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KRIYAANSH OS: b'day with a blast (Page 12)

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HeartSmile                 A B'DAY WITH A BLAST..!!!!

recap:

kriya's gang masti... kriyam meet... and swaron's mission "KRIYAANSH"...

PART 2:(last part)

The gang was busy making preparations for taani's b'day.swaron ke dimaag mein kuch kichdi pak rahi hai kriyaansh ko milane ka. kriya and her gang was staying in other side of the resort.

ni:arey vicky mein ne kaha ki koi flavour ka cake order karo.. phir yeh green ka flavour kya hai...
vi: nil yeh toh pista flavour hai yaar... bahut aacha flavour hai...
ni: bhukkad kahi ka...

so there comes the b'day girl (taani the nanni..)

taani came stood front of the cake... vicky nil were fighting on the cake issue still n nil pushed vicky to which vicky fell on taani n taani fell on the cake... now cake allover taani's face by seeing this everyone started laughing..dis happened accidently..
ta:yuck... vicky nilesh tum log yeh...
vi: arey taani u dont know aaj kal b'day parties esse hi manate hai...
ni: haa haa vicky ur ri8...cake ko b'day girl par marna (covering der mistake)
ta: mein abhi aati houn...
sh: swayam tum jaake kriya ko kaisse bhi manake yaha lao..
sw:kk... n he went

on the other side of the resort.. swayam came to meet kriya.

sw:kriya kaisi ho tum.. r u okay..???
kr: yaa swayam par tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...
sw: woh kriya i came to invite u to my sister's b'day party.. plz tum waha aajao..
kr:nahi swayam mujhe kuch kaam hai..
sw: nahi kriya tumhe koi kaam nahi hai mujhe pata hai... par kriya tum sab se milkar accha feel karogi.. humari gang.. kriya..
kr:swayam par re...
sw: kriya rey ke wajah se apne dosto ko nahi milogi.. hume nahi milogi plz kriya..
kr:kk mein aaogi..
sw:kk then letz go..
kr:haa..

they both reached the b'day party venue..

first one to see kriya was neha.. rey was completely at a state of shock...

ne:kriyaa...
she came running hugged kriya very tightly.
tum kaha chali gayi kriya.. tumhe baata hum tumhe kitna miss karte hai..aur vishaka ka bhi chali gayi..
kr: neha even i missed u so much...
ne: kriya par tujhe kya esse achnak chali gayi...
sw: woh kya hai na...
kr: nahi swayam.. plzz..
sw:kriya bolne do jab tumne mujhe baataya hai.. yeh logo ko bhi baatana chahiye na.. 
she kept quiet n looked at rey... n then a tear escaped from her eyes.

swayam narrated th e whole incident n everyone were now crying... even swayam..
then the whole weakling gang hugged kriya... then followed by sharon,simi,rinni...

sh: so miss kripa... sry kriya... tum hume ek baar nahi keh sakti ke essa hua..
kr:sharon.. aap mujhe...
sh: haa nahi bula sakti..sry kriya meine tumhe bahut sathaya hai na.. bahut insult kiya na..
kr:no sharon its okay..

and the both hugged each other...finally ice aur fire ek ho gaye...

rey didnt understand how to react to go n hug her n get her back.. or to feel guilty tht he didnt understand her emotions tht day...
he stood der numb n then taani entered n she she everyone were calm.. n then when she saw kriya...
ta: aap koun ho...
sw: yes... she's kriya meri best friend... (hugging her side wards..)
ta: ohh..(acting as if she dont know her..)
The party started n everyone wer enjoying except kriyaamsh n swaron... kriyaansh wer busy looking at each other controlling der emotions talking through der eyes..
swaron wer thinking how to make kriya n rey kriyaansh...

the party ended and everyone were in der respective rooms... rey on the terace of the resort crying bitterly... the girls kept taani busy  
not letting her go to rey..as his hurt... swayam went to rey who was on terace..

