My OS thread- New OS for Anniversary....Yaadhein on pt 1,2 pg 23 apr 5 - Page 10

Posted: 10 years ago

                                                                                Part - 2

 

 

 

                Next day, he goes and waits for her to wake up. After she is exhausted after her usual wildness, she fell back on the bed and kept thinking staring the roof. The only thing she needed is freedom. The irony is that the victim is chained and punished while the culprit is roaming around freely. The door is locked from outside. Maan opened the door and slowly entered the room. She seemed to be lost in her own world, not bothered about him much, or she didn't realize that the door is open and someone is here. She is so weak and worn out, and her instincts have stopped working after that incident. As Maan  inched closer she raised her head and stared at him, Maan stopped breathing for a second for the fear of her reaction seeing him, but she didn't seemed  to have recognized him.

                Suddenly she took the knife she had hidden under her pillow and tried to attack him. Maan caught hold of her hand and snatched the knife and threw it away, she thought that he would also run away as did the other boys who came before, they were so scared and thought that she would kill them, they pleaded her not to hurt them  and ran away, but to her surprise he is not afraid of her.

                She spoke in a low voice..." Tumme dar nahi lagtha?"

                Maan replied in an equally low voice..." nahi"

                She felt that he could help her(?)

                Maan is happy that she didn't recognize him, but he wanted to confess, not now, later. First he should help her get out of this mess.

                Geet continued..." sab mujhe dekkke bhaag jaathe, kya mein itna bhuri lagthi hoon?" she asked innocently, not knowing that this is the man who is the reason for her plight.

                "nahi, tum toh bahut cute ho"...Maan tried to befriend her.

                " joot. Dekho mein kaise dikhthi hoon?"

                Maan looked at her shabby dress and uncombed hair, must be she had been kept like this for days.

                "tum mere madat karoge?" she asked him with a lot of expectation in her eyes.

                "haan. Bolo, tumme kya chahiye?"

                Geet looked at her chains...But Maan has not come ready for this...Maan hesitates.

Geet is disappointed..." mein tumme kuch nahi karoongi, promise"

Maan smiles at her request...

" tumme bhi lagtha hai ki mein pagal hoon?"

Maan looked at her and he saw her eyes penetrating his and she was speaking so clearly...

She is definitely not mad...

"kya soch rahe ho?, koi pagal aaise baat kartha hai kya?

She is so smart, and how come she forgot him? There must be some mistake...had she forgotten everything?...Maan could easily hide the truth from her , at least for the time being else she won't trust him.

"I believe you, you are not mad"

Geet is a little relieved, at least some one believed her. Maan looked at the room...Her dinner lays untouched on the table.

" why didn't you have your dinner?"

Geet was surprised that he took so much care for her, but why?

" I don't like it"

" tumme bhook nahi laga?"

She didn't expect this ..."lagtha haina"

Maan put his hands inside his pant pocket and took out a bar of chocolate...

" ye lo"

She didn't refuse...She had not had one in months...She relished it slowly...Maan kept watching her...It's too late, Maan should leave now...

Maan  " chalo, ab mein chaltha hoon, gud night"

Geet  ddin't bother much...she is interested in her chocolate only...

As he left Geet called him..."suno"

Maan truned back...

"tum kab aaoge?"

"kal"

"gud night"

Maan smiled and locked the door as it was before...Maan left with a heavy heart...what has he done? She is so nave and innocent...Next morning Ms.Mathur was surprised to see Geet sleeping...That's unusual, she needed her pills to get some sleep...Ms.Mathur didn't want to disturb her...She can come and check her at lunch break...

And at lunch break Geet is back to her wild behaviour...Ms.Mathur had to put her back to sleep with the help of the pills...Next day Maan arrived a little late...Geet was just waiting for him...

"itna dher kyun kardhi?"

"tumme kya lagtha? Tumse milne aana itna asaan hai?"

Geet understood what he said and kept quiet...They just kept looking at each other for a while...

Maan didn't know how to start the conversation...Should he ask her about that night?

No, maybe that would make her act wild...He just wanted to know why she didn 't remember him? or did she forget the whole incident?

He extended his arms..."friends?"

Geet looked at his hands...they were empty...

"where are my chocolates?"

Maan forgot to get them today...

He was feeling so guilty all day that he didn't had any other thoughts other than what he did to her...But Geet was just waiting for her chocolate man to deliver her chocolate.. she is very disappointed. He can't even get her chocolates, how could he help her? He is of no use.

"I will get them tomorrow, which one do you like?"

"Kit Kat, 5 star"

She goes on and on and the list seemed never ending...

"Ok Ok, I got it, you like anything chocolaty"

Geet smiled...

"look what I got?"

