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CHAP-1 & 2
the most astonishing aspect of this ff...is the way u steered the story away from the usual track...yet maintaing the desired traits of the two characters.
1st chap was really powerful...a very gripping chapter. And like i told u earlier, after reading it, i strongly felt tht u have just explored another dimension to ur writing style..! U have another amazinf feather added to ur cap.. I m way too impressed with it! βοΈ
And then...the way u held the reins in an absloutely opposite different direction with the 2nd chap...was awesome too.
It was grateful to see tht it wasn't actually happening...wat u made us all think is happening...tht was really heart-gripping...the CLIFF HANGER! Phew...thank god...i happened to read the first two chaps together else i would have either died out of curiosity of what happens next or i might have somehow drilled the story out of u...without having to wait...and the very day i would have read! πππ
All i can say for this Brilliant OS is-
U BLEW MY MIND!
Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 10 years ago