Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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                                                Raanjhnaa...

 

KC...

Geet apne cabin mein hai...

As usual she is late...

Maan has called her twice and she still can't find Mr.Sharma's file...

She has lost the file...Sasha had destroyed the file even the soft copy...

What will Geet do now?

She is so scared, her new boss MSK is such a Dhust danav that he keeps scolding her for no reason at all...

No matter how hard she tries to satisfy him he finds fault with her always...

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She is still new and she is still learning , he should give her some time, but he always expects her to be perfect just like him...how is it possible? She has no experience, she has just  graduated and this is her first job... But she is also adamant and doesn't listen to him just like that, she has her own ideas and her own style of doing things and Maan wants things to be done his way...

This results in clashes everyday and Geet is fed up with his attitude...

Geet: ye toh aaise hi mujhse naraaz ho jaathe, aur ab file bhi kho gayi? Babaji ye aap ne achcha nahi kiya?

Maan calls ...

Geet runs and takes the phone...she knows that its Maan...

She can see him thru the dividers... ...

In her tension Geet grabs the phone so fast that it falls on the ground...

Maan stands there staring her...

Geet tries to pick up the phone...

She keeps an eye on him...

He is fuming...he bangs the phone and comes to her cabin...

Maan: Geeet

Geet runs towards him and hits him...

Maan is having trouble handling this silly girl from Hoshiarpur...

Everyone is afraid of him but Maan is afraid of this girl?

From the day she entered  KC, Maan has lost his senses and is not able to concentrate in his work at all...how could he? This girl keeps pestering him 24*7...

Jab dekho Maan sir Maan sir karkke Maan ke peeche hi padhi hai...

Maan has just told her that he hates mistakes and she can ask him if she has any doubts...

That's it, she runs to him every second and asks 100s of questions...

Her eyes constantly keep watching his and he is not able to confront them...

He keeps avoiding them but they keep troubling him even when she is not around him...

But now she is avoiding him...

Maan is puzzled, what's wrong with her today?

Why is she hiding from me?

Maan can't keep away from her...

He just looses his patience and enters her cabin for the first time...

Everyone is surprised to see him going to his secretary's room...

Geet also didn't expect this...she is shocked and very afraid...

Maan: Geeet

Geet:  Maan sir

Maan: mein kab se tumme bhula raha hoon, tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: mein sir?

Maan: Geet, tumme patha haina? Kal Mr.sharma ki meeting hai, sab tayaar haina?

Geet: haan sir

Geet lies to him, Maan knows that from her eyes...

For she is not able to meet his eyes and speak, she is avoiding them now...

Maan: Geet, kya baat hai?

Geet: kuch nahi sir, sab tayaar hai, aap fikar mat karo, mein hoona?

Maan: kya?

Geet: woh, meinne sara kaam kardhi, aapne bhi sare files ko dekha hoga

Maan: nahi Geet, meinne nahi dekha, mein kab se files ka intrezaar kar raha hoon. Tumne toh lekhe hi nahi aaya tha

Geet: kya? Meinne Adi sir ko files dekhe aapke table pe rakhne ko kaha sir, lagthe hai Adi sir bhool gaye, mein jaakke unkke table se lekhe aathi hoon

Geet tries to leave...

Jaise bhi yahan se escape hona haina?

Maan stops her...he pulls her in and closes the door...

Geet ko kuch kuch hotha ahi...

Ye Maan aaise hi Geet se dhoor jaane ke chakkar mein bar bar Geet ke kareeb aajaatha...

He holds her against the wall and locks her in his arms...

Ab bechari ki saaz hi rukh jaathe...she just freezes...

Maan looks into her eyes and Geet bows her head...

Aur Geet ke dadhkan tez ho jaathe ,her gaal lal ho jaathe...Geet feels shy...

Maan: kaahan bhaagthi ho?

Geet: sir?

Maan: files Adi ke paas nahi hai, meinne abhi abhi Adi ko poocha tha

Geet: kya? baabji, ye toh sab jaanthe hai

Maan: Geet, sach sach bathao, tumne sare files tayaar kiya hai ya nahi?

Geet: babaji ki kasam sir, meinne sare files tayaar kiya hai

Maan: toh files kahan hai?

Geet: woh...woh...

Maan: Geet, joot mat bolo, mujhe joot se sakt nafrat hai

Geet: mein bhi kabhi joot nahi bolthi, samje aap?

Maan:what? Phir files kahan hai? mujhe dikhao, mein unkko dekhkke bina yahan se nahi jaanewala i

Maan goes and sits on her chair...

Geet pretends to search the file...

Maan keeps staring her...

Geet gets near him and she keeps looking at him...

Ab ye mujhe aaise kyun dekh rahi hai? jaise meinne hi file ko churaya ho?

Geet bends down to look under the table and she trips and falls on his lap...

Maan is caught in a trance and he finds it hard to let her go...

