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My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5 (Page 3)

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                                                                BEHNE DE MUJHE BEHNE De………

 

Geet Handa college se wapas aarahi hai…..

Geet is very excited ki kal usske college mein Dancing competition hai…..

Geet aaj full on rehearsal karegi…..

Ranno ko toh Geet ne pehle hi warn kardiya ki aaj koi guests nahi….

Aur mr.Handa is going to be her judge….

Geet unkke suggestions lekhe corrections karegi….

Aaj Geet jaldhi hi college se nikalgayi….

Pinky ko chodkke akhele hi aagayi….

Bus se utharkke apne dress lene masterji ke paas jaathi….

Masterji as usual dher karthe hai…

Geet is very angry…..she is losing her rehearsal time…..

Handaji ne kaha ki woh lekhe aayenge, lekhin Geet ko patha hai ki Geet kudh nahi gayi toh kal ke liye dress tayaar nahi hogi…..

After a long wait Geet gets her dress……

She hops back to the bus stop……

But this time nature plays spoil sport….

It's getting darker and the clouds are getting ready to pour….

Usually Geet ko baarish pasand hai…

Lekhin aaj toh Geet babaji se dua karthi ki ye rain ko thode dher rokhe…..

Geet hears thunder striking and she is afraid of it…..

She looks around and takes shelter in a nearby building….

Aaspaas koi ghar ya shop bhi nahi hai……

Ye koi building under construction hai….

Kisska hoga….KC ka…..toh ye Maan Singh Khurana ka sight hai……

Geet is very carefull that her new dress is not spoiled ….

If it was another day she would have danced in the rain…..

But this time it's scary….it's a bit violent with strong winds and lightning…..

Geet uss building ke andar jaathi hai….ye toh abhi bhi puri nahi hui….

Therefore no electriciry….only a single light chal raha tha…

Par suddenly power shuts down and it's complete dark inside…..

Geet switches on her mobile and stands shivering in a corner…..

She could hear the violent storm and things are  blown away by it…..

She is afraid that she would get hurt and she shuts the entrance door….

She waits for the rain to stop and it slows down a bit….

The clouds clear and the moon shines……

There is an open space at the centre of the building and  she could see the sky clearing from there…

It's still drizzling but it's not scary anymore….

Geet looks up and finds that it's a four storey building and there is no sign of anyone in……

She cannot go outside until the power comes back….

It's still dark and Geet is afraid to step out……

Babaji ye kya ho gaya? mein kal kaise jeethoongi?

Mera competition ka kya hoga?

Geet is now worried about her competition…..

Ab tak toh ussko ghar jaake apne rehearsals shuru karne chahiye……

Lekhin lagtha hai ki ab yahan se jaana mushkil hai……

Kya karein? Geet ko ab thoda dhar lagtha…….

Aaise hi akele beitkke sochegi toh aur dar jayegi……

Geet has got a plan….

Why not practice for the competition here…..

Yahan toh koi nahi hai aur Geet ke mobile pe gaana bhi hai…..

Geet switches on the song and starts dancing in the rain…….

Aaise toh Geet thode dher apne dar ko baga sakthi….

Kyunki dar ke aage jeet hai? haina babaji?

Ab Geet sach mein apne iss katre ko bhool jaathi aur apne ghaane mein kho jaathi…..

Bhene De Mujhe Behne De……

Geet ko nahi patha ki koi ussko dekh raha hai…..

Haan koi Geet ko upar se dekh raha hai….aur kaun ho saktha?

Hummara Maan Singh Khurana hi hai…..

Maan has come to take a look at the work done at that sight…..

Jab Maan aaya tha sare workers kaam katham karkke chale gaye….

Sirf watchman tha……

Watchman ko bhi Maan ne kissi kaam ke liye bahar bhejdiya hai……

Just then it started to rain and as we know Maan hates rain ……..

So he had gone up to escape from the rain…….

As the rain started to slow down Maan looks down and finds someone there….

Maan ko lagtha hai ki watchman hoga….

But after a while Maan hears the song playing and takes a look again….

There he finds some angel dancing in the rain…..

Maan could hardly realise what's happening…..

He is just lost in the song and the dancing beauty…..

After the song ends Maan gets back to his senses and comes down to find who it is…..

Just then Geet plays the song again and starts dancing…..
 

Maan stops and admires her dance…….

Then he finds something strange…….ye mujhe kya ho gaya?

Maan Singh Khurana kab se baarish ko admire karne laga?

Maan is stretching his hands and feeling the rain…….

This is not that bad…..this is good……

Then he moves closer to that angel dancing in the rain……

Maan is not sure if it's his dream or real……

One thing is clear….ye MSK ka sapna nahi ho saktha…..

Kyunki Maan ke jeevan mein hi nahi sapne mein bhi koi bhi ladhki ki jagah nahi hai……..

So this must be real……

Ye kahan se aayi aur yahan mere building mein kya kar rahi hai?