Maan showed her the fake keys he had managed to get from a locksmith...Geet snatched them and tried to open the locks of her chains...She was so desperate that she couldn't match the right keys...She throws them back at him in despair...Maan catches them...

" what are you doing? You are crazy"

Geet got offended by that remark...

She shouted...

" mein pagal nahi hoon"

Maan rushed and closed her mouth..."chup bilkul chup"

She repeated in a low voice..." Mein pagal nahi hoon"

" mujhe patha hai, meinne toh tumme azad karne ke liye hi issko laya hai, tum thoda intrezaar nahi kar sakthi?"

Maan then succeeded in freeing her...She stretched her legs and ran around the room like a kid...Maan looked at her and she was so happy...She wanted to get out of the room, but Maan stopped her, "phir kabhi"

Geet obeyed him like a kid, she had started trusting him...she believes that only he can free her But she also knows that she can't just escape over night, she had other plans...she wanted permanent freedom, she wanted to restore the smile on Ms.Mathur's face, not run away from her. She wants justice...yes, she has not forgotten everything, maybe she didn't remember Maan, but she wants the culprit to get punished so that no other girl suffers in future...

                She went to the window and looked at the Moon, she peeped out and looked at the trees and the buildings that stood behind them...She had not seen them for a while though she was amidst these lovely woods...She wanted to wander in the woods just as she did in her college days...

She asked Maan if he could take her to the woods next day...Ms.Mathur is going to some conference and she would be alone in the house...She would skip her pills somehow...Maan didn't know if that is possible, but just told her that he would try...It's difficult to climb the pipes in broad daylight. And Maan is not a professional thief, mind you...

Geet told him that he need not take this route for she knows where Ms.Mathur kept her keys...

In the pot to the left of the entrance. Maan then promised to come next morning and he replaced the chains and locked her up. He is also determined to tell her the truth one day and he is sure that she will forgive him...That's why he is helping her...

                Next day Maan entered the house as per Geet's idea and he had no difficulty in finding the keys. He climbed the stairs and reached the corner room. Maan opened the door ans she is still sleeping.

                Maan tried to wake her up.."suno, utjao, dekho, subah ho gayi"

Geet slowly opens her eyes..."mujhe sona hai"

                She closes her eyes and turns to the other side. What? She forgot what she said last night? What a fool I'm to believe her words and enter someone's house like this? He cursed himself for his madness and tried to get up. But she held back his hands.

                "bas 10 minute, phir chalhte hai"

                She requested like a school kid, she is yet under the effect of last night's pills. Meanwhile Maan removes her chains and looks at her ankles that had turned red b'coz of the chains. How much she had to suffer b'coz of him? his heart ached. There is no escape Mr.MSK, you will have to pay for your acts one day. If you think that your deeds will be forgiven just by all this goody goody behavior of yours then you are mistaken, this is no good for all that you have done. Maan knows very well that the truth will come out one day and that day he is ready to accept whatever punishment she gives him.  Right now he is here to help her, he applies coconut oil to her sore ankles. She feels his touch and wakes up. She has a broad smile on her face...

                "gud morning"

                Maan comes out of his thoughts hearing her sweet voice.

                "what's your name?" he asked.

                She doesn't want to tell her name, that would create problems for her and Ms.Mathur, if he inquires about her in the campus.

Geet hesitates..."I don't remember", she pretends to have amnesia, selective amnesia.

                Maan believed her words..."fine aaj se tera naam Mishty hai"

                "Mishty, mujhe bahut pasand hai"

She looked at him and wonders how he came out with such a cute name?

                "jaldhi chalo, hummare paas zyada time nahi hai"

She jumped out of her bed and is ready to take off...

                "mein toh tayaar hoon"

Maan stops her. He looks at her for a minute and frowns.

                "aaise tum mere saath nahi aasakthi"

Maan points out her shabby clothes and looks.

                "aaise nahi chalega?"...Geet looked at him and at herself.

                "nahi"  Maan answers sternly.

                "mein kya teri Girl friend hoon?"

Maan is shocked by this question. But he doesn't show it.

                "tumme aaise dekhke sab ko lagega ki mein tumme seedhe mental asylum se lekhe aaraha hoon, aur mujhe bhi log galat samjenge"

                "kay? Meinne kaha mein pagal nahi hoon"

Geet gets angry and throws the oil can at him.. Maan catches it.

                "toh prove karo ki pagal nahi ho, jadhi ek achchi ladhki ki tarah tayaar hokke aao"

                She gets ready in a minute. Maan waits for her outside. She comes out. Maan is surprised to see her looking gorgeous in her colorful outfit. He has never seen her in this avatar.

                "ab toh mein tummare saath aasakthi? Haina?"

Maan just smiles.they go to the entrance, Maan has locked the front door. He hesitates for a moment.

