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Na Bole Tum Na Maine Kuch Kaha Season 2

OS-DARD MUJHE BHI HOTA HAI!!(part 2)

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Hi guys..
Thanks for such a good response to my first os..
I have decided to write a second part to it..
I hope u like it..
Ur feedback means a lot..
Well I wrote it dis morning but could not post it..
And atm I am not watching the episode...its basically on the precap..and also related to the prev part..
Link to part.1  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3527155


                           DARD MUJHE BHI HOTA HAI!!

Mohan is left confused..
He strokes his hand in his hair frustration "ab maine kya kiya yaar?"
Megha who was running towards the room in a hurry..banged into d dining table..
megha "aaoow"
Guru got up.."Are megha didi ap? Kya hua?kuch chaiye apko?"
Megha crying "mai thik hun guru"
Guru "ap ro kyun rae ho?"
Mohan came from the kitchen..
Guru "mohan bhaiya..ap soye nahi?"
Megha "mujhe ghar jana hai.."
Mohan "abhi?"
Megha "haan abhi.."
Mohan "tum pagal ho kya?"
Megha "mohan mujhe abhi ghar jana hai"
Guru interrupted.. "Didi raat ke 3 baj rae hain"
Mohan shouted "guru..maine gadi ki chabhi guard ko di hai usse leke aa.."
Megha "mai apne ap chali jaungi"
Guru moved forward to explain to megha..
Mohan shouted"suna nahi guru tune neeche ja"
Guru had to listen..he left..
Megha "apni gussa galat jagah kyun nikal rae ho?"
Mohan prefered not to answer..
He looked away..his back towards megha..
Megha whispered to herself "galti kisi ki..chillana kisi pe" moving to sit on d chair to see if she had herself..
Mohan heard it..and moved angrily towards megha..she clutched her arm..and made her face him..
He said "kya" in a high tone and then looked towards rimjhims room...lowering his voice..he continued...
"Kya galti hai meri?"
Megha "mujhe chodo"
Mohan moved his face closer to hers "mai kuch puch raha hun"
Megha "mai kuch keh rai hun"
Silence and a moment of looking into each others eyes..
Megha "chodo mohan lag rai hai mujhe"
Mohan loosend his grip..
megha "dard ho raha hai"
He left her..he moved towards her a bit more..with a jerk which made megha fall on d chair.."Dard mujhe bhi hota hai"
Megha "us dard ka ilaj toh dhund chuke ho na tum"
Mohan "kya keh rai ho?"
Megha "mai kya keh rai hun sach me nahig samajh rae ho ya nasamjhi ka natak kar rae ho?"
Mohan "logo se asliyat chupana,apne dil ki bat na batana meri adat nahi hai.." He said lowering his face towards megha who was sitting on d chair..
He decided to just chuck the matter..he turned to leave..
Megha "fir tumne doosri shaadi kyun ki?"
Mohan shocked turns towards her..
Mohan "kya bakwas kar rai ho tum?"
Megha "bakwas nahi sach hai ye..us shadi se tumhari doosri biwi hai..doosri beti hai..agar tumhe yei karna tha..toh mujhe jhoot bolke kyun gaye?kyun kaha ki tum lautoge..?"
Mohan "maine dusri shadi?dusri beti?"
Megha "haan mr.mohan bhatnagar mai sach janti hun.."
Mohan "nahi janti shayad"
Megha "kyun?rimjhim tumhari beti nahi hai?"
Mohan "hai..." He screamed.. "Par maine use god liya hai.."
Megha shocked..
Mohan "us samay jis samay shayad mujhe mere apno ne alag kar diya...us samay jis samay mere upar se apna bharosa tod diya..us samay jis samay megha ne mohan ko akela chodh diya"
He was crying..
And megha was crying too..
He continued "dard sirf tumhe nahi mujhe bhi hota hai megha..bas shayad hamara dikhane ke tareeke alag hain"
Megha could not believe this..
She moved towards him..
Megha "mo"
Mohan was in no mood to listen..
Mohan "bas..mujhe kuch nai sunna..mai driver ko bol deta hoon..wo ake tumhe le jaega"
He went inside the room..
Megha was left alone..crying..
Guru was standing on d door repenting his lie..!!


Edited by anodaksgfan - 10 April 2013 at 10:18am

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Awesome! As poetic as the actual scene telecasted today Day Dreaming

Thanks for the PM dear Hug

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmi279

Awesome! As poetic as the actual scene telecasted today Day Dreaming

Thanks for the PM dear Hug
Aww..u are first again..
Thank u..
I just cannot wait to watch d episode...
Damn these outings..lol..
Dontt want to read the WU..direct dekhna hi hai..

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Its too superb part

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Awesome..

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:49am | IP Logged
hey really nice os loved itApprove keep witing...

thanks for the pm..btw what's yuor name..?if you don't mind to say...

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:51am | IP Logged
kahi writer banane ka iradha to nahi yaar ho to chod dena nahi to galiya milegi kabi us ke fan denge kabi dusre ke fan. u are doing hard work. awesome post.

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged

superb..keep on writing

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