Issko dekhkke toh nahi lagtha ki ye yahan kaam karnewali hai……

Aur aaspaas koi ghar bhi nahi hai toh ye kahan se aayi?

Seedhe aasmaan se aayi koi Pari hai kya?

Nahi nahi, aaise nahi ho saktha?

Maan moves closer and touches her…….

Geet is swirling and she hits him…..

Just then she hears the thunder striking and she hugs him tight…..

 
Maan bhi behgaya……
 

Maan looks at her face and is shocked …….

This is the same girl……

Maan takes another look….

Hare ye toh wahi hai…….

Maan recognizes her…..she had come to KC for some donation……

One week back……
 

Geet being the cultural secretary of their college is busy organizing this dance competition….

Actually this is for a noble cause to help the children suffering from malnutrition…..

That's why Geet is so much involved in this event ….

Koi aur function hotha toh Geet itna takleef nahi lethi….

Ussko sambalne ke liye aur bhi log hai……

Lekhin jaise bhi Geet ko uss bachon ki madat karna padega…..

Issilye toh Geet bhi iss competition mein participate kar rahi hai……

Jaise bhi iss competition ko jeethna hai……

Geet is busy selling tickets for the event…..

Someone tells her about MSK and gives her KC's address….

Next day Geet arrives at KC and she is being kept waiting for a long time before this MSK could come back from his meeting…..

Maan is already tired after a hefty schedule and Geet is equally annoyed and tired of waiting……

When the receptionist asks her to go and meet the MD, Geet just barges in without even bothering to knock….

Maan ka mood pehle hi karab hai toh usska gussa aur badjaatha……

Maan: knock karne ki courtesy bhi nahi hai, aajkal ki ladhkiyan toh

Geet: kya aajkal ki ladhkiyan? Mein toh subhe se intrezaar kar rahi thi, aaj ka din hi waste ho gaya, mujhe bhi aur kitna kaam hai, samje aap?

Maan didn't expect this……

Maan: mere paas tummare kahaani sunne ke liye waqt nahi hai, kaho kya chahiye?

Geet: mein bhi apne liye nahi aayi, bas iss masoom bachon ke liye aayi hoon, warna koi aap jaise Dust danav se madat kaise mangega?

Maan: ye bhi koi tareeka hai donation maangne ki?

Geet: hum koi inaam nahi maang rahe hai, ye dekho humne ek dance competition organize kiya hai, hum sirf usske tickets bhej rahe hai

Maan: toh tummare gang mein aur kitne log hai? tumme sharam nahi aathi aaise masoom bachon ke naam se chori karne ki

Maan just remembers the incident where Dadi was fooled by some college girl selling fake tickets…

Geet: kya? Aap samajthe kya apne aap ko? Aap ko paise nahi dena toh mujhe pehle hi bathathe, aaise intrezaar karwakke insult kyun karthe ho?

Maan: what? Tumme patha hai kit um kisse baat kar rahi ho?

Geet: haan haan, koi sadu kanjoos khurana se baat kar arhi hoon, lagtha hai aaise logon ko insult karna aapka shok hai

Maan: Adi….adiii,

Adi comes running…..

Adi: yes sir

Maan: kissne iss pagal ladhki ko andar bheja?

Adi: sir, she is xyz college student sir

Maan: student ? patha nahi aaise log padkke kya karenge?

Geet: Mr., this is non of your business

Maan: Adi, security ko bhulao

Geet: kya? Mein bbi dekhthi hoon ki mujhe kaun bahar nikhaaltha? Aap ko hummare students ka power nahi patha? Ek call karthi toh pura students aapke kC ke samne honge

Maan: mujhe damki dethi ho? MSK ko?

Geet: abhi dekho, mein kya kar sakthi?

Maan: Adi, ye sab kya hai?

Adi: Ms. Geet, aap ko koi galatfami ho gayi hai, aap please mere saath aayiye

Geet Adi ke saath jaathi….

Adi cools her down and pleads her to leave……..

Geet understands Adi's plight, aaise aadmi ke saath kaam karna toh kitna mushkil hoga?

Bechare  roz roz kaise uss DD ko sambalthe?

Waise Handaji bhi ab tak paanch call kar chukke hai, Geet ko ghar jaana hai….

She leaves but she could never forget that Dust danav…..

Back to the rainy day…..

Now Maan knows that she is not cheating……sach mein kal competition hai….

Geet too recognizes him……..

Geet: tum?

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? woh bhi aaise waqt pe?

Geet: mein yahan baarish se bachne ke liye aayi , lekhin tum yahan kaise?

Maan: ye mera sight hai

Geet: kya? Mujhe pehle hi patha chaltha toh mein yahan nahi aathi

Geet takes her bag and tries to leave….

But the door won't open……

Maan: kissne darwaza band kiya ?

Geet: kyun? Meinne hi band kiya tha

Maan: tumne aaisa kyun kiya?

Geet: mujhe bahut dar laga toh meinne band kardhi

Maan: ab hum bahar kaise jaayenge?

Geet: kyun? Tum darwaza nahi kol sakthe?