                Geet is in a hurry, "jaldhi karo"

Maan turns back and looks at her innocent face, can he trust her, what if she runs away?

Geet reads his mind in a jiffy..."kya dekhthe ho? mein kahin nahi bhaagnewali"

She looks at him and continues.."isn't it funny? I trust a stranger like you and you don't trust a beautiful young lady like me?"

                Maan answers her back., "don't you know, too much beauty is also dangerous"

                "haan"..Geet replied in a broken voice as she tried to control her tears.

                Maan opened the door and she hopped her way out. Maan followed her quickly. They strolled in the woods for a while and Maan held her hands in his throughout the journey. He feared that she would escape into the woods.

                Geet ddin't complain as she is so happy to breath fresh air after a long time.

               
                  Maan had this urge to ask her about what happened ? what she knew about herself? Why is she kept under house arrest? How did she lose her memory? Maybe she knew about what happened later that night, after that incident. And how is she related to Ms.Mathur. as far as he gathered news about Ms.Mathur, she has no family, no relatives, and the only place she knew is this campus. They believed that she had this habit of sleep walking and the students mistook her as some ghost.

                Geet wanted to stay back for some more time but Maan told her that it's high time they returned else they will get caught, and that's the end of her freedom. She followed him without further arguments as she didn't want to lose his friendship, he is the only trump card that she has, and she had to use it wisely. She wants justice at any cost, she is willing to return to her jail and wait for the right moment.

                Maan felt a little relieved that night and went to sleep early. He is happy that he could bring a smile on her face. That's what he wants, to see her happy and smiling again. Geet is reminded of her past, her college days back in the woods. She also remembered how she recovered herself that night and came here and knocked at Ms.Mathur's door that night. She fell unconscious and she didn't know how long had she been lying there. She told the whole story to Ms.Mathur and that she is going to the police, she asked Ms.Mathur to accompany her. Ms.Mathur told her that it is unsafe for her to go out at that hour, and that they can go and file the complaint in the morning...

                Later that night someone called Ms.Mathur and warned her that they would kill Geet if she opened her mouth, Ms.Mathur assured them that Geet would never open her mouth and that she would send her far far away from Mumbai soon, just spare her life. So, to save Geet Ms.Mathur silenced her. Geet is not ready to give up easily, she wanted to file a case against the culprit and she won't sit mum. Ms.Mathur had no other go but to keep her under house arrest till she found a new home for her. But Geet is still protesting and had finally found a way to get to the police station, her new friend would help her get to the police, and once she reached there safely , the law will take action and the police will protect her, poor girl, she ddin't realze that our system is corrupted by money and the underworld.

                Ms.Mathur often repeated these words.."usske paas paisa hai, woh kissi ko bhi kareedh saktha"

                But Geet didn't listen to her, she still believes that the law will punish the culprits.

Posted: 10 years ago
wow different os maan ne aisa kya kiya jo usko yeh halat hogayi hai poor girl kitna tadaprahi hai
Posted: 10 years ago
Mystery OS
part 1
nice...
i have read this already somewhere...
poor Geet...
Posted: 10 years ago
what had maan done in past with geet
Posted: 10 years ago
Mystery OS
part 2
nice...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
Posted: 10 years ago

                                                                                                Part - 3

 

 

                Next week...Maan forgets about his studies and keeps thinking of this girl. What should he do? How will he tell her the truth...the ugly truth? He kept visiting her often and they have become good friends, he didn't want to spoil this friendship nor does she want to harm this. She waited for him to trust her fully and she told him about her wish to venture out into the streets one night...

                Maan was not ready and is not going to accept at all, but she pleaded him and threatened him to end this friendship if he didn't take her out one day, just a few hours, and no one will see them in the night. At last Maan gave up and it was decided that they would go out the following night. Geet would be ready at 11 pm and Maan would come and take her with him. Geet managed to get ready with her chains on as Maan was adamant not to give her the keys. He was afraid that she might set out of the house on her own and become a prey to another monster. And now she has forgotten everything and turned into this kid. He doesn't know that she is acting and her plans behind the act.

                So, Geet is all ready to execute her mission. This time, no mistakes. Maan comes and takes her as he promised, they walk in the streets of Mumbai, Geet is waiting for the right moment to escape, she has come so close to the police station , just metres away,

                Maan is holding her hand tight, she thinks of a plan, she wants gol gappe. As they wait for their turn at the chat stall, Geet releases her hand and starts running towards the station. Maan follows her and so do some goons

                "ye toh wahi hai", " pakdo usse", " mardalo" , " police ke paas jaathi hai?"

They surround her. Geet is terrified, ye log yahan kaise? She realizes her mistake, but it's too late.

She is in the hands of the gundas who were searching for her all these days.

