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ArHi FF:6:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES Ch 175 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh finally she kiss him
and he said sorru...my lord

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG these two were such amazing chapters
so happy you took the time to write them even during your break
and they were full of Arhi

love the ceremonies that you present. do they really exist or have you invented them?
anyway, their presentation and symbolism is just amazing

the lake encounter and what happened next was lovely
he just can't stay away from her
reminded me of the hut scene but in way better

the challenge scene now
how he enjoyed her touch
but when he saw her crying he could not help but say the word he almost never says, sorry

the "beggar" part I'm not really fond of but I guess he does it to rile her up
they are indeed equal opponents 

thank you and happy birthday Meg
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Posted: 11 years ago
AND I'M SUPPOSED TO WORK AFTER HAVING READ THAT?!?!?!  SERIOUSLY? 
 
I'm going to be useless the rest of the day...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rabba Ve dear AquiLINe,

Thanks for the surprise gifts of two updates before your real longgg break.

lovely updates, full of ARSHI.  they bumping into each other, the completion of the Loutra ceremony in their own way, though it was Akash and Payal's ceremony, the lovely storeroom moments loved them.  πŸ˜³

Anjali trying her best to act cupid for her brother and khushi,  The General slipped away but may not be able to do for too long.

and Khushi was trying to punish the Lordy... hey little did she know that she will have to pay for her mischief.  and what a way to pay ... 

and at last he said sorry and again Khushi got see the other side of Lord Arnav.

beautifully written sequences.

bablio


 


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Posted: 11 years ago
awe my favourite update so far...loved it...super sweet ...continue soon... 
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Posted: 11 years ago

Rabba ve dear Aquiline,

 
For the very first time, I felt im reading a dark love story... For the first time, I saw a dark shade in Lord Arnav...
 
 
 
I cannot stop but wonder about shass' foresight...
 
This content was originally posted by: shass


Kushi looked up when his fingers circled around her wrist and then he was pulling her to him.

his love for her is becoming dangerously too intense, breaking his control n driving him in ways he would least want to be moved in,his thoughts n actions are no more in control, only words..bitter words are his last stand against it all.. it makes me think, will it ever cross into madness? i suspect it may some day...

he had already held her stained hands in his and dipped them in the cold water that filled the trough. Violet mist swirled from her hands and spread out with the ripples to fade into the transparent water.

he's strangely too used to torture..he takes it easily..if at some point,he marked her his, will he torture her too?? how much of it will she bear? if he crosses into madness, what will it cost her?? how much of it will affect their life?



 
And, your words...
 

"The sun was beginning to set and the golden rays cast itself over the land. The two of them near the window, one struggling against the other, were silhouetted against the golden light and a cold breeze blew through the window, fluttering the curtains between which they stood"

 
 
I know these are inevitable, but still...πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”... I need some time to compose myself before I come back to admire the other beautiful moments of this chapter...
 
Edited by hoopoe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lin, m sad, n angry wid u..
Reason being, why do u give us such updates, when u ll make us wait for da next part for I dont kno how many days or months..
Its not at all fair 😭
Now coming to da update, khushi being khushi, some mischief is obviously expected..bt the punishment was too cute..
Loved their confrontation..seems like things r getting mended between them...
arnav liking the feelings!!!
Simply wawo...
Plz plz plz give da weak hearted readers like us, a bonus update, before u go on break again...plz πŸ˜›Edited by rockingsoni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u so much for updates dear😊
Both are beautifull update... He felt change in him when she is with him...
Thy took bath in together...
Unintentally full fill one ritual of wedding ..
Love the punsihment πŸ˜Š 
Tc 
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was really magical.Arnav was right Khushi was so wrong in choosing the mode of punishment.Loved this flirty side o Arnav.
Thanks for the update and have a happy break dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW
it was just too good
khushi kissed arnav and called him my lord
loved it