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KRIYAANSH OS: b'day with a blast (Page 6)

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Posted: 12 April 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Hey Guyzz...ok..now d wait is over...I came up wid d 1st part..of os..n thnq soo much for ur lovely comments...Smile



PART-1


swayam and taani in basketball court...

ta: kya hua bhai kuch kaam hai kya..??

sw:nahi taani yeh report tumhe deni thi thtz it..

ta:kk..

sw: tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..??

ta: kuch nahi bhai woh kuch kaam se yaha aayi thi..

by then swayam's cell starts ringing...
swayam sees the caller ID.. it was his DAD..

swayam excuses himself n picks the call..
(as current track swayam's dad doesnt lyk him coz he went against his father for dance.)

sw:hello dad..

sw'd: woh taani ka phone connect nahi ho raha so.. woh hai waha (In a rude voice)

sw: ji dad woh mere saath hi hai..

sw'd: nahi usse rehne do.. woh uska b'day kal hai so mujhe ek company ne goa mein ek resort ka 1 day holiday  package diya hai.. so woh kal uska B'day hai..so  waha mana sakhti hai..

sw: par dad taani woh apne b'day enjy nahi karegi.. bina aapne friends ke..

sw'd: tumhari advice ki zaroorth nahi hai mujhe.. woh aapni friends ko bhi invite kar sakti hai...

sw: ji dad mein usse keh doonga..

And he cuts the phone call, and goes back to his sis...

sw: hmm so tanni kal tumhara b'day hai ri8

ta: woh haa hai toh

sw: kuch plans hai tumhare b'day ke liye..

ta:plans.. nahi toh meine koi plan nahi banaya..

sw: haa waisse  bade hone ke baad kya b'day plans...

ta: haa bhai baade hone ke baad kya plans n all..(in a low voice..)

sw: tekh hai mein chalta hoon bye..

swayam gathers a meeting to discuss for taani's b'day celebrations ...

everyone in rehersal hall except taani..

sw: guyzz dad ko goa mein ek resort se 1 day holiday package mila hai so.. mein soch raha hoon ki 

taani ka b'day hum goa mein celebrate karenge..

si: hum means hum sab..!! wow goa nyc idea..

ni: haa swayam it's a great idea..

rey: par swayam...

vi: tujhe kya problem hai rey...goa jane mein

rey: par mein aur taani..

sw: rey hum sab goa jarahe hai bas its final..

vi: arey yaar tu taani se waha celebrate karle privately..(let's see kaisa karta hai..)

all gang started teasing him..

re: par guyzz taani ko kya bolke waha goa mein lekhe jayenge..

sw: hum usse keh denge ki college ka ek fest waha ho raha hai.. thtzz it..

re: ok kool..

sw: usse koun baat karenga..

vi: obviously rey karega.. afterall rey ki girlfrind hai..(I guess worst line..ever..)

then sharon..interrupts

sh: guyzz i'm not intersted in comin..tum log jao..

sw: par sharon kyun.. hum sab jaa rahe hai na..

si: sharon comm on yaar chalo na plzz

sw: sharon plzz chalo..aur taani ko tumse koi problem nahi hogi..

Sh:well..I don't care...she said rolling her eyes

Re:sharon plzz

Sh:am sry rey..bt I can't 

Sw:sharon please...he said making a puppy dog face...

sh: kk..(unwantedly)


Then everyone disperse... rey goes to taani for manofing to go to goa..

(guyz i dont want to describe tht taa... convo.. kyunki i'm not interested in  dem...)

The very next day...
In Goa..

kriya after she left mumbai leaving her friends.her passion,her love everything.. she shifted

to Goa and continued her studies over der..Here kriya started a new life wid new frndz her gang..

prithiv,sanju,KD,kia,ranbir,panchi,raghav (i mean DID..kroackraoz..)...now they were the only friends

which kriya had at present..But swayam was always kriya's best friend ...

prithiv-sanju,ranbir-panchi are couples n KD is trying to propose kia wheras raghav has feelings

towards kriya but didnt express dem..

AT PRESENT:

kriya wid her frndzz came to an outing to the same resort..which swayam's dad has booked...
Whole gang reached resort..