                Maan comes to her rescue, this time he won't repeat the same mistake, ek bar galthi ho gayi, dubara nahi hogi, babaji ne Maan ko ek aur moka diya hai apne galthi ko sudarne ko, aur Maan iss bar koi galthi nahi karega.

                 He punches one goon and rushes to his Mishty in a second, he protects her pushing her behind his back. Geet is surprised, ye apne aap ko koi hero samajtha hai kya?

                But Geet loves it, the real fight, she tries to help him, but Maan doesn't want his Mishty to get hurt, already she suffered a lot b'coz of him, so he fights fiercely and the goons fall down one after the other...

As always our police men come after the fight though they were only a few metres away, they arrest the goons and take them to the station along with Maan and Geet. Maan told them that they tried to attack Geet and Geet too supported him. they file a complaint and come out, Geet thanked him for his help, she thought that only the police men could fight like that or her Salman, 

"not bad, tum bhi achche fight karthe ho, khaas mein bhi aaise kar sakthi? Tum mujhe sikhaaoge?" she asked him looking at his abs...she then continues...

"mujhe maaf kardho, ye sab mere wajhe se hi hua haina?".

Maan couldn't control himself now, how she trusts him and thinks so high about him...

"nahi, tumme maafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi"

Geet is surprised..."isse kya ho gaya?"

She tries to look into his eyes for an answer, but Maan can't face her eyes...

He looks on the other side...

                " tumme yaad nahi hai? tum mujhe jaanthi ho"

Geet looks at him seriously and she can't remember him...

                "nahi, mujhe kuch yaad nahi aaya"

                Maan tries to help her remember...

                "mein tumme jaantha hoon, uss raat, jab tum aaise hi bhaag ke aarahi thi, kuch yaad aaya?"

Geet ko kuch kuch yaad aatha...par teek se nahi...

                "mein wahi hoon, tummare ye haal ki zamedar mein hi hoon"

Geet is confused...

                " tum kya bol rahe ho?"

                "teek se yaad karo , tum mujhe kaise bhool sakthi?"

                "tum mujhe bahut confuse kar rahe ho? kya tum bhi usske aadmi ho? phir tum mere madat kyun karna chahathe ho? tumne apne hi aadmi ko kyun mara?"

                " nahi, tumme yaad nahi, jab tum mere paas aayi aur mujhse madat maangthi thi"

Geet now remembers him...that scoundrel...coward...eet

Geet's face turns red in anger...

Yes, she knows this man...this irresponsible idiot...

Geet stares Maan...

Maan couldn't face her as she has recognized him...

Geet thinks about that unfortunate night...and for your kind information Geet too wanted to cleanse her college campus off it's illegal activities and help the students who really wanted to study but were unnecessarily troubled by the few rougues who called students but were actually criminals...

They were using the students for their benefits...

This campus being a prestigious institute was a safe abode for them to hide amongst students...

And the one who supported them...is that Dev...

Geet had known about this Dev, the principal's son and his nexus with the drug mafia, she had been following him and that night too she had followed Dev and came to that jungle...Dev was drunk and in his intoxicated state he was trying to misbehave with a young girl, she was with him and suddenly he turned into this beast, she didn't expect that and she tried to run away, Geet too tried to help her and that's when she saw someone coming in a jeep, she tried to stop him and pleaded him to help her...

It was Maan...he was just passing by...

He stoped the jeep and when he saw that it was some stupid girl asking lift...

That was the old rude MSK, and as always he was indifferent to women and he ignored her and rode on his way...

After a while he came back to see what's wrong but he was too late...

Dev and his men took the girl and Geet to a nearby go down and  Geet somehow managed to hit Dev with an iron rod and helped that girl to escape, but Geet landed herself into trouble trying to help that girl...she was surrounded by these goons and one of them hit her on her head with the lathi and she fell down unconscious, they thought that she was dead and they ran from that spot.

                Maan felt that he should have helped her and tried to know what happened from the people around, no one knew anything about that incident and that was not reported in the paper too, he then forgot about it completely till he met her again.

                "mujhe maaf kardho"

Geet just can't control her anger, what if she also went her way like Maan, what would have happened to that little girl? Isn't she like his sister, why are men like this?

She just gave him a tight slap...

Maan thought that he deserved this, and worse...Yes, these people who don't try to stop a crime are equally responsible for the crime ...Had the police been little more alert? Had the government been little more dutiful? Had Dev's father stopped him when he did his first mistake? Had Maan helped her on that day? Many crimes against women could have been averted with the support of men...haina?

                There is complete silence for a minute...then Geet starts walking and Maan followed her silently...he didn't know what would she do? She just went back to the campus, to Ms.Mathur's house...it's nearly 6 am and Ms.Mathur is already up...she is preparing tea for Geet...Geet rings the bell...Ms.Mathur is surprised to see her at the door that too with a man...

