sweet, she acknowledges her love! Yay, yay, yay!! That is heartening.

Oh. She saw him. She knows who he is.

And now begins the storm.

Heebie-jeebies all over the place.

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hoopoe IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged

Rabba ve,

Lord Arnav and Khushi...

"There is nothing like wounded affection for giving poignancy to anger."
                                                               ... Elizabeth Gaskell, Wives and Daughters

Keeping aside, that one is a "Cold beast" and the other is a "Green heart"... both are two tender hearts who are in love and realised their strong feelings towards the other, only hours before. Their hearts were overwhelmed with their new found realisations, when the unexpected cruel lightning struck their life leaving them numb with shock... So they both were in a very vulnerable position, with their defences at its lowest... the dazed moments when you keep aside all the warnings from your rational mind and decide to blindly trust your heart's wish. But when that very trust gets brutally shatterred, its natural for any human to initially feel hurt and betrayed, and once your defence is back in position, cover your hurt with contempt, hatred and disgust.
Khushi... she want to share her shock, betrayal and distress with him. She want him to provide solace and strength to her weakened heart. But in turn, she receives a "cold proposal" from him. His coldness is what that disgusts her. She is used to his, "Sadda haq" attitude towards her. So its not surprising for her to get an "untimely proposal" from him. But its the "coldness" in his words that hurts her. Its not betrayal or disgust she feels at the moment, but HURT... by a man who didnt TRUST her enough to share his reasons behind taking such an important decision of THEIR LIFE.
Lord Arnav... He initially feels shocked and betrayed by General as well as Khushi. After his breakdown in the forest, he collects himself to face the impending storm in both his as well as his di's life. He cleverly plan his tactics and stratergy to win this battle. Though his mind was doing calculations to protect his Di from the cruel truth, his heart keeps on analysing the past incidents and encounters with her to prove her innocence to his rational mind. He keeps fighting a battle within while his mind is planning his next move. His meeting with Master. Shashi did help him in that. But the big help for him came in the form of General.
In his overconfidence, General. Jha unknowingly blurted out some essential points in Khushi's favour.

"You know the truth and she knows it too. It's too risky to stay here anymore if I need to execute my plans..."

She was too trusting that she spoke all about her to me through the many letters we shared.
"Sadly, the letters are all burnt. I regret burning them now... I should have let you read them and know the taste of her fresh hatred first-hand...instead of giving in to my initial rage and burning them all up."


Though he is not completely convinced, it did help in reducing his bitterness towards khushi. He could have confronted khushi and cleared all his doubts immediately. But "time is essential" at the moment. He need to make his next move swiftly without the General's knowledge. So he made up his mind, to proceed with the BIG DECISION of his life. Anyways, he has already marked her as his. So marrying her now or later, marrying her secretly or publicly is not going make any difference for him. He was always protective and possesive about his loved ones. Now instead of just di its "Di" and "khushi"... Ofcourse, he feels betrayed and disgusted towards Khushi but deep inside, its his HURT and ANGER that makes him feel so. A girl whom he entrusted his Di's safety hours ago didnt even bother to inform about her acquaintance with the General... Ofcourse, he is bound to be angry and hurt... afterall he is such a sensitive and possesive lover.

At present, its their muddled mind thats working and taking decisions. Once they settle down, after the night's events and start listening to what their heart says, they'll soon realise and understand the hurt and righteous anger behind the veil of their hatred and disgust. Hope, it happens very soon... I can only conclude that,

"Some things just couldn't be protected from storms. Some things simply needed to be broken off...Once old thing were broken off, amazingly beautiful thing could grow in their place."                                                                                ... Denise Hildreth Jones

Edited by hoopoe - 21 June 2013 at 8:28am

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
First, of all, the quote from Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening by Robert Frost - love. I have a soft corner for that poet, don't ask me why, ever since I read The Road Not Taken. We did the former poem in our Alternative English paper this past Semester so it's still fresh in my mind. :)

Chapter 169:

Oh no. I had a bad feeling as I read of her walking to the General to confront him. Poor Khushi, betrayed, lost a "friend", worried about one who she was entrusted with - no wonder she wished for her father.

He paused. Was his sister really talking about Kushi? Or did he think that she was talking about Kushi because HE was thinking about Kushi? 
He clenched his fists: his sister SO loved tweaking his sane senses! 

No, Arnav dear. You sister just knows you too well. For your own good.

Oh God. Shyam, you're brilliant. I have never ever seen anyone parry accusations so swiftly, so suavely, without flinching for a moment. At the moment, I am astounded. I suppose the disgust I should be feeling for him as I place myself in Khushi's place will come later. But, wow, that man knows his game and plays it too well. Too well.

Wait. Sorry. Correction. Linnie, YOU are brilliant. 

Arnav saw them. Oh, I hate Shyam. No, I don't hate him. I mean I want to, but I can't! He just sounds so sincere. Ugh! Like he does not need anything from Khushi but her help. But is that the only thing? Oh, how clever of him to try to lead Khushi into another illusion when the first one breaks. God, this is maddening! I'm just praying that this fight that Arnav witnessed will not get twisted and come to him with an entirely different meaning.

Oh. It is that. He just wants to use Khushi to get rid of the curse. Doesn't harbor any strong emotion for her? Some saving grace.
And he just got more dangerous.

Nooo!!!! Please, Arnav, please, don't misunderstand her! Please, please, please! I just feel the same helplessness while watching IPK go through this phase. It's going to be painful to watch it happen all over again. *sobs* Please, Arnav. Not again.

Edited by maverickmartin - 21 June 2013 at 9:30am

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maverickmartin IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
I am sniffing (and I don't have a cold) before I even begin reading. What with the last chapter and then your announcement of being gone for a month and those pictures of poor Arnav... Nothing is fair!!

Chapter 170

Oh, oh the poor dear. With trembling fingers and a broken heart, he seeks the company of Shadow, his reflection... And, oh no. The curse worsened.

That was terrifying. The transformation. The heightened senses, the bestial mind. I cannot even begin to imagine what Arnav must have gone through. A broken heart did finally break his bounds. *sigh* I just feel so so sorry for him. Betrayed, broken, alone, cursed. 

Oh no. No no no no. Everything is misread when the only thought on your mind is that the one you loved turned out to be a traitor. Pain clouds judgement. And it gets harder to read. 

Okay, I know this has all happened before, but I'm still in tears. Really. I'll continue reading later. Can't now.

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