Geet takes a look at him and finds him strong enough…….

Maan: ye darwaza nahi kolega

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, issme koi problem hai, issiliye meinne watchman ko bheja tha issko teek karne ke liye aadmi ko lane

Geet: tummara sight haina? Aaisa hi hoga? Ab patha nahi ye roof kab mere uoar girega?

So saying Geet goes out and stands in the open space…..

It's pouring heavily…..

Maan catches hold of her and pulls her in….

Maan: pagal ho gayi ho kya?
 

Geet: chodo, chodo mujhe

Maan leaves her……

Geet: babaji, ab kya hoga? Mujhe iss DD se bachao, koi hai, bachao…bachao….

Maan gets hold of her and closes her mouth….

Maan: chup….bilkul chup…..

Geet looks into his eyes….Maneet eyelock…….

Geet looks at the mobile….it's 6 pm……

Geet usually iss waqt ghar wapas chake  jaathi…..

Geet: mere ghar mein sab pareshaan honge, mujhe jaana hai

Maan: jab tak koi aakke iss darwaze ko nahi kholtha hum bahar nahi jaa sakthe, aur mujhe nahi lagtha itne baarish mein koi aa saktha, tumme toh kal subha tak yahi rukhna padega

Geet: kya? Nahi, koi toh rashtha hoga

Geet climbs up the stairs and goes to the roof….ayhan se khoodkke koi bach nahi saktha…..

Ab kya hoga? Ek raat iss DD ke saath kaise? Nahi nahi, mujhe kuch karna padega….

Maan is still waiting down….ussko patha hai ki yahan se jaane ke koi aur rashtha nahi hai….

Maan kehtha toh ye zaroor nahi manegi, ab kudh check karthi toh koi problem nahi hoga, haina?

Geet wapas aathi…..

Maan: tummare gharwale ko inform kardho ki tum yahan ho

Geet: kaise kar sakthi?

Maan: kyun? Tummare paas mobile haina?

Geet: issme toh balance nahi hai

Maan: kya? Toh tum issko music sunnne ke liye isstemaal karthi? Stupid girl

Geet: tummare paas mobile hoga haina?

Maan: tummare papa ka no. kya hai?

Geet: kyun?

Maan: hare, unko bathana haina ki tum yahan ho

Geet apne papa ka no. bathathi…..

Maan calls Mr.Handa…..

Handaji: halo

Maan: tummare papa ka naam kya hai?

Geet: Mohinder Handa

Maan:  Mohinder ji hai?

Handaji: haan, bol raha hoon, aap kaun hai?

Maan: aapki beti aaj raat ghar nahi aasakthi

Handaji: kya?

Maan: haan, aapko fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, woh mere saath hai, kal subha ghar aayegi

Aaise kehkke Maan phone khaattha….

Geet is shocked….aaise bhi koi baat kar saktha hai kya?

Geet: ye tumne kya kaha?

Geet pareshaan ho jaathi….

Handaji toh bahut pareshaan ho jaathe……

He calls back…..

Maan: halo

Handaji: halo, aap mere beti ko kuch nahi kijiye, mein aapko jitna paisa chahiye detha hoon

Maan: kya?

Geet: papaji haina?

Maan: tere parivaar mein sab pagal hai kya? Tummare papa ko lagtha ki tumme meinne kidnap kardhi, waise tumme kaun kidnap karega? Ye toh kudh kushi karne ki barabar hai

Geet: snatches the phone…..

Geet: papaji, Geet bol rahi hoon

Handaji: puthar, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: haan papaji, mein bilkul teek hoon, mein aapki Geet Handa hoon, mujhe koi kuch nahi kar saktha

Handaji: achcha puthar abhi tum kahan ho?

Geet: mein yahan tailor ke paas aayi aur baarish mein rashtha band ho gaya, mein kissi building mein fusgayi

Handaji: toh putahr tumne khana toh khaliya haina?

Geet: nahi paapji,  issne toh mujhe kuch nayi khilaya

Maan: what? Tum kya meri mehmaan ho?

Geet: haan, ye tera hi jagah haina?

Maan: iss haalat mein issko khane ki padi hai?

Geet: papaji maa ne kya banaya?

Handaji: Gol gappe

Geet: Gol gappe? Maa ko bhi aaj hi banana tha

Handaji: koi baat nahi puthar kal aap ke liye banayegi

Geet: papaji mere phone ka recharge karwadijiye, woh kya haina? Kissi ki phone pe zyada baat nahi kar sakthi

Maan: teek kaha tumne

Maan gets back his mobile……

Maan: tummara no. kya hai?

Geet: tumme nahi batha sakthi

Maan stares…..

Geet tells her no…..

Geet's mobile beeps……

Maan has recharged her no……

Geet: ye kissne recharge kiya?

Maan: meinne hi kiya tha, ab tum mere mobile pe haath mat lagao

Geet: ye kya? 500 rupaye ka recharge?

Maan: kyun? Kam hai kya? Tum kitna bologe?