                Ms.Mathur is afraid that it's one of dev's men... She dragged Geet inside quickly and closed the door...Maan stood there waiting for Geet's reaction, he wants her to forgive him, he is not returning till then...Geet calmed Ms.Mathur down and opened the door...so she forgave him?

                " woh kaun hai? tum aaj hi kanyakumari jaa rahi ho, pack your bags, I have spoken to my friend Shanthi and she is ready to help us, she will take good care of you?

Geet is shocked to hear this, so is Maan...

                "kya? "...donno ek saath chilathe hai...

                "haan,  ab tum yahan nahi reh sakthi"

Geet thinks of how she had troubled this old lady all these days...

                "sorry, meinne aapko bahut tang kiya haina? Ab aaise nahi hoga?

                Ms.Mathur hugs Geet..."aaise koi baat nahi hai, tum meri beti jaise ho, aur tummare alawa mere liye koi nahi hai iss duniya mein?

                "haina? Ye dekho, ye aapka bete jaise hi hai, haina?"

Maan doesn't know what to say, he just smiles...

                "thoda akdu hai, swarthy hai, dusron ki kadhar nahi hai, lekhin chalega"

What an introduction?

                "Dil se achcha hai"

So she has something good to say about him at last...

                "tummara naam kya hai?" Geet asked

Maan is surprised ...kaise ladhki hai?

"Maan Singh Khurana"

"meinne tere naam poocha, pura khandhan ki nahi"

"what?"

"btw, I'm Geet, Geet Handa"

Maan looks at her and then at Ms.Mathur...

Ms. Mathur invites him for tea...

"andar aao, chai phikke jao"

" ye toh yahan roz aatha hai, issko koi invitation ki zaroorat nahi, aao aao" Geet too welcomes him..

Ms.Mathur asks Maan to accompany Geet to Kanyakumari as her life is in danger...she tells them how some goons came in search of Geet the following day and how Ms.Mathur gave her the pills and how some of her students helped her to hide Geet in their room. Geet doesn't know anything about thia as Ms.Mathur didn't tell her anything as she would get scared...

She had then got a call from the principal himself that his son is out of control and he is after Geet's life...he wants to take revenge...so Ms.Mathur decided to send her out of Mumbai, and has arranged for her stay at a friend's place in TN...

Maan told her that there is no need for Geet to hide and he is going to tackle this himself...get rid of that Dev with the help of his father...he is ready to help them in any way he could...Ms.Mathur thanks him and Geet looks at him and wonders why the sudden change?

Then Maan and Geet filed a case against dev and they became the witness... Maan had seen Geet running for her life that night and Geet can identify the goons...till then no one was ready to help Geet in her fight against Dev and his notorious gang who had the Excel campus under their control and sold drugs to the students...Geet gave an account of everything that happened and Maan gathered evidences against them...Dev and his gang were arrested and the principal resigned his job...Ms.Mathur became the new principal and Geet stayed with her happily...

Maan helped Geet get out of her trouble and they together helped the students who were affected by drugs...Geet began to like Maan as he is now changing, taking care of Geet and also concerned about his peers...Maan proposed Geet and Geet accepted with one condition that he would never disrespect women, and Maneet's love story continued in the woods...

Now Maan doesn't take the pipes but Geet loved that Maan better...

"Maan,  kabhi kabhi choron ki tarah chup chupke pyaar karne mein hi zyada mazaa aatha hai, haina babaji?" Geet told Maan about her new wish...Maan is getting ready to climb the pipes once again for his mishty...

Posted: 10 years ago
Mystery OS
part 3
last part
awesome...
nice one dear...
Posted: 10 years ago
thank god sab kuch teek hogaya so geet tried to expose dev and his gang and they tried to kill her instead of giving lift maan left geet and that girl

chalo ab sab kuch teek hogaya and they both finally confessed their love
Posted: 10 years ago
these are my OS for COTW Thread...
wanted to have it in my collection...
 

                Kaisa ye safar hai?

 

Ye Manneet ki time travel hai'.

This is just a jolly ride so no logic only Maneet magic'..

Ek aur baat, this concept is borrowed from Mr. S. Ve Sekar's (popular Tamil drama artist) drama,  "Mahabarathaththil Mangatha"'''

Toh kahaani aaise hai ki Maan's grandfather Mr.Lala Khurana is an absent minded  scientist''

He turned Maan's elder brother into a chimpanzee while trying an experiment on him'..

Dadi has managed to keep Maan away from this pagalpan''

Maan takes care of KC''

Dadu has newly appointed an assistant for him, Geet Handa'..

Dadu ka lab KM mein hi hai'.

Mann is yet to meet his Geet'..

Aaj Geet ka pehla din haina?

Geet jaldhi aathi hai, she finds this chimpanzee given special care and even a special AC room'.

