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Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

virman story... past and futur...

crazyfansana Newbie
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged

hey gyuz i'm sana ...i'm writing a story...my first story in india 
forum...so plz comment it and tell me how was it ...

character sketch:
manvi sharma:
Nia Sharmashe was a bubly girl who was in love with the life but... Cry(u will know in the story)
she lives in mumbai with riya her close friend for her she is the close but not for riya...and manvi  is orphan..



virat vadhera:...sorry can't give the pic but he is virat and i know u know thatWink

he is very nice love life and live in mumbai with his close friend rahul...


riya mehra:...sorry can't give the pic but she is jeevika

she is bubly very naughty and she is very jalous of manvi ...she loves life... and lives with manvi...and has a boyfriend names rahul..riya doesn't tell manvi because she thinks that manvi will take rahul from her...


rahul kapoor:
he is very hot and flirty...yes he is flirty...but loves life ...he has a girlfriend names riya mehra...
live with virat vadhera...


i know my english is very bad and i'm sorry for that Cry...now if i have good comments then i will continue plz comment...Smile

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
have u changed ur user name.continue soonBig smile
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
yeah i have a probleme so i change the user name...thanx i will continu soon...
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waitin for the update,.,,:)

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
heyy .. nice concept ..
plz cont. soon n do PM me Smile
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
nice concept
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
at 9am:

Manvi was in the tarrace...she was talking to her parents :
Manvi: mummy,papa...mere saath hi bura kyun hota hai kyun...aap hi kehte the na ki ache insan ke saath hamesha acha hi hota hai...toh kya main achi nhi hu...nhi hu ( she start crying)
Pehle aap chor kar chale gae aur fir di bhi chor kar chali gaii aur fir...fir ( crying)

Scene shift at virats office:

Virat (angry): tum aise kaise ise fir kar sakte ho...molike tum pagal hogae ho...pata hai voh humare kitne kam
Ati thi shit man...

Molike was his collegue

Molike: are yr tu fikar mat kar humeh use bhi achi larki mil jae gi..main kal ke news peper mein aad karta hu ki humeh koii achi larki chahiye vvc ke liye aur tu kal kisi ka selection kar lena thik hai..bas gussa mat ho yr...

Virat: okay..jaldi karo humeh ek heafteh baad london bhi jana hai meeting ke liye...

Molike: okay and he runs to leave..

( virat is the boss of vvc virat vadhera compagny ...today a girl run away just because of virats anger yes virat jab angry ho jae to uske baad kisiko nhi pata hota ki kya hone wala hai...bohotsare. kam karne se darte hai virat vadhera ke )

Next day at 11am:

Manvi wake up and saw a news peper on the table...she start reading...
Manvi:virat vadhera compagny ko talash ek hunar larki ki saleri 40000 hazar...selection day: .../.../13
Manvi yeh parkar tujeh kuch nhi milne wala...lekin kahi aisa to nhi ki tu riya pr boj bane jarahihai riya bhi to kam karti hai toh tu kyun nahi...main kal apna selection kra kar rahu gi...and she smile Smile

Thats it guyz plz comment and tell me how was it!!!
Juties and tomatoes are welcome Wink

Promo: virman meeting

Bye Smile

Edited by crazyfansana - 10 April 2013 at 7:47am

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nice!

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