Geet: mein toh sirf 100 rupiye ki recharge karthi hoon

Geet searches her bag……

Geet: ye lo

Maan: kya hai?

Geet: mere paas abhi sirf 200 rupiye hai, bakhi kal dedungi

Maan: isski koi zaroorat nahi

Geet: mujhe tummare paiso ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Mr. Khanjoos khurana

Maan gets the money just to stop her bak bak……

Maan: leliya, ab toh apna muh band karo

Dadi calls…..

Maan: halo dadima

Dadi: Maan bete aap kahan ho?

Maan: mein sight pe hoon

Dadi: iss waqt aap wahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet snatches the phone…..

Geet: abhi dekho, tumne mere papa se kya kaha?

Dadi: halo

Geet: namasthe Dadima

Dadi is shocked to hear a girl's voice on Maan's phone……

Geet: aapkke potha aaj raat mere saath rahega, ghar nahi aayega

Tit for tat….

Geet: abhi dekhthi hoon ki kya hotha?

Maan: tummari itni himmat? Mere mobile wapas kardho

Tabhi Dadi calls back….

Geet attends the call……

Dadi: Maan bete, humme koi problem nahi hai , aap chahe toh do chaar din badh bhi aasakthe, lekhin wapas aathe waqt hummari bahu ko bhi zaroor saath layiye

Geet: kya? Lo tum hi baat karo

Geet gives the phone to Maan…..

Maan: Dadi, jaise aap soch rahe ho aaise koi baat nahi hai, mein toh yahan ek pagal ladhki ke saath fusgaya hoon

Geet: kya? Mujhe pagal kehthe ho? tum pagal ho aur tummare Dadi pagal hai

Maan: Dadi mein aapse kal aakke sab kuch bathatha hoon

Ab Geet apne bag se chocolates lekhe khathi…..

Iss Pinky ke bachi ke saath rehne mein yahi faida hai….

Sab ke bag mein kuch na kuch snacks chupakke rakhthi….

Geet: tumme chahiye?

Maan: nahi

Geet: mein paise nahi mangoongi, khalo

Maan takes one, he is also humgry…..

After dinner(?) Geet feels a little cold out there…..

Her dress is wet so she is shivering….

Geet ke paas usska naya dress hai….lekhin woh kal ke function ke liye hai…..

Maan looks at her shivering…..

Maan: tummare paas kapde haina? Tum badal lo

Maan starts to move from there……

Geet: nahi, ye mein nahi pehen sakthi, kal competition haina?

Maan: abhi tum change nahi karogi toh kal dance nahi kar payegi, samji

Geet: nahi, ye mein nahi pehen sakthi

Maan: toh ye loh, isse pehen lo

Maan takes off his shirt and gives her…..

Geet ko lagtha hai ki yahi teek  hai…..

 
Maan  dusre kamre mein chale jaatha…..
 

Maan ko neendh nahi aathi…..

He is still thinking about Geet….

Ab woh kya kar rahi hogi?

He sneaks out and goes to have a look at Geet….

Geet is fast asleep….

Maan wonders how could she sleep under such circumstances…..

Geet dance karthe karthe tak agyi toh sogayi….

Maan ke shirt pehenkke ek choti si abchi ki tarah Geet so rahi hai….

Maan thode dher Geet ko hi dekhthe rehtha….

He also gets back to his room and tries to sleep……

Next morning……

Maan ka alarm bachtha….it's 4'0 clock……

Maan wakes up and finds himself sleeping on the floor…..

Yahan mein kaise? Maan remembers Geet…..

He rushes to find whether everything is Ok…..

Geet is still asleep……

Maan calls the watchman and the workers come and open the door….

Watchman tries to enter ….

Maan remembers Geet wearing his shirt and sleeping….

Maan stops him from entering inside…..

He asks him not to allow anyone inside and goes to wake Geet….

Maan: Geet, uttoo, darwaza khul gaya, sare workers aagaye hai

Geet ye sunkke shock ho gayi…..apne dress ko dekhkke gabragayi….

Geet: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? chale jao

Maan: hare pareshaan honne ki koi baat nahi hai, tum aaram se change karkke aao, yahan koi nahi aayega

Koi nahi aayega? Lekhin Maan kaise aasaktha?

Geet: tum?

Maan just them realizes that he has to leave….he leaves in a hurry…..

Geet change karkke aathi….

Maan: tum aao mere saath, mein tumme ghar chodtha hoon

Sab Geet ko hi dekhthe hai…..

Maan gets angry and shouts…..

Maan: sab apne apne kaam karo

Everyone runs away…..

Geet: mein chale jaoongi

Maan: tumme mein utakke nahi jaanewala hoon, mere paas gadhi hai

Geet  Maan ke saath jaathi….

Maan drops her at home…..

Handaji is getting ready to come and take Geet….

Geet toh wapas aagayi….

Handaji: Geet, tum aagayi? Lekhin kaise?

Geet: mein isske saath aayi

Geet turns back and finds that Maan has left……

That evening……….