Najaane kaise log hai, apne paas paisa hai toh kuch bhi karenge?

Isse behthar do chaar bache ko padathe, haina babaji?

Nakul chimpanzee ke liye banana bhake aur banana fritters lekhe aatha'..

Geet ko laga woh Geet ke liye laya hai'.

Nakul: haath mat lagao

Geet: kyun? Issme koi zeher mila hua hai kya? Ye bhi Mr.Khurana ka koi naya experiment hai kya?

Nakul: mahi, ye Dev baba ke liye hai

Geet: kaun?

Nakul feeds the chimpanzee''

Geet: toh isska naam bhi hai?

Nakul: haan, Ye Dev Singh Khurana hai

Geet: what? Ye bhi ek Khurana hai, meinne suna Khuranas bahut smart hothe hai, magar ye kya?

Nakul: iss, dhere bolo, Dev sab ko bhura lagega

Dev gets angry at this comment'..

He throws the water bottle  on Geet''

Geet catches it and teases him''.

Tabhi Mr.Khurana aathe hai'..

Geet: gud morning sir

Mr.Khurana: morning, tum kaun ho?

Geet: sir, mein Geet Handa, kal aapne hi interview liya tha, aur mujhe job bhi diya tha, bhool gaye ho kya?

Mr.Khurana: sorry, toh Ms.Jeet

Geet: sir, Jeet nahi Geet

Mr.Khurana: tum zindagi mein jeethna chahathi ho toh apna naam badaldo, Ms.Jeet

Geet aage kuch nahi kehthi, aaj pehla din hai, inse behas karkke koi faida nahi hoga, upar se ye naukri bhi haath se nikhal jayega''

Mr.Khurana: so Ms.Jeet, lets celebrate, tumme naukri milnne ki kushi mein ye lo, kuch meete kalo

He gives her some sort of sweet'.

Geet chak ke dekhthi, it's not that bad, ek aur milega?

He gives her one more''.

Nakul shows Geet her table'.

Geet checks the computer and couldn't understand anything'..

Suddenly Geet feels sleepy and she falls asleep on her chair''

Maan is getting ready for office''.

Dadi: Maan bete, aapne Dadaji ko kahin dekha?

Maan: nahi Daadi, woh apne lab mein hi honge, mein dekhke aatha hoon

Maan goes to see Dadu''.

Dadu: toh Ms.Jeet, tumme file mil gayi?

Maan: Dadu,

Dadu: halo young man, who are you? Where is Ms.Jeet?

Maan: it's me Maan, app ko yaad bhi hai ki mein bhi aapka hi potha hoon

Dadu: ohhh Maan? Tum toh Chimpanzee ban gaye the na?

Maan: Dadu, Woh toh Bro hai

Dadu: tum fikar mat karo, tumme mein Sher banatha hoon

Maan: dadu, police ko patha chaltha toh aapka lab ko band karwayenge

Dadu: tumne Ms.Jeet ko dekha

Nakul comes''

Dadu: Nakul, woh ladhki kahan hai?

Nakul: woh toh aapki mitaai kakke so gayi

Dadu: kya? Oh no, not again

Maan: what happened Dadu?

Dadu: Who mittai nahi, time capsule tha

Maan: kya?

Dadu: haan Maan, ussko khathe toh hum waqt ke peeche chale jaathe hai

Maan: ab kya hoga?

Dadu: mein bhi kissiko dekhe check karna chahatha tha

Maan: Dadu, ye mazak karne ka waqt nahi hai, jaldhi bathayiye ki ab kya hoga?

Dadu: let's wait and see

Maan: kya?

Dadu:  pehle  hum jakke dekhthe hai ki mera tablet kaam  kartha hai ya nahi

Dadi bhi aathi'..

Dadi: Maan bete, ye kya ho raha hai?

Maan: mujhe bhi kuch samaj mein nahi aatha

They go to see Geet'..

Geet is missing'.she has disappeared''

Nakul: lagtha hai woh ladhki baagh gayi

Dadu: success'.success'. I did it

Dadi: what? Aapne uss bechari ko kya kiya?

Dadu: meinne ussko teleport kardhiya, she is going to make history

Maan: teek hai, ussko pehle wapas lao

Dadu: woh mein nahi kar saktha

Dadi: kya? Aapka kya matlab?

Dadu: meinne ab tak wapas aane ki tablet nahi banayi

Maan: jaise bro chimpanzee se insaan nahi ban sakthe, woh ladhki bhi wapas nahi aasakthi

Dadi: unnkke parents ko hum kya jawab denge?

Dadu: hare, unko toh apne beti se garv hona chahiye, she has just made a daring act

Dadi: inko toh mein samja nahi sakthi, Maan bete, aapko hi kuch karna padega

Maan: mein? Mein kya kar saktha hoon?