sw:rey.. tu tekh hai na..
re: swayam kriya... ne..(crying)
sw: sambhal aapne aap ko... rey yeh baata ki tu kriya se abhi bhi pyaar kartha hai...
re:swayam muhje ussi din samaj jana chahiye tha ki kriya essa kabhi nahi kar sakti...par mein..
sw: rey woh sab purani baata chod de aur yeh baata ki tu abhi bhi kriya se pyaar kartha ki nahi...
re: haa... kartha houn or humesha kartha rahoonga afterall she's my first love...
sw:toh tu jaa aur kriya se bol ke abhi usse pyaar kartha hai..
re: par swayam kriya hai kaha...
sw: woh waha ek building hai na opposite mein waha...
re:par waha sab honge na.. uske friends...
sw: ek min... mein  sharon se kisse bhi tarah kriya ko terace par le jane ke liye kahoonga.. tu usse waha baat karle..
re: haa yeh tekh hai..
he was about to go when swayam spoke..
sw:rey... tu aapna adoori prem kahani pura kar ke he lout...
re: haa swayam...i'll get her back...

sharon some how convinced kriya n  she bought her to terace wer  rey was already present.. on seeing rey sharon went from der..

re: kriya...
after hearing her name from his mouth... she felt so emotional... she was waiting to hear this from 1 year...she felt weak..
rey came towards kriya... he slowly touched her cheeks... cupped her face...
re: kriya kyun kiya tumne essa... kya tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti..??
kr:rey... n couldnt control her self n just hugged him tight...
re: kriya tum mujhe ek baar baata dethi ki essa hua phir hum dono milkar kuch karte na.. par tumne essa kyu kiya..
kr: rey uss waqt mein yahi karti aur mom ke kilaaf nahi jaa sakti thi..
re: kk tumhare paas choice nahi thi.. kk... agar mein tumhare jaagah hota toh yahin kartha..par kriya mein tumse bahut pyaar kartha houn ab hum yeh sab bhul kar hum ek nahi shuruwat karte hai..

she just turned away from him..
re: kriya kya hua...?? tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti...
kr: rey aap toh taani se pyaar karte ho na..
re: kriya mujhe nahi baata ki mein taani se pyaar kartha ya nahi... par mujhe sirf yeh baata hai ki mein tumse pyaar hai.. aur tum hi ho meri zindagi...
plzz kriya mein mantha houn ki meine tumhare jane ke baad move on hone ke liye try ki par mein taani se pyaar nahi kartha..plzz kriya
mujhe believe karo..
kr: mein aape trust karthi houn par...
re:shshssshh... par war kuch nahi..
he was coming towards her n she slowly stepped back... her back hit the wall n she didnt have any choice n stopped closing
her eyes...
re:baatcutter tumne mujhe butterfly kiss diya hai na shivam ki party mein ab mein tumhe pyaar wali kiss dunga..
he slowly took his lips into her n they both kissed eachother... showing der love for eachother...

kr: rey par taani...
sw:woh hum usse samjaa denge... (swaron entered)
sh: haa.. i'm so happy for u both...
four of dem hugged... 
sw:kriya rey tum log yaha se jao... go from here... iss waqt tum dono ek saath raho...
sh: haa rey tum kriya ko mumbai leke chale jao... hum tumhe waha 2 days baad milenge..
sw: agar taani ko yeh yeh baata chlega.. toh situations will become worse... baata nahi ki woh kaisse react karegi...mein usse samjaa dunga...  ( think taani is a pysco type)
sh: haa yaa i think swayam is ri8 u  both should go...
re: kk... chalo kriya...
sw: hey tum log taani ke chinta mat karo...i'll handle her..


And kriya took the early flight n went back to mumbai.




the next morning...

bechari taani ko ek bada sa blast milgaya aapne b'day ke din ki rey usse chod kar chale gaye... swaron usse bahut samjaaye... she was alright nw almost.. kyun ki rey aur taani ke beech
utna pyaar nahi tha jitna kriyaansh mein pyaar tha.. so she became kk...they returned back to mumbai..
aur waha humari kriyaansh ek hogaye humesha humesha ke liye...kriyaansh ke liye kriya ki mom maan gayi aur un dono ki engagement bhi fix hogi thi...





P.S: humari kriyaansh ko koi nahi alag kar sakti... kyun ki woh log ek dusre ke liye he bane hai... aur unhe koi koi bhi alag nahi kar saktha...
"KRIYAANSH FOREVER N FOREVER..."... will always love kriyaansh...dis OS is specially for kriyaansh as we dont have kriyaansh existing ri8 now but they will Always be EXISTED in our hearts...Heart KRIYAANSH FOREVER...SmileHeartSmile



lots of love
-deepsha...Heart


do lyk n comment..
any typo-errors sry..
criticism allowed...



Edited by deepshakriya - 15 May 2013 at 1:18am

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