Dadi is getting ready…..

Maan: Dadi, aaj aapka kya program hai?

Dadi is always busy raising fund for her charity……

Dadi: aapko patha nahi? aaj xyz college mein dance competition hai, ye bhi hummare bachon ke liye hi kar rahe hai hum

Maan: Dadi chalo mein aapko drop kartha hoon

Dadi is surprised…..ek raat uss ladhki ke saath rehthe hi Maan itna badal gaya?

Zaroor uss ladhki ne koi jadu kiya hai……..

Maan drops Dadi at the college….

Dadi: Maan bete, aap bhi aayiye

Maan: nahi dadi, aap jayiye

Maan gets out and takes a look….his eyes are searching Geet….

Geet comes…….she looks pretty in her new attire……

She finds Maan gazing her…..
 

Geet: tum apne paison ke liye yahan tak aagaye ho? rukho mein abhi aathi

Geet Pinky ke paas jaakke paise lekhe aathi….Maan has left…..

Geet competiton jeet jaathi…..

Dadi is sitting on the stage…..

Maan calls….

Dadi: Maan bete aapko toh aaj yahan aana chahiye, uss lahdki ne kamaal ka dance kiya hai, usska naam kay ahi?

Dadi asks someone near…..

Maan: Geet handa

Dadi: hare, aapko kaise patha?

Maan: meinne toh kal hi usskke performance dekh liya hai

Dadi: toh yahi hai woh ladhki?

Maan: haan Dadi

Dadi: Maan bete aap jaldhi ghar aayiye, aapko aaj ek surprise dena chahathe hai hum, toh bete hum ghar pe milthe hai

Maan: teek hai Dadima

Dadi is very happy…..

After the function Dadi calls Geet…..

Geet has donated her prize money also for the charity….

Dadi: toh Geet aaj aap hummare saath hummare ghar pe dinner karenge

Geet: nahi m'am, mere parents mere liye intrezaar kar rahe hai

Dadi: toh unko bhi bhulayiye, aaj toh aap ke jeet ko celebrate karna hi padega

They go to KM…..

Geet is about to enter…..

Dadi: hare, rukhiye, aap pehle bar hummare ghar aarahe hai, Nakul

Nakul aarthi lekhe aatha….

Geet is confused……but when she finds Maan standing in the balcony staring at her she understands what's this Dadi upto…..

After aarthi Geet enters her sasuraal…..

Geet: papaji mein abhi aathi hoon

Geet climbs up the stairs to see Maan….

She knocks the door……

Maan is surprised to see Geet there…..

Maan: andar aao, tumme knock karne ki zaroorat nahi hai, waise tumme toh knock karne ki aadat nahi haina?

Geet: ye lo tummare paise

She gives him 300 rupees

Maan: tum ye paise lautanne aayi ho?

Geet: haan, tumme kya laga? Mein yahan tumse milne aayi hoon?

Maan: par 300 toh mein kal letha, aaj toh 300 se kaam nahi hoga, tumme interest bhi dena padega

Geet: kya? Ek din ka interest?

Maan: business man jo hoon, har deal mein kuch na kuch faida hona chahiye haina?

Geet: bataho kitna chahiye? 30 ya 50?

Maan: hare mujhe paise nahi chahiye

Geet: toh phir?

Maan gets closer……

Geet fatafat apne chumka nikhaalke Maan ko dethi…

Geet: ye lo, ye kaafi haina?

Maan toh kuch aur hi expect kar raha tha…..

Just then Dadi calls Geet…..

Geet: aathi hoon

Geet thrusts her earring on Maan's hand and leaves…..

Maan: Geet rukho, ye lekhe jao

Geet toh chali gayi…..

Maan Geet ke earring ko dekhkke Geet ke khayaalon mein kho jaatha…..

After dinner….

Geet is ready to leave….

Maan looks at them leaving…..he expects Geet come and say goodbye…….

Ranno finds Geet's chumka missing…..

Ranno: Geet, tummare chumka kahan hai? ek hi hai, dusra kahan hai?

Geet: hare maa, dance karthe waqt kahin girgaya hoga

Dadi: nahi Geet, humne abhi abhi dekha tha, aap pehle bar hummare ghar aaye hai aur apkka chumka kho gaya, ye toh abshagun hai

Dadi calls the servants and they all search the earring….

Maan : Geet, ye dekho,kahin ye tummara chumka toh nahi?

Dadi: shayad aapka chumka Maan ke kamre mein ghir gaya, aap jaakke lelo

Dadi winks…..

Geet upar jaathi….

Maan catches hold of her hand, pulls her in and closes the door…..

Maan: ye lo, isse hi dhoondh rahe haina?

Geet: lekhin ye toh tummara interest hai, tum hi rakhlo, isske badle mein kal tum kuch aur maangtha toh?

Maan: mujhe toh ye chumka nahi isske malkhin chahiye

Geet: kya?

