amazing update
continue soon
Originally posted by: -PariKCRes
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Fabous, amazing
will be waiting next update
Liked it a lot and yippie I'm firstπ
Originally posted by: rana5I was expecting Khushi to die! I am glad she didn't 't. This is so emotional, your writing has developed well. I am so glad to be reading this story. Update soon.
Originally posted by: dumasAWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT GLAD HE ASKED HER INSTEAD OF TRYING TO FORCE HER WAITING FOR HER TO TELL HIM THE TRUTH AWESOME UPDATE CAN'T WAIT FOR HIS REACTION THANKS FOR THE PM
Originally posted by: sinam1kanaHey read ur os today. When i read tat khushi met with an accident and wat she said to arnav, i felt really happy nt bcz i dont like her, bcz there wnt be any mre misunderstandings between them. Anyways, if khushi had met with an accident, nothing would happen to her when arnav and his love will make sure nothing to her. U tried to show to 2 different possibilities which cn happen after the terrace scene. You, instead writing 2 different os, wrote single os combining both the ideas. And coming to room scene, arnav's way of questioning khushi indirectly was good. He gave time to himself to get out of angerness . His mind was in a position to take correct decisions. And our laad governor always takes correct decisions. U showed it in this. UnLike in ipknnd , u didnt allow him to make a mistake. Thank u very much. Cn u pm for the next part?
Originally posted by: hetaldaveDear it's just an awesome update..totally superb.π
Arnav wants to give her a chance ...liked it.
The best part of this update...
"KHUSHI WAS WORRIED FOR ARNAV.SHE HAD NEVER SEEN HIM SO SAD.SHE HAD SEEN HIM ANGRY.
"Angry..? Most of the time.
Smiling...? May be a little.
Sad...? On his parent's death anniversary.
Expressionless...? Never.
Last part of this update make me nervous and little bit happy.
Nervous because she told him the name...the other woman in Shyam's life.(I hope Arnav will listen her calmly.)
Happy because may be Arnav will listen her and he will trust her.What is the next step they will take..are they going to plan to trap Shyam or they will get Marry..?
Please Update as soon as possible.Unable to wait for one week..
Thanks for the pm dear.
Originally posted by: sooryalekshmiThat was just an imagination???
Idiot...dont you have anything ekse to imagine?
U made me xry... U nade ne worry...
Bevajeh...
And koved the update.. .
The ending was just perfect...
He said that his jijaji had an affair..
But nothing like te gal also in love with him...
So any problems...or any thing to worry
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