He wants her to stay on his laps ...he wants to caress her and feel her from top to bottom, every inch of her ...he is crazy...for he hates women...yes he hates women ...he is reminded of Sameera and her foolish act...she had hurt him so much that it's hard for him to love anyone...he has become immune to it...he knows that there is no room for love in his life anymore...

That thought gets him back to his senses and he leaves his hold...

He gets angry for Geet has spoiled his pavithratha...haina?

Maan: geeet

Geet: aap mere chair pe beitthe toh mein kaise file ko dhoondhthi?

Maan gets up and Geet sits on her chair and looks into the drawers...

Maan stands there looking at her...

Geet: aaise kyun dekhthe ho?

Maan: file hoga toh milega?

Geet: kya? Aap kehna kya chahathe ho?

Maan: tumne files ko abhi tak tayaar nahi kiya hai

Geet: aap mujhpe shak karthe ho?

Maan: shak nahi, mujhe pura yakheen hai ki tum joot bol rahi ho

Geet: kya?

Geet gets up...she is very angry...

She picks the papers kept on her table and throws them one by one on the floor...

She jst throws the paper weight so hard that it just missed Maan's head by an inch...

Maan feels like she wanted to hit him with that...

Maan: geeet, stop this

Geet: aap ko mere bathon mein viswaas nahi hothi?

Geet finally finds a part of the file...

She had left some papers without filing for she had some doubts in them and she wanted to ask Maan about them, but she somehow lost the file and was afraid to face him ...

Maan now believes her and he tries to help her...

Maan: Geet, achche se yaad karo, tumne file ko kahan rakha tha?

Geet: meinne yahi rakha tha

Maan: toh file yaahn se gayab kaise ho gaya?

Geet: mujhe patha hotha toh mein itna pareshaan nahi hothi

Maan: shayad tumne kissi ko diya tha?

Geet: nahi, mujhe patha tha ki woh kitna important hai, issi liye mein do din se kudh sare tayaari kar rahi thi

Maan: mein kuch nahi jaantha, mujhe kal file chahiye, samji tum

Geet: teek hai

Geet apne laptop lekhe conference room chale jaathi...

Wahan koi ussko disturb nahi karega...

She starts preparing once again...

It's 7 pm and everyone has left...Geet is still working...

Maan feels very bad for her and he goes to check her...

Geet is very tired...

Maan : Geet, tum thode dher aaram karo, mein ye kaam kartha hoon

Geet: nahi sir, mein kar sakthi

Maan: Geet, tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?

Maan sbatches the file...Geet tries to hold it back...

She looses her balance and falls...

Maan leaves the file and catches her...Maneet eyelock...mahi...

All the papers fly and fall all over the room...

Geet tries to collect them and Maan helps her...

One paper fiies towards the window and Geet chases it...

She tries to catch it and she almost falls when Maan catches her from behind...

Maan pulls her and she goes and falls on him...

Geet feels nervous and she bows her head...

Maan raises her chin and looks at her beautiful eyes...

He gazes her beauty and his looks freeze on her lips...

Maan holds her by the waist and pulls her closer...

Geet pushes him off and moves away from him...

Maan finds it hard to control himself...

He goes and sits on the table and starts his work...

Geet is afraid to go near him and she keeps standing at a distance...

Maan: wahan kadhe kadhe kya dekh rahi ho? ye tera kaam hai, mein sirf madat karne aaya hoon, tum apna kaam karo, warna kal tak ye file tayaar nahi hogi

Geet comes and sits on the other corner and she also starts working...

After a while Maan finds her sleepy and he asks her to take rest and he would drop her himself after finishing the work...

Geet goes and sits in a corner and she falls asleep,,,

Maan looks at her uncomfortable and goes and sits near her and he too falls asleep...

Next morning Mr. Sharma comes and the meeting is very successful...

Geet expected Maan to praise her hard work...

But Maan doesn't utter a word...

Geet is puzzled by this behavior...

Geet knows that she has started to love him though Maan is a Dhust danav...

She can't stop admiring him and she can't suppress her feelings for him, not even infront of him, Maan is aware of what's going on in between them for he too feels the same for her...

But at times he goes crazy and starts behaving indifferently towards her just like today's meeting...

He looks her like an alien and avoids her completely...

Geet is hurt and she won't leave him like that anymore...

She wants to know the reason behind his actions...

Last night was not the first time that Maan lost his control, this is going on for sometime now, whenever they are alone , that rainy night when Maan hugged her and she felt like she is in heaven ...

They were just returning from Mr.Scindia's party...

Maan was supposed to drop her...

He was just thinking of the party...

The way Geet enterd and searched for him...

She didn't know anyone except Maan and so hse felt very uncomfortable...

Maan was standing upstairs having a drink with Mr.Scindia when Geet entered the party hall, she was very nervous, completely feeling out of place... hse looked ravish in the saree and that rascal Rahul neared her with his dirty intentions...

Geet tried to get away but he bocked her way and tried to force her to dance with him...

Maan rushes down ...

Maan: Geeet

Geet runs towards him just like a kid finding her mother after being lost in the crowd...