Maan: mein issko apne paas rakh saktha, lekhin Dadima isskke bina tumme wapas nahi jaane denge, phir tumme kal raat ki tarah aaj bhi mere saath rukhna padega, mein toh tayaar hoon, tum mere saath mere kamre share kar sakthi ho

Geet: toh tummara ye plan hai?

Maan Geet ke paas aakke ussko chumka pehnatha…..mahiii…………..

It's rainy season and so it starts to rain now……
 

Thunder strikes….Maan pulls Geet towards him and hugs her tight…..

Maan: Geet, daro mat, mein hoon tere saath

Geet: hatto, mujhe koi dar nahi hai

Maan: kal toh bahut dar gayi thi

Geet: hare kal toh open space tha, yahan toh kuch nahi hoga, dekho

Geet goes and opens the window……

One more thunder strikes…..

Geet runs towards Maan and hugs him…….

Maan:  Geet, mujhe toh pehle baarish pasand hi nahi tha, lekhin ab toh mujhe baarish bahut pasand hai, aaise hi tum mere saath rahogi toh har mosam suhaana hotha…..

Maneet passionate hug…..mahiii…………….

Ab dadi ko apne bahu mil hi gayi……………….

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                                                Behne De….continued….

 

Geet hugs Maan and Maneet passionate hug…..

Maneet lost in themselves…….

Geeet….Ranno calls……

Geet: chodo mujhe, mujhe jaana hai

Maan: toh jao, meinne  kahan pakda tumme?

Geet realizes that only she is hanging on to him still…..

She is shocked and pulls herself back……

She leaves immediately feeling shy and embarrassed….

Maan: Geet…..

She turns back, shivering….

She just can't wait anymore……this intimacy kills her…..

But she doesn't even know this man…..

He is still a stranger…….but why this strange feeling….

mann kyun itna bechain ho raha hai?….

Dil kyun yahi isske paas rukhna chahatha hai?…..

Maan : gud night
 

Geet doesn't reply….just runs off….

Maan smiles…..he knows her problem…..

He wants to give her some time…..

Let her find out herself…..

That night….

Geet gets into her night suit ….

As usual she goes to the mirror and starts removing her jewels….

When she looks at her earrings, she is drawn back to Maan's memories….

She is hit by the same feeling when Maan touched her to wear her chumkas….

Geet doesn't want to remove them as wants his warmth still lingering in her ears….

She feels shy and covers her face with her hands….

She couldn't stop smiling and she goes to sleep with the sweet memories of Maan….

Next morning….
 

Dadi: toh Maan bete,  kal ki meeting success haina? Aap kahe toh hum Geet ke mabaap se baat akrthe hai

Maan: nahi Dadi

Dadi: kya? toh aap ko ye ladhki bhi pasand nahi aayi?

Maan: Dadi, woh…mere baat nahi hai, Geet

Dadi: toh Geet aapko nahi chahathi?

Maan: Dadi, aap zara mere baat ko suniye

Dadi: hum kitne saal intrezaar kar sakthe? Humne toh faisla kardhiya hai, Geet hi hummari bahu hai, samje aap?

Maan: meinne kab mana kiya tha? Geet hi aap ki bahu banegi, kyunki woh meri hai, Maan ki Geet

Dadi: phir kya problem hai?

Maan: Dadi, Geet toh mujhe jaanthi bhi nahi hai, patha nahi ussko mera naam bhi yaad hoga ya nahi?

Dadi: what? Toh aap uss din Geet se nahi mille the?

Maan: haan Dadi

Dadi: phir? Aapne ussko apna naam bhi nahi batahya?

Maan: kaise bathatha? woh kahan mere baat ko sunthi?

Dadi: ye aap kya keh rahe hai bete?

Maan: Dadi, humme thoda waqt dijiye

Dadi: aur kitne waqt lagega? Lagtha hai ki humme hi kuch karna padega

Adi calls…..

Maan: haan Adi, mein bas nikhal raha hoon, bye Dadi

Maan phir apne kaam mein busy ho gaya?

Maan goes to the sight…..the same sight…..

MSK is always on the move……he is so fast that his staff always struggle to keep pace with him….

But today Maan stops after stepping in….

He is reminded of Geet….

He just keeps looking at the place where she danced….

He goes to the room where she stayed that night…..

His mind is occupied by her thoughts….

Adi follows him everywhere and is puzzled…..

Maan sir kya dhoondh rahe hai?

Adi: Sir, Mr.Sharma upar hai

Maan gets back to his senses….

Maan: mujhe patha hai, chalo

Maan finds it difficult to concentrate on his work….

Wherever he looks he finds Geet…smilimg …dancing….arguing….talking to her babaji….

Mr.Sharma: Mr.Khurana, what happened?
 

Maan: nothing, shall we continue in the evening? At my office?

Adi: but sir, aap hamesha sight pe hi discuss karthe haina?

Maan: Adiii do as I said, Mr.Sharma, I'm sorry, mujhe koi zaroori kaam hai

Adi: par sir, aaj ka aapki aakhri program yahi hai

Maan:Adiii

Mr.Sharma: no problem Mr.Khurana, hum shamko milthe hai

Maan: At KC

Mr.Sharma: sure

That evening …..Maan returns home after meeting Mr.Sharma…..