Dadi: ab aap hi bathayiye hum kya karein? Maan bete aap jakke ussko lekhe aayiye

Maan: lekhin Dadima, mujhe kya patha woh kahan gayi?

Dadu: I think she might have gone back 200 years, she had two tablets

Dadi: aap ko achche se yaad haina?

Dadu: ya ya, I'm sure

Dadi: Maan bete aap bhi do tablets lelo

Maan: dadi?

Dadi: ye lijiye, hummare paas aur koi rastha nahi hai

Maan takes them'.

Dadu: aur ye lo aur kuch lekhe jao, tummara kaam aayega, ye lappy bhi lekhe jao

Maan: lekhin wahan kaise charge karoonga?

Dadu: ye solar powered hai, issko apne paas hi rakho, kahin kona nahi, kyunkke jab mein wapas aane ka tablet banaoonga toh tumme issi lappy pe contact kar saktha hoon

Maan: teek hai Dadu, lekhin mein ussko kaise pehechaanoonga?

Dadu: usska profile bhi lappy mein hai

Maan: achcha dadi, mein chaltha hoon

Dadi: bye bete, take care, humme call karna

Dadu: haan haan ye toh kC jaa raha hai, tumme call karega, hare ye toh time travel karnewala hai, Maan hummara Khurana Khanadaan ka naam roshan karnewala hai

Dadi: aap toh pehle kaam pe lagjao, jaise bhi unkko wapas lana hai

Dadu: don't worry darling, Khuranas kabhi har nahi manthe, haina maan?

Maan: ji Dadu

Maan too falls asleep and within minutes he also disappears''

Maan jab neendh se uttha toh woh 200 years back aagaya''

Shajahan ka zamaana hai'.

Maan finds out that it's Agra and Taj Mahal is under construction'.

He goes and checks with the masona working there'.

They look at him suspiciously'.he looks way diff from them'..

He slowly gains their confidence and speaks with them'..

Mason: salam mallekum huzoor

Maan: mallekum salaam, toh yahan Taj Mahal bannewala hai

Mason: nahi nahi

Maan: kya? Toh ye kya hai>

Mason: ye toh hummare naye mehmaan ko swagat karne ka imaarat hai

Maan: what? Queen Victoria aarahi hai? lekhin Gateway of India toh Mumbai mein hai, ye kaunsa imarat hai?

Mason:  "Jai Geet Darwaza"

Maan: kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? yahan toh Taj Mahal banega

Mason: lekhin hummare naye memsaab ne ussko badaldhi

Maan: kaunsa memsaab? Ye

Maan shows Geet's photo on the lappy

Mason: haan , yahi, aap inko kaise jaanthe ho?

Maan: mein inkka dhost hoon, mujhe inkke paas lekhe jao

Mason: nahi nahi, koi unsse nahi mil saktha, woh hummare kaas mehmaan hai

Maan bribes him with his costly Rolex watch''

Mason: isse mein kya karoonga?

Maan then gives him his gold chain''

Mason takes him to Geet''

Geet is enjoying her Royal feast'.

Maan ko bhi bahut bhook lagtha hai''

Geet: ye kaun hai?

Maan: toh tum ho Geet?

Geet: tum mere naam ko kaise jaanthe?

Maan: mein toh tummara pura history jaantha hoon

Geet: kya? Tumme kisnne andar aane dhi?

Geet claps her hands and the sepoys come'..

Maan: tum kya kar arhi ho?

Geet: jaanthe ho ki mein kaun hoon? Mr.Rasgulla ki kaas mehmaan and advisor

Maan: kya? Kaun Mr.Rasgulla

Geet: hare, Shajahan, ye log ussko Badusha bhulathe hai, lekhin mujhe Badusha pasand nahi hai, mujhe toh Rasgulle pasand hai, issiliye MR.Rasgulla

Sepoy: hummare badhusha ko naam lekhe bulathe ho

They surround him'..

Geet: chddho isse

They leave'..

Maan: jaanthe ho kit um kya kar arhi ho?

Geet: haan

Maan: ye mein kya sun raha hoon? Taj Mahal ke jagah koi aur building kaise ban saktha?

Geet: kyunki mein yahan aayi hoona? Woh toh mujhe welcome karne ke liye hai

Maan: pagal ho gayi ho kya? History ko koi badal nahi saktha

Geet: agar time travel kar sakthe toh History ko bhi badal sakthe, haina babaji?

Maan: yahan bhi tera babaji honge kya?

Geet: haan, mere babaji hamesha mere saath hi rehthe, ahina babaji?

Maan: mere baat suno, hum yahan se chale jaathe hai, aao mere saath

Geet: nahi, mujhe kahin nahi aana

Maan: Geeet

Hearing Maan's voice Shajahan comes'.

