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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 122)

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
amazing
i was extremely busy in my office work and as a result could not visit the inn as frequently as i would have loved but it is a delight to read ur story again. my yearning for IPK is assuaged to some degree but now i want to read what u would have wanted the plot to turn out. till now its almost a gothic version of IPK. i just wanna read more

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Hey Lin,
finally I went thru last 3 updates ...and Phew! they were scary...here my take on those 3 chapters
chapter-170
Breakdown chapter..Well it was really heartbreaking one... and perhaps the one that gave us an insight into what makes lordy so ruthless...his agony ...his pain..of betrayal ..yet again...which hurt was more bigger though...thought that his sister who loves a man so much and is carrying his child..is being betrayed by the same man...or the girl who was beginning to melt his stone heart and making her place in it was the reason for that betrayal...the man who had started to place his trust on this girl...had given her responsibility of guarding his sister...his everything...
his words- "..why is it that you and I are only worthy of pain in this life...we have lost everything once and we are losing everything now. "
 
That fear of loosing everything he has...while he lost once...this fear is what makes him vulnerable... we dont know what happened to his mother and how was his father then...was he responsible..did he betray..why his mother left them...and was it that fearing the same fate with his sister...he is scared...and is determined this time to be more heartless..only to protect what he love..
 
I believe he feels betrayed...but still with these lines in your chapter..-"If he wants to get to Di or Kushi, he will have to get through me first..."
 
He wants to protect both- his Di and Khushi... not only his Di.. as he has been chosen one to protect khushi too...from devil who has eyed on her...
 
one thing I noticed is your title for this chapter- Battling to believe... has he believed or not..? this battle is interesting.. what has he believed in.. his need for hour is to protect his sister...but has he really believed in betrayal by khushi...?
 
Chapter 171
 
So lord is determined in his decision and as first step of following rituals...he seeks khushi's father permission ..asking her hand for marriage...It is interesting that now arnav knows that Master Shashi knew something ..and had seen General transforming too... As much my heart breaks for what coming up next for khushi...I am relieved to hear these two lines from Lord..A promise that he will abide by..I am sure..
 
"She will come to no henious harm."
 
 "Let's just say this is for the good of everyone."
 
 


Edited by riti4u - 21 June 2013 at 2:18am

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:01am | IP Logged
First of all holds my ears and says SORRY *with a pout* .. i knw i had told i'll be reading it and giving my views on previous night , but due my exhaustion of whole day i couldn't bring my self to read the update.. i prefer to read it when my mind is totally fresh.. so now m finally  done with the update..

And oh lord.. this lordy has done some thing exactly we all were fearing for . But i definitely accept this change of events rather than to see an innocent sole left unprotected in front of a  real beast who is just waiting for an opportunity to cause her more pain and torments for his own selfishness...
I AM WITH MY..no no I MEANT KHUSHI'S LORDY , CAUSE I KNOW EVEN IF HIS ACTIONS AND WORDS ARE UTTERLY PAINFUL , HIS HEART AND SOUL HAS JUST ONE MOTIVE BEHIND THIS AND THAT IS TO, SECURE AND PROTECT THOSE TWO MOST IMPORTANT PEOPLE WHO MEANT WORLD TO HIM.. obviously he's gona denie any thing related to the other person now, specially after what he has seen & presumed.

And WOW.. was actually wondering that where has our  lady in the dark hood  suddenly disappeared when all this what is happening is supposedly known by her from a log time and may b  had a hand in it too . And presence  of  Hermit with the lady was totally a surprise. Hmmm.. so he also knew that LORD ARNAV AND KHUSHI were meant to happen..very interesting..
So now just holding my breath and waiting for the MARRIAGE's  for the most beautiful couples .. one out of love and second out of errm... betrayal..
THANK U for the update Lin.. <3
 
RABBA VE.. 
    


Edited by gmsk - 21 June 2013 at 4:07am

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
awesome update..really very well written...the fanfic is progressing very well..keep up the good work going..please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..Smile

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Lord Arnav clutched his fists and then looked at Kushi sternly, "Tonight, I will wed you."
The wind died.  
Or Kushi thought it did. 
In fact, it was her own breath that had been held back as the insane words coldly echoed with the heartless wind
Green heart or must say The Brave heart. After being betrayed by a friend, she was completely shaken by the truth and then when she saw Lordy, she felt calm but the coldness in his eyes got her into worry. and then the bitter proposal. How could this women be so strong. She embraced the doom for the well being of her sister.