The sky opens up and it begins to pour just like that day….

Maan is reminded of Geet and he turns back and drives to the sight….

He thought that Geet would be there hiding from the rain…..

He stops the car and rushes in…

Watchman  follows him….

Watchman: sab, sab

Maan doesn't hear nayhting….he just goes to find his Mishty….

To his disappointment Geet is not there…..

Geet has gone home earlier…..

Maan leaves with a heavy heart…..

He drives to her home….

He parks the car far and walks to her house….

Geet is standing in the balcony….playing in the rain….

Maan is relieved to see her and he keeps looking at her till she leaves…..

Maan returns very happy…..he is happy just seeing his Mishty….

Ranno: Geet, ye kya hai? tum toh pura gilli hui ho, jaldhi jao, apne kapde badalkke aao

Geet remembers Maan throwing his coat and asking her to change….

She hops to her wardrobe and finds the coat….

She removes her wet clothes and wears Maan's coat….

She goes to sleep with Maan's dreams…

She feels like resting in his arms…..she remembers the comfort of his embrace…

She longs to see him and she longs for those broad shoulders….
 

She decides to rerurn it to hi  next day….

She doesn't want to part with it, but she wants to see him….

Koi toh bahana chahiye haina?

Next day….

Geet goes to KC to return his coat…..

Adi is surprised to see her again…..

Maan aaj bahut gusse mein hai….

Koi business tension hai….

Adi feels bad for Geet…issko aaj hi aana tah?

Geet:Adi sir, kya mein Mr.Khurana se mil sakthihoon?

Adi: kya? nahi, Maan sir meeting mein hai

Maan just passes by….

He is blasting at everyone…

Maan: Tasha…..ye kay hai?

Maan throws the files….

Tasha stands there with her heads down…

No one dares to speak….

Geet: Adi sir, mein chalthi hoon

Maan hears that voice and he turns back ….

He knows it's Geet…..

Geet is so scared…

Maan: tum? Kahan bhaag rahi ho?

Maan is still out of control….

Geet: mein….Adi sir, mujhe bachao
 

Geet hides behind his back….

Maan:Adiii

Adi jumps and disappears….

Everyone look at Maan…

Maan: aap log yahan kya dekk rahe ho: yahan meri shadhi ho rahi hai kaya?

Sab gayab ho jaathe….

Poor Geet is left alone….

Maan grabs her hand and takes her to his cabin…

Maan relaxes and doesn't want to scare her…..

Geet is still shivering…..

Maan: Geet…Geeet

Geet: haan

Maan: aakhir tum mujhse milne aa hi gayi? Meinne toh kal hi tumme expect akr raha tha

Geet:  mein aapki coat wapas dene aayi thi

She gives it to him…..

Maan: ohhh…toh tum mujhse milne nahi aayi?

Geet: nahi….

Maan gets closer….Geet steps back…..

She hits the wall and stops…..
 

Maan looks into her eyes…Maneet eyelock…..

Maan ko patha hai ki Geet yahan kyun aayi hai?

Lekhin abhi bhi maanne ke liye tayaar nahi hai?

Mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki kab tak aaise chalega?

Maan: mujhe laga kit um issko apne paas hi rakhogi

Geet: kyun? Mujhe kissi ka coat nahi chahiye

Maan: nahi chahiye? Toh aaj raat ko kya pehnoge?

Geet is shocked  how he knew that?

Maan had been stalking her and he was there at her house last night…..haina?

Geet: aapka matlab?

Maan: matlab toh tum bhi achche se jaanthe ho

Maan smirks….Geet feels embarrassed….

Geet: woh….

Maan: tum chaho toh isse apne paas hi rakhlo, tumme isski zyada zaroorat padegi

Maan looks at her and imagines her in that coat….

Geet feels like she is not wearing anything…..

She suddenly adjusts her duppatta and covers herself…..

Maan smiles at her…….he knows how she is feeling now…..

Geet: mujhe jaana hai
 

Geet looks a little scared……

Maan lets her off and she leaves…..

Maan doesn't want to give her pressure….

Let her take her own time….

He is actually going on a business trip…..

This break will make her realise what she wants and what she is missing…..

But it's going to be even more difficult for him to stay away from her….

Maan takes that coat with him as a substitute for his Mishty….

That makes his life more miserable….

That coat and it's unique scent of his mishty make him weak….

Geet too misses him and she has lost her only possession that helped her feel him…..

Feel his emrace and feel his warmth and comfort……

What a fool she is to return it to him?

She yearns to see him but is scared by his intimacy….

He gets so close with so much ease that she could neither resist him nor deny him……

What happens to her when this man is around….

She forgets herself and beraks her limits not knowing how to stop herself …..

She is so scared to face him gain that she decides to stay away from him…

Maan is back in a week and is waiting to see his Mishty…..

