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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Padmpriya


hey realy very lovely poem...and nice lovely wordings...!!!!!

     
great job...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘

Thank you so much Padmpriya...πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Bhavanab


The Abhijeet sir poem is ...
Good job with this thread ... hoping for many more such ones !!

Thanks di...πŸ˜ƒ
Abhijeet sir is my fav.😳
Thank you so much di...πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Misha di..Im really at a loss of words...Such amazing poems!! Loved reading them!!! ABHIJEET SIR'S poem is just Wooowww!!! pages ara not sufficient to describe him!!😳😳
i loved the last poem especially... A true msg!!πŸ‘Keep writing!!πŸ˜ƒ
 
Plz check out my poems thread with the title "Poem for all my friends-See Pg 5"πŸ˜ƒ and do commentπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Raaz_sweet - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Raaz_sweet


Misha di..Im really at a loss of words...Such amazing poems!! Loved reading them!!! ABHIJEET SIR'S poem is just Wooowww!!! pages ara not sufficient to describe him!!😳😳
i loved the last poem especially... A true msg!!πŸ‘Keep writing!!πŸ˜ƒ


Plz check out my poems thread with the title "Poem for all my friends-See Pg 5"πŸ˜ƒ and do commentπŸ˜ƒ

Thank You so much Reshma for ur cuite comment...πŸ€—
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Yes i read ur poem too and post my comment in page 7. Check it.
Ur poem is so lovely for friends...πŸ€—
Posted: 10 years ago
lovely and cute poems misha dear πŸ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by misha.as




Zindgi hai ek jang,
iske kai hai rang,
our jab apne ho sang,
to jagti hai naye umage.

Rakho apne hausle buland
kahi kut na jaye koi patag.

Jab aankhe ho nam,
tab mat bhoolo
tumhare apne hai
hamesa tumhare sang.

Har mor, har dagar,
hai ek chunouti,
aur roho ne le li hai mukhuoti.

Mat bhoolo phulo main,
hamesha rahati hai sugandh.
Aur laharo main tarang.

Dheere dheere hi sahi par,
jeet jayenge ham ye jang.
 
v.nice nd true poem mishaπŸ‘πŸ€—
U r right dear,
                         😊zindgi hai ek jung
                jeet lenge hum har ek baazi,
                       agar apane ho sang.πŸ˜›
 
keep writing yaarπŸ˜›
nd all d best 4 nextπŸ‘πŸΌ
Edited by cutie006 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by rukhsar.crazy


lovely and cute poems misha dear 😊

thanks rukhsar...πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by cutie006



v.nice nd true poem mishaπŸ‘πŸ€—

U r right dear,

                         πŸ˜Šzindgi hai ek jung

               jee lenge hum har ek baazi,

                      agar apane ho sang.πŸ˜›


keep writing yaarπŸ˜›</font>

nd all d best 4 nextπŸ‘πŸΌ


Thank you so much cuite...πŸ€—
ha apane hai hamesa sangπŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely poem on abhijeet sir dear.. but as i said it can be done without "sir" too πŸ˜‰

I will read others soon πŸ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by snehal.


Lovely poem on abhijeet sir dear.. but as i said it can be done without "sir" too πŸ˜‰

I will read others soon 😊

ok.
I will do in my next poem πŸ˜‰

thank u...πŸ€—
Waiting for ur next commentπŸ˜‰
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