And then before she could think clearly or let him realize what was happening, she turned on her heels and raced into the Castle
This whole scene i was laughing, I don't know why. Just like khushi,didn't know why she was running.

His smirk was cold before he turned confidently towards his horse, his back to her, "I saw your father before coming here and warned him that my brother will hesitate to marry if I am not present." 
Well this didn't happen right?
 
Yay! finally the Lady in the Dark hood.The Divine. I Liked the conversation between them. It was like I was in Hermit's place 
he paused and listened to the wind. Then he shook his head and sighed,  
But i was like mouth wide open, like screaming she is here, she is here.
So now this is official marriage. 

 "I don't let many people talk to me so freely as I let you."
Well Lin, How are you like, when she narrates the story to you? Just like the Hermit?Wink


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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 4:36am | IP Logged
wow ..it was mindblowing...but Khushi is shatterd...why he is all cold now don he knw its Gen doing...frm Shashi's word he grasped it ,right?bt did Gen words gave him wrong conclusion about Khushi... the Hermit will be there for their wedding..did he hav any special roll,other than bind them together...and Ram hope he wont go to Gen first...

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Chapter 167:
Oh, thank goodness that rein broke! Goodness, The Mistress of Mischief is a magnet for trouble, isn't it? As Harry once said to Mr. Weasley, "I don't go looking for trouble. Trouble usually finds me." 

It is so like Khushi, to check everything was alright and begin to walk away to her destination and then stop short as she realizes she doesn't even know the way there. I can even imagine her expressions! LOL And she actually thought the horse would be remorseful of his actions and come looking for her!! Ah, well, I guess Lord Arnav and Shadow were written in her fate. 

It's like, for Arnav, care=anger, concern=anger, attraction=teasing, for Khushi, that is. God, that man needs some lessons. ;) Haha, it was so funny to read of Khushi just nodding or shaking her head as responses to Arnav's questions. LOL Poor dear. 

Oh, I love you. I love you, love you, love you.

You made Arnav put an actual ring on her finger!!!!!!!! *big attack hug coming your way* Hug

Oh, why do they have to fight when I'm basically dancing away to glory in my head? Such romantics, these two. Uff! LOL I love how the feel of Arnav's body steadying her takes away Khushi's fear of riding Shadow. *sigh* The Feels.


That last word of assurance. Arnav would remember it when the time came, wouldn't he? Wouldn't he?

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Posted: 21 June 2013 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Chapter 168

Your description of Anjali's baby bump reminded me how silly it was that she never had one in the show. Perfect midriff from pilot to end. Argh.

Ooh... Secret, shared glances, eh? Ahem ahem. BUT, nothing escapes the omniscient Lady Anjali! LOL It's actually, the way she teases him.

"Of course and it is good you are not that interested," said his sister, watching him slowly climb the steps, "Because that girl deserves a man who will sincerely love her and since you claim yourself heartless, I don't see how I will be helping her fulfill HER dreams. Nonetheless, I am certain after her sister is wedded off, her parents will immediately set out to seek a worthy man for her." 

What the. I have to give it to Anjali. The queen of reverse pychology. LOL Hmm, this gets me thinking that if and when Arnav and Khushi drop the bomb of their marriage over her head, she would be more than a little disappointed and affronted with her brother, more than Khushi. Even if she does not condone it. 

Ah well, atleast she has him thinking!

General Shyam. I don't know what to make of him. On one hand he is a lying, deceiving gentleman and on the other hand he seems to genuinely care about the child. Or maybe he cares enough to find it a source of his nightmares. *shudders* He's starting to give me the heebie-jeebies. 

What I don't understand is, he can always come forward about Khushi being the cure, can't he? Not tell his wife about his feelings for the girl, but he can tell her that Khushi might be the one to cure of him, isn't it? Unless, unless being the cure means you are somehow deeply connected to the cursed. Tears of a pure maiden. I am not getting this part. Doubt.

Oh, oh, how sweet, she acknowledges her love! Yay, yay, yay!! That is heartening.

Oh. She saw him. She knows who he is.

And now begins the storm.

Heebie-jeebies all over the place.

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