In RESORT...

Boys n Girls were in separate rooms... some were unpacking der stuffs n all..some went to freshen up demselfs..

later after sometym everyone in  garden enjying  to d core... each 1 in der own world..

The resort was such an amazing one..And added to that the weather was so pleasant...A PERFECTSCENARIO 

It was a perfect place for holiday destination or a kinda celebration..!!! 

The garden was very huge and which  was indeed  two parts...one was on d side of swimming pool n 

the other towards the play area..


kriya wid her gang near the swimming pool side..swayam n all exactly opposite to dem..

sanju- arey u boys are so boring yaar...hum yaha enjy karne aaye hai..aur tum log yaha kuch bhi nahi kar rahe ho yaar..

kia- yaa sanju is ri8..

prithvi: madam hum Aisa kya kare..

sa:hmm hum lets play something..

pr- kk par kounsa game sanju dear..

sa-kk its  a challenge game... some1  twirls the bottle aur jisko bhi turn aayega...dey had to accept

the any challenge frm opposit person kk guyzz

Raghav:u can directly say truth or dare rite...

Sa: yaa fibe..so letz start the game..

Dey started to twirl d bottle..n itz panchi n ranbir..turn

pr- hmm toh moti... tera challenge yeh hai ki.. tu ek gana gaa.

pa- hmm kk...

here she starts her song..n ranbir starts playing guitar...

pa- (frm KAI PO CHE..!!!)
Kuch lamhe thhe
Alsaaye se
Bharmaaye se
Fiza mein
Kabhi sehme se
Muskaate
Jaana kidhar
Na Jaane

Meethi boliyan sun lo
Aasmani rangon ki
Meethi boliyan sun lo
Bezubaani lamhon ki
Girte sambhalte chalte ladkhadaye
Haan magar ye honsla na dagmagaye
Armaano ke patang ko udaayen
Udaayen...

Pr- Wah wah kya baat hai. amazing..yaar..

pa- thnq u thnq u..

next is raghav aur kriya...

sa- hmm guyzz inko kya challenge de..

ki-hmm raghav tum log couple dance karo...

ra- ok... (goes towards kriya.) can i hv the pleasure to dance wid u..

kriya accepts his proposal...

sa-wooh wooh kriya kriya...

But sanju was loud enough...n swaym heard dis and he was lyk kriya...

Then raghav n kriya were dancing on the song... ( tumho paas mere..saath mere ho... frm ROCKSTAR...)

They wer swaying to the ryhthm of the song...kriya's back was facing the gang which is just opposite 

then slowly she was facing towards the gang and swayam noticed a girl similar to kria who  was dancing...wid a boy...he then makes sure whether she'z kriya or not n starts peeping..n finally makes clear tht it was kriya only...his best friend...

kriya feels some1 eyes on her..watching her frm opposite side n peeps to see who'z he.. but

she was at state of shock seeing swayam der.. suddenly within a second she ran away frm tht place...raghav was stunned wht happend to her suddenly...n followed her...

she  sat on a bench which was far apart...frm d gang..

kriya's gang reached der..

rag- kriya kya hua.. y u ran lyk tht..??

kr- raghav woh raghav..( tears formed der way )

pr: hey kya hua kyun ro rahi ho...kriya..

kr-my friendz woh mumbai wale der r here... swayam ne mujhe dekh liya...

ra- toh kya hua itz kk...

kr-itz not kk raghav i dont wont dem to meet me again..

ra: accha kk yaha se chalte hai come lets go...

After an hour kriya all alone in garden..