He knows that she won't dare to come again…

It's his turn……

He tries to meet her on her way back home….

He waits for her after college…..

But Geet keeps avoiding him….

Either she takes a taxi or runs into the caf , hiding there until he goes…..

She now comes along with her friends and never alone….

Maan is frustrated….this girl is crazy…..

She too is going thru the same pain and anguish but still adamant to accept it…..

Dadi is getting ready for her party….

A small party to appreciate the efforts of the students who collected donations for her children's home….Geet has been the leader of this fund raising project in her college….

That competition was also her idea…..

The students have been raising funds for the past one month and they are handing over the funds raised to dadi today….Dadi wants to show her appreciation by giving them some gifts…..

Maan has a plan…..he knows Geet is the one who deserves it…..

He tells Dadi about his plan…Dadi likes it very much…..

Dadi too is waiting for this only…..

At the party…..

Geet is busy with her friends…..

She never expected Maan there….

She is pleasantly surprised but is also feeling nervous…..

Maan had accompanied dadi and gas come to help dadi…

Aal the girls go gaga seeing MSK in their campus……

Dadi makes an announcement that makes them crazy……

Dadi wishes to thank them and to appreciate their efforts MSK, the most eligible bachelor of Delhi would be taking the winner for a date……

What more would a girl want?...

As of now Geet is the clear winner with more than a lakh to her credit…..

But this dinner has been organized for the elite to contribute….

The girls are after the big shots collecting funds……

Sameera Geet's claamate is always jealous of Geet and after the announcement she wants to win this at any cost….

Till now she is the least bothered about charity and this noble gesture….

But now she wants to go on a date with MSK….

Her father is a business man and he has also come to this event….

She gets a wooping 2 lakhs from her afther and leads Geet …….

Geet is very disappointed….

She just doesn't want to see anyone with Maan……

But how could she get such a huge amount?
 

She tries her best, but she could only get a few thousands more…..

Geet looks disappointed and Maan knows that she is not happy……

Maan comes near her….

Geet tries not to look at him….

Maan gets closer and closer…..

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Geet:  tum?

Maan: toh tumne mujhe dekha nahi?

Geet: nahi, tum dekh nahi sakthe? Mein thoda busy hoon

Maan smiles…..

Man: achcha? lagtha hai ki yahn koi jal raha hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, tum usse jalthi ho jo aaj mere saath jaanewali hai

Geet: nahi toh?

Maan: achcha tum hi bathao, tummare college ki beauty queen kaun hai? mein bhi toh dekhtha hoon ki mujhe pasand hai ya nahi?

Geet stares…..she is fuming….

Sameera just comes watchimg Maan talking with Geet…..
 

Sameera: halo, Mr.Khurana, I'm Sameera Khanna, Mr.Rahul Khanna's daughter, you must know him?

Maan: halo, Ms. Kahnna., I know Mr.Khanna, the great industrialist, glad to meet you

Maan shakes hands with her….

Geet looks at him with burning eyes…..

Maan:  you must be the Dashing Diva of your college?

Sam: you look hot Maan

Maan: I'm waiting for my lucky Date

Sam: no one is as lucky as Sameera Khanna

Maan: let's see who's lucky?

Maan winks at Geet……

Geet is getting restless…..

Maan: Geet

Geet: ab kya hai?

Maan: hare, meinne toh tumme kali haath bhejdhi uss din

Geet: haan, khanjoos Khurana

Maan: chalo aaj mein tumme donations detha hoon

Maan takes out a cheque fills it abd shows it to Geet…

Geet: aap ko achanak itna hamdardi kahan se aayi?

Maan: tumme nahi chahiye toh teek hai, mujhe koi problem nahi

Maan pretends to keep it back…..

Geet: nahi nahi, aap detho

Maan: toh tumme mere ssath date pe jaana hai

Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai, mein sir fuss massom bachon ke liye ye lethi hoon

Maan: magar mein toh sirf tummare liye ye deraha hoon

Geet is eager to know how much he donated….

She tries to snatch it from him….

Maan refuses to give it to her and he himself goes and drops it in her box……

It's result time…….

Sam is leading with 2 lakhs….

Geet share is counted….

Geet's heart pumps fast……

Iss khanjoos khurana ne na jaane kitne paise diya hai?

Geet parys to her babaji…..

Hare Geet usski kya zaroorat hai? Maan be toh ye plan tere liye hi banaya haina?

Geet has collected 11 lakhs……

Maan has donated 10 lakhs…..

Geet is the winner……

Sam jut can't bear it…she leaves…..

Pinky: Geet, tu jeet gayi

Eyery eye is on her……how lucky she is?

Dadi paaises Geet's sincere contributions….

Maan comes behind her and whispers in her ears…..

Maan: toh aaj shamko, tayaar rehna

Maan gives a naughty look….

Geet blushes….she is so happy…..yet a little scared to go with Maan alone…..

That evenng……Geet waits at her house…..

Maan comes and takes her……

Geet looks gorgeous in her white salwar…..

To be continued……

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