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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 (Page 103)

storytellerm IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
loved it
i hink now he will protect khushi and his di both
i think he got a little idea that khushi is not involved 

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hellgirl Senior Member

Joined: 02 July 2011
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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Rabba ve every1...
A big hug aqua ur version of story just started and i m in love with it all over again...

So arnav asked shashi to marry khushi... Dont know what khushi's and every1 reaction will be...
i know that khushi will say yes...

Waiting for more...
P.s. Did u stop sending PMs or u kicked me out of buddy list..*pout**wink*

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LeenaRocks IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 June 2013 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Lin!! I can now clearly see what you exactly meant in the msg you wrote to me! :)

This is a major twist in the story i must say! And so different from the IPK! Oh! i guess it is time i stop relating it to the show now! But this change in direction is something that i am wholeheartedly welcoming! Its got a freshness of its own  to it as against the show... 

Wow! I must tell ya .. how much i admire this certain black beauty! Shadow for being such loyal to his master!!

I can so visualize Arnav with his new found adjudicate dismounting from the horse and walking sturdily past everyone at the temple towards Master. Gupta! 

And there! He said it! so firm and st. to the point! Offcourse engendering Master. Gupta shocked!
Who would not be for that matter!?

I appreciate the diligent effort from Master. Gupta to get to the cause of this impromptu proposal however intimidating the other person was!
Any father would not give away so easily! 

Yes Master.Gupta had his point that he was sure the lord was not going to be kind to his youngest!! My heart tugged when Arnav made a statement " I will take care of her as she deserves and is worthy of" That was so implicitly put forth much to Masters.Gupta's lack of knowledge to what it actually meant! Ouh dear Lord! This is going to be disastrous! 

Oh! Well! Now this explains most of the bits that were not clear when they happened! 
Master Gupta does not remember anything of the General at all! Thus when Shyam made a statement that it was only Madhumati he had needed to tale care of to get through with his ploy to Khushi!
It made me immensely relax at the fact that it was Arnav who realized this and put 2 and 2 together! I am sure this will be a key to the mystery he is yet resolve!  And offcourse Shashi's foreboding thought towards his daughter did ring bell in Arnav's mind! I hope he holds onto this and tries to get a clearer pic of the entire fiasco before taking drastic measures and punishing the innocent one!

My heart wept seeing a father's worry... especially if he was forced to act soon in giving away his youngest and the precious one in marriage to the man under whom he is still not convinced fully abt her being looked after well! And yet he has had to agree to go ahead with it!

Oh! Arnav! i really wish you will think from your heart and not let your mind arrive at conclusion with half baked information! 

Lin! Like i said the update is a  proof in itself that we are expected to get twists and turns that will surprise us to no extent! and i am ready to receive more such ones! :)

Thanks for a wonderful update! it has surely given me hopes !:)

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Jammy- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 12:57am | IP Logged
You my dear are true to your words! You are correcting the story! Lord Arnav is using his brians! And I cannot believe he actually asked Master Gupta for Khushi's hand, I was expecting him to go to Khushi directly but then again I forgot that he is respectful towards Master Gupta and then again he does have a reputation to maintain...the lord is a sensible man, yes he was angry, yes his blood was boiling with rage but he didn't let that cloud his judgment and make him do something totally irrational.

Lord Arnav is smart... he promised Master Gupta that he will take care of her as she deserves... smart play of words here!

I am so happy that Master Gupta raised his concerns for her safety that led to the Lord to think... this is awesome!

I cannot wait to see how Khushi reacts! This is going to be sensational! 

P.S- Deep down he knows his Khushi needs protecting... his other loved one.

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march2011 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged
again line,i would simply repeat I love ur version of arshi story...
I never imagined tht conversation bet arnav n sashi...hoping that the misunderstand will be cleared bet them

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123vava Senior Member

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Smile i loved the way arnav understanding thingsss...loveddd the updateee

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saga_twilight IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2013 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Clever. Very clever. Y0u mixed b0th the sharp mind and an angry s0ul int0 0ne. But "that she deserves"? Pfft!! What d0es Arnav kn0ws ab0ut what she deserves. It w0uld be interesting t0 see Khushi's rxn and Arnav's reacti0n 0ver Khushi's reacti0n

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revathysugathan Senior Member

Joined: 02 June 2012
Posts: 302

Posted: 16 June 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
WOWOWOWOW!!! I read the chapters all at once and I am glad to say, thank god!!! Finally ur version of IPK is starting now.
But the misunderstanding D'oh Cry I am bawling right now. My heart just sank through the floor when I read that. But at least he realizes that Babuji has seen the General transforming. Dead
I want to hate Jha but his helplessness make me feel bad for him too. But as hoopoe rightly wrote, the path matters too - even more so than the destination. Angry
At least Arnav has the sense to go to her father to ask for her hand rather than the hasty marriage it was in the original one! But it's gonna be a rude shock for Khushi when he starts being his cruel self after marriage Broken Heart Can't imagine that poor one's plight Broken Heart - I just hope he either talks to her or at least try and find out the truth rather than blame her and destroy the beautiful life they could have Ermm
Waiting for the next ones!!! Star

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