The asks his men tyo arrest Maan''''''..

At the darbar''

Geet speaks in English and everyone parises her for that'.

Maan too learns the trick to fool them'..

Maan: so Ms.Geet, tell him that I'm your friend

Geet: what? You are not my friend

Maan: you stupid girl , I'm trying to save your life

Geet: what? You have mistaken, I'm the one who could save your life

Maan: what?

Geet: Mr.Rasgulla, mein toh isse jaathi bhi nahi, he is a stranger, Dust Danav

Shahjahan: issko lekhe jao

Maan: Geeet, stop them now, Mr.Choclate mousse, ye joot bol rahi hai

Geet: ahre, ye Mr. Rasgulla hai

Maan: job hi ho, inkko samjao, abhi

Geet: teek hai, teek hai, hum tumme choddenge, lekhin ek shard par

Maan: what? Tum samajthi kay apne aapko?

Shajahan: kamosh, hummare gurudevi se aaise baat kaethe ho?

He takes his sword'.

Geet: nahi Mr.Rasgulla, mere baat ko suniye

Shajahan: kahiye gualbari

Maan: kya?

Geet: ye meri pet name hai

Maan: mujeh toh ye teek nahi lagtha

Geet: kyun jalthe ho?

Maan: kya? Tum toh yahi inkke saath raho, mein chaltha hoon

Geet: ahre hare, ek minute, hum tumme chdtenge, lekhi tumme mujhe harana hoga

Maan: ye kaisa khel hai?

Geet: Vada Pav eating competition, toh sab tayaar haina?

Chorus: haan

Maan: ye sab kya hai?

Geet: hare ye log toh Vada pav bhi nahi jaanthe, meinne hi inkko recipe diya tha, ab toh vadaPav mr.Rasgulla ki favourite dish ho gayi hai

Maan: ye tumne teek nahi kiya?

Geet: batein badh mein karna, pehle mujhe harao

Maan: mein fried food nahi katha

Geet: toh teek, toh har manjao

Maan: nahi, mein tayaar hoon

They start the competition''

Geet feels bad for him, she wants to save him, she just eats 4 Vada Pavs'

Itne din Mumbai mein rehkar bhi Maan ne Vada Pav nahi kayi, he just loves them'..

He has 10 of them''

He also becomes a guest'..

He convinces Shajahan to start building the taj, he also shows pictures of Taj for reference'..

He then comes to know that Shahjahan has decided to marry Geet'

He wants to help her'.

He enters her room that night'..

Geet tries to stop him'.

Geet: chor chor

Maan pushes her and closes her mouth'.

Maan: chup'bilkul chup

Maneet eyelock'.mahi''.

Maan: aao mere saath

He takes her to the window and shows what's happening'..

Geet: ye sab kay hai? kal koi aur aaraha hai kya future se?

Maan: nahi, teri shadhi ki tayaari chal rahi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, Mr.Rasgulla tumse nikhaa karna chahathe hai

Geet: toh mein unkke Begum banjaaoongi? Aur mera beta mogul emperor

Maan: tum toh sach mein pagal ho

Geet: kyun? Tujhe kya problem hai?

Maan: sapne mat dekho, aaisa kuch nahi honewala, ho sakhe toh tumme bhi markke Mumtaj ke paas burry karenge

Geet: aaise kaise ho saktha? Mein unkko kehkke mere liye ek aur Taj banwaoongi Yamuna ke uss par

Maan: yahan tera jaan kathre mein hai, aur tumme Taj Mahal ki padi?

Geet: haan, chalo, yahan se bhaag jaathe hai

But the sepoys catch them''

Maan tries to fight with them'.

Geet: hare, insse kyun ladthe ho? tummare paas tablets haina? Mujhe do

Maan: sambalkke

Geet takes 2 of them'..

Maan: hare do lene ki kya zaroorat thi? Hummare paas bas dus hi tablets hai

Geet: hare meinne pehle do hi liya tha

Maan: toh

Geet: agar mein ek lethi aur aada teleport hothi toh?

Maan: kya?

Geet: jaise sirf mera left teleport hotha, ya sirf mera right, ya phir right hand and left keg

Maan: dadaji aapko ye pagal ladhki hi milli thi apne assiatant banne ke liye?

Geet falls asleep'.they take her to the mandap'..

She disappears from there'.Maan is put in the jail''

Maan: Dadaji meinne aapka kya bigada hai? mujhe aaisa saza kyun dethe ho? agar aapko saza dena hi hai toh mujhe sher banao ya phir chuha banao, lekhin pehle mujhe iss pagal ladhki se bachao'.

Maan too takes 2 tablets and leaves''

Agar time hothi toh Maneet ka agla mulakaat Romeo aur Juliet se hoga'

Hppe you all like it''

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