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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 107)

Jo_Pinchy Goldie

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 12:34pm | IP Logged

Chapter 169 : Exposed.
 When Khushi confronted  the General it reminded me of Lizzy in Pride and prejudice. The rain scene when Darcy comes with proposal to Elizabeth. I mean the tone of her speaking can be very much related to the faceoff Khushi had. General as always cunning and playful with his words, tried to refrain as though things never happened .. Really General! Bang! then comes Khushi with reasons. Beautiful update Lin..

The General paused, a shadow crossing over his face as the clouds covered the moon, "I couldn't reveal myself to you at that moment for you would have made a scene just like the one you are making one now. I needed to reveal myself to you at the right time by assuring you that what you had assumed about my intentions were wrong."...
The clouds moved away from the moon and the light shone on his shadowed face, "What wrong has she done? She married me."

Here he tried not to show the bad General, which will mar his Good man image. And so he kept twisting his words to the reasons Khushi gave. Buh then he finally showed his true side, "...She married me." There was an evil glint in his eyes when he said those words and Kushi felt unsettled.  ( The monster mind talking)

Chapter 170 : After many years, it was coming again.
 This one was very painful ... as it was when we saw Arnav breakdown in the show. I like the bonding both the Master's have towards their horses - Lightning and Shadow. In the earlier episode we had seen how Lightning was reluctant to twitch when Khushi touched him in the barn, trying to recall it was Lightning . and Here we see Shadow being there for his master. 
chotey! His mother's voice called out in the darkness of his mind
was the Lady in the hood watching him near the Lake? Was she who called CHOTEY?

Chapter 171 :  Wow that was unexpected... I know the Aftermath will be bad for Khushi. But now this took me to surprise. Lordy asking for Khushi's hand to his father. I hope Master Gupta's words will help the Lordy to comprehend the situation well. But this is too early to expect. Cause Lordy just found the small clue but that does not clear the air between him and Khushi. I hope he gives Khushi a chance to speak. Well now, Kudos My dear Lin! You have already nailed it from this very version of yours. And many more to come. 

Unhappy Now I hope Khushi is fine. Please Update soon dear. 


Edited by serialaddict12 - 16 June 2013 at 2:52pm

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Mouktika Groupbie

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
I was feeling so bad for Mr.Gupta it's a very difficult phase for a father to give acceptance in such a situation.

Arnav I don't know how a man can handle such a difficult situation very well written

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lankan Senior Member

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
Ohh I love the spin you took from the orignal track. Lord Arnav is my absolute fav :) 

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music1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
I am speechless Linny...absolutely...loved the turn of events one is stupid or stubborn here...loved it:)

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SankiPagal IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
oh my I am so happy after reading this update.. it was in a way some kind of relief... :))
The last two parts were so beautiful.. part 170 was intense and painful.. i had tears in my eyes.. :')
I am going out of station for a while.. so dont mind if you dont find my likes or comments in the upcoming updates.. i shall comment altogether for the updates once i come bak...

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-Farwa_Ibrahim- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
edited my comment on page 103

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
wow...amazing update...i understand why arnav reacted thus...but he is using his mind and hope he isn't too ruthless...the transformation of arnav from human to beast and back to human was beautifully written...looking forward to read more 

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SilverBell IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
I Hope Khushi Be Safe After Marriage and Not Suffer Like In The Serial.

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