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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 11)

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Rabba Ve dear AquiLINe,

Thanks for the surprise gifts of two updates before your real longgg break.

lovely updates, full of ARSHI.  they bumping into each other, the completion of the Loutra ceremony in their own way, though it was Akash and Payal's ceremony, the lovely storeroom moments loved them.  Embarrassed

Anjali trying her best to act cupid for her brother and khushi,  The General slipped away but may not be able to do for too long.

and Khushi was trying to punish the Lordy... hey little did she know that she will have to pay for her mischief.  and what a way to pay ... 

and at last he said sorry and again Khushi got see the other side of Lord Arnav.

beautifully written sequences.

bablio


 


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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
awe my favourite update so far...loved it...super sweet ...continue soon... 

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 4:31pm | IP Logged

Rabba ve dear Aquiline,

 
For the very first time, I felt im reading a dark love story... For the first time, I saw a dark shade in Lord Arnav... Ouch
 
 
 
I cannot stop but wonder about shass' foresight...
 
Originally posted by shass


Kushi looked up when his fingers circled around her wrist and then he was pulling her to him.

his love for her is becoming dangerously too intense, breaking his control n driving him in ways he would least want to be moved in,his thoughts n actions are no more in control, only words..bitter words are his last stand against it all.. it makes me think, will it ever cross into madness? i suspect it may some day...

he had already held her stained hands in his and dipped them in the cold water that filled the trough. Violet mist swirled from her hands and spread out with the ripples to fade into the transparent water.

he's strangely too used to torture..he takes it easily..if at some point,he marked her his, will he torture her too?? how much of it will she bear? if he crosses into madness, what will it cost her?? how much of it will affect their life?



 
And, your words...
 

"The sun was beginning to set and the golden rays cast itself over the land. The two of them near the window, one struggling against the other, were silhouetted against the golden light and a cold breeze blew through the window, fluttering the curtains between which they stood"

 
 
I know these are inevitable, but still...UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy... I need some time to compose myself before I come back to admire the other beautiful moments of this chapter...
 


Edited by hoopoe - 11 April 2013 at 6:31pm

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Lin, m sad, n angry wid u..
Reason being, why do u give us such updates, when u ll make us wait for da next part for I dont kno how many days or months..
Its not at all fair Cry
Now coming to da update, khushi being khushi, some mischief is obviously expected..bt the punishment was too cute..
Loved their confrontation..seems like things r getting mended between them...
arnav liking the feelings!!!
Simply wawo...
Plz plz plz give da weak hearted readers like us, a bonus update, before u go on break again...plz Tongue

Edited by rockingsoni - 11 April 2013 at 5:46pm

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 5:53pm | IP Logged

Thank u so much for updates dearSmile
Both are beautifull update... He felt change in him when she is with him...
Thy took bath in together...
Unintentally full fill one ritual of wedding ..
Love the punsihment Smile 
Tc 
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
It was really magical.Arnav was right Khushi was so wrong in choosing the mode of punishment.Loved this flirty side o Arnav.
Thanks for the update and have a happy break dear:)

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Smilei loved the updateTongue

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
WOW
it was just too good
khushi kissed arnav and called him my lord
loved it

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