Kr:(self talk)swayam yaha kya kar raha hai... aur swayam  tumhe itne dino ke baad dekh rahi hu

kaisse ho aur rey kaisse honge.. kya woh move hua.. ya nahi...

swayam from back..

sw:kriya...

she turnd back in an alarm by his voice..
 swayam was standing wid tearful eyes...she immediately turned..n was about to go..

swayam came forward n stopped in front of her...she was also at the verge of crying..

he immediately hugged her very tight..she too responded him..

sw: (hugging) kaha chali gayi thi kriya.. hum sab ko chod kar chali gayi..y??

kr: swayam.. n narrated the whole story..

sw:ek baar mujhe keh dithi thi kya hua.. mein aunty se baat kartha na kriya.??

kr: swayam mom nahi manegi aur woh sab chodo yeh bolo ki tum kaisse ho..?

sw: haa kriya mein tekh..aur yeh baata ki tum yaha kya kar rahi ho..??

kr: mumbai chod ne ke baad mein yaha goa aa gayi...aur yaha mere friendz ke saath outing pe aayi hoon..

sw: accha naya frindz hmm... aur woh ladka koun tha..woh tumse dance kar raha tha na...

kr:woh raghav mera dost.. swayam woh rey...she asked hesitating 

sw:kriya rey tumhare jane ke baad bahut tut gaya par abhi woh woh...

kr: woh kya.. swayam..

sw: apne life mein move on ho chuka hai.. woh ab mere behan taani se pyaar kartha hai..

kriya was completely broken frm inside n woh pretend kar rahi ki usse koi farak nahi pad raha hai..

kr: oh.. mein yahi chahti thi..ki rey apne life mein move on...she couldn't complete...d sentence
Our swayam noticed it...

sw: kriya mein nahi janta hoon ki tum dono ke beech us pre-valentine's day ke din kya hua.. par kriya mein janta hoon ki tum dono ek dusre se pyaar karthe ho... aur mein janta hoon ki tum rey se abhi pyaar karthi ho..

kr: swayam shayad mere kismat mein pyaaar naam ki chese hi nahi hai shayad aur ab mein rey se dubara nahi mila chahti...i can't face him  swayam..plzz

sw: par kriya..

kr: swayam mujhe jana hai so bye... apna khayal rakna..

sw: kriya...he called out..

And without turning she left frm der... swayam was crying..

                                             swayam's (self talk)


kriya tum ne yeh sab kyun kiya... humare liye na...kyun kriya tum itne acchi ho..kriya kyun...

rey tumse bahut pyaar kartha hai par woh taani se...mujhe tumhe rey se milwahna hoga kriya..

aur mein rey ko sab kuch bata doonga.. tum rey se abhi bhi pyaar karthi hona kriya... toh tum dono ki

ek hona hi padega.. mein tumhe essa nahi dekh saktha hoon... mujhe kuch karna padega...


by then sharons comes over der...

sh: swayam tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..??

she sees him crying nd..

sh: swayam ro kyun rahe ho..??she asked concerned

sw: sharon woh kriya yahi hai... woh mumbai issliye chod kar gayi hai kyun ki... n naarates whole thing..

sh: swayam kya kriya rey se pyaar karthi thi?? ... par usne rey ke saath essa kyun kiya..

sw: sharon us ko majboori thi...

sh: aur swayam mujhe lagta hai ki rey apne life mein move on karne ki koshish kar raha par hua nahi

woh samaj raha hai ki woh taani se pyaar kartha hai.. woh kriya se abhi bhi pyaar kartha... shayad

mujhe essa he lagta swayam.. jab bhi mein rey ko dekhti hoon toh.

sw: haaa sharon mujhe bhi essa he lagtha hai.. humein kuch karna hoga..

sh: haa we hav to confirm tat rey still loves kriya or not...I hope he does..

sw: aur abhi jab mein kriya se baat kiya na... tab muhje laga ki kriya na rey se abhi bhi pyaar karthi hai..

sh: kk then pehle rey kriya se pyaar kartha hai ki nahi yeh confirm karte hai.. 

sw: haa ab humara MISSION KRIYAANSH..!!!!!! start...

Swaron:(both in unison ) : letzz do dis...!!!!!!!!! Dey said grinning wide...

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Phew...finally done...last part nxt week..

Hope u'll liked it..

do lyk n comment...criticism welcomed..

 precap dena bhool hi gayi...

PRECAP: kriyaansh aamne samne... kya hoga jab rey aur kriya ek dusre ke aamne samne aayenge toh...
aur humare swaron ki dimmag mein kuch plans hai kriyaansh ko milwane ka..n THE BLASTWink


so guyzz keep thinking...

Lots of love...
-deepsha












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