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ArHi SS : Trust - Chapter 10 in Page 106 (Page 89)

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy4ArnavSR

Khushi got a doubt and asked, "Are they really coming?"

"Of course, they are."

humein toh doubt tha hi...khushi, humari lead ko bhi doubt hone laga...LOLLOL

"I'll come with you."

He smiled and said, "Much better."

matlab..mauke ka fayada uthane me koi kam nahi h...Wink

Seriously? Arnav itna change ho gya...ShockedShocked Sachi bolu...ye meri personal suggestion h...yeh Arnav phir b theek h par isse jyaada change mat karna. kyunki more than this...phir woh thoda cheezy lagne lagta h. Atleast tht is my opinion. even in show i didn't use to like a very "cheezy" Arnav...Arnav is best loved when still there are traces of ASR in him..even though we may be talking of his 'Arnav' persona.

He touched his cheek and said, "Second time you are kissing me. Mind asking me why now?"

and later after he had proposed her...

She let out a chuckle in spite of her tears and then kissed his cheek.

His lips widened into a smile and he said, "Second kiss."

isn't it supposed to be third kiss? Confused waise if the kiss in car was 2nd...toh 1st kiss kaunsi thi? *scratching chin*

"I didn't know you were a stalker," Arnav told her.

"Excuse me? A stalker?"

"You are following the fish everywhere."

LOLLOL...A_R...seriously? stalker?ROFLROFL tht means i had been a stalker too for quite a while for certain fishes. LOLLOL 

the whole proposal scene was beautiful...the rimg, light effects,and the dialogues.

"Can I get you a ring, too?" she asked him.

He raised his eyebrow and then said, "But no selling your mother's jewellery?"

Her eyes widened.

"I know about the plants, Khushi."

i had be very interested to know if u would like to mention sometime later HOW??? how did he know? i want to know...what u would come up with for this one... (maine tumhe ek task de diya...LOL...kabhi kabhi tumhe pareshaan karne me itna mazaa aata h..Tongue)

Matlab...khade-khade shaadi bhi kara di...ShockedShockedShocked! Badiya h! LOL 

so all together very nice update! *high five**wink*




hiii, captain...
it was 2nd kiss coz it was 2nd for the day...
and arnav is a bit too romantic...thats coz i wrote this chapter as soon as i finished a chapter of waiting for u...LOLWink
i will finish ur task soon...Wink

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AnjuRish

so cute ...:)
pls dnt have a seperation track now...pls pls make them expose shyam first
u are amazing writer add me n PM list fr all stories


thanks doe ur comment...
i'll assure you there will be no separation track...
i havnt really thought about shyam...i'll see what i can do...

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jahnvi.luvs.ASR

aww that was beautiful...the best part was his proposal and then her buying a ring for him and then the explanation he gave for what exactly happened in the shop and what it means to him...loved it :)


hi...nice picture...liked it...

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by clairvoyance

the chapter is awesome

so glad with arnav of this ss
most times jealousy is used as a tool  but it doesnt mean it yield btter results. So it was great of arnav to clear her that he can shoo away anyone who comes near him ..and he only belongs to Khushi.
thankfully he didnt apply any jealousy tactics by flirting.
jealousy is not always a good option to convey love.It can be damaging. but glad u hv written a sensible arnav which is rare in india forums fan fictions

and  the age difference of arnav-khushi make the chemistry more sizzling thats why star plus went for it.  I dont consider it any strange.
infact  some researches by AC-nielson says 18 yr olds  prefer matured men of late twenties with masculine personality, someone who is MAN in complete sense.




thanks for ur comment...
i wanted an arnav who won't be jealous...in fact in my other ff, arnav will be jealous...and i wanted it to be different...that's how this sensible arnav came...

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Titaliya1234

Nice ss... Read all the chapters in 1 go...loved it..Arnav wanted to protect khushi frm shyam...bt there s no news f shyam...feeling good while reading abt this
lovey - dovey couple...thnx fr d pm...


thanks for ur comment...
i didnt want to bring in shyam in this ss...maybe i'll do something abt it...
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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Hey Major...finally! Finally...I get to know u r still alive troubling people on earth...! This time I m really really mad at u...hell! Girl...who disappears like tht... I ws just planning to leave another text screaming at u tonite...

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Divyahet




for the next update...please continue soon...


ur wait is at an end...updating today...

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Posted: 10 August 2013 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy4ArnavSR

Hey Major...finally! Finally...I get to know u r still alive troubling people on earth...! This time I m really really mad at u...hell! Girl...who disappears like tht... I ws just planning to leave another text screaming at u tonite...


did u check ur mail, captain...? i sent u a little one on friendship day...
as for the disappearance from IF, it is coz i sat in one stretch for the past ten days and completed waiting for you...Smile

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