Geet: Maan sir, aap kahan the? Mein aapko hi doondh rahi thi

After that she stayed close to him and  felt secure with him and enjoyed the party...

Someone in the crowd asked Geet for a dance and she looked at Maan...

Maan suddenly caught her by the waist and pulled her closer...

Kurban hua...

Maan started to dance with her...

Geet struggled to keep pace with him and couldn't match his passionate dance...

His moves aroused her hidden desires and she lost her control...

Maan vented his feelings atlast, let out his desire that he had successfully buried deep down in his heart...this girl has been troubling him for sometime...

He knew that he is slowly losing his control over himself and so he left at once...

Geet followed him blindly...

He offered to drop her and on the way...

Geet kept talking but Maan was not in a mood to listen...

As she kept asking him questions and looked at him for an answer Maan lost his patience and stopped the car...he asked her to get down and tolg her to get a taxi...

Geet looked disappointed but she walked away slowly...

Maan kept looking at her as hse disappeared in the darkness...

It started drizzling and Maan followe her fearing that she would be scared...

But to his surprise he finds her damcing in the rain like an angel...

He parks the car and gets down...

Not knowing what he is doing he just goes and touches her shoulder...

Geet trurns back and finds Maan...

She is so happy to see him and she just guves him a hug...

Maan hugs her back and found solace in her arms...

He suddenly feels that all his pain has gone, all is sufferings left him in a secomd...

He finally foung his long lost happiness in her arms...

He felt like he has been longing for this comfort all these days...

Longing for this love, longing for this company...

Longing for someone who would reciprocate his love, soenone who would love him back just like him, someone who would fill his empty life with her love...

Someone who would love him unconditionally...

Some unknown fear crept in all of a sudden and he stepped away ...

That night too he just left her alone in the rain and suddenly went back...

She couldn't understand why he left her alone in that dark rainy night...

She also knew that he just disappeared from her eyes but followed her to her house and made sure that she got home safely...

Though he may shout at her all the time she finds some kind of affection in his words and she also sees pain in his eyes whenever he hurts her and she breaks down...

Geet thinks about what happened that night and tries to find out what's wrong...

 As she thinks of their dancing together... she could sense his passion and desire in his eyes...his hungry eyes killing her and she even thought that she might have aroused his feelings unknowingly and tried to maintain a safe distance from him...

 

But as she treis to move away from him, he started to come closer and closer that she felt suffocating and his closeness triggered her hidden desires which she had for him...

Whenevr her desire over powers her shyness, she breaks her rules and she shamelessly surrenders herself to him ,though he is also in the same condition he is overcome by a sense of guilt and he leaves her...Geet doesn't know why this guilty feeling...

Why don't he acceot that he too loves her?...

Why is he afraid of his love?

Why does he feel like it's some crime?

MSK ko pyaar hotha toh ye koi guna nahi hai, MSK bhi insaan haina?

Shayad ussko lagtha hai ki Geet usski layak nahi hai?

Geet is totally confused...

Next week they go to Manali for a meeting...

Geet wanted to shop and Maan stayed back at the hotel...

Maan tried to stop her but she was adamant...

Maan let her go but he followed her as usual...

Geet lost her way and she was scared ...

She tried to call Maan, but Maan has left his mobile at the hotel...

She sat on a bench and was shivering in the cold...

Suddenly she felt warm...

Maan covered her with his coat and lifted her and took her to a safe place...

They were all alone in that place and both were losing themselves to their burning desire...

They almost lost themselves to each other but Maan restrained himself at the last moment...

From that moment he had stopped talking to her and avoids seeing her...

He asks Sasha and Adi to take over Geet's job too...

Geet is left stranded in the middle helping Sasha...

Maan avoids meeting her...he is afraid of her piercing eyes shooting questions at him one after another...Geet, apne aakhon se sawaal karna bandh karo...for god's sake Geet, have some mercy on me...I can't see you in pain...I can't hurt you anymore Geet, just stay away from me, I'm scared that I will harm you Geet, if something happens to you then how would I ever forgive myself?...

He just stares her whnever she tries to stop him or comes in his way...

Geet can't tolerate this anymore...

The more he avoids her the more she wants to be in his arms...

She feels desperate and she decides to go and meet him at KM...

Maan is venting out his anger and feelings thru his tai-chi...

He was hurting himself for what he did to Geet...

He is not ready to loose her also...

His has lost his Sameera b'coz of his madness...

He won't let his love hurt Geet, she is so innocent and so young...

she doesn't know him and his past...

if she comes to know him then she will also hate him...

and that will make him angry and he will hurt her inturn...

It's better for her to leave him now...

He feels better living alone and that's what he had been doing all these years after sameera left...

He was so strong and never let anyone else affect him until he met Geet...

Geet didn't do anything intentionally and she herself doesn't know what's wrong with her...

She fell in love with him unknowingly and she has just now recognized her love for him...

She is sure that it's love, and she is madly in love with Maan...

Maan is hurting himself and Geet feels his pain...

She can't see him hurt himself like that...

She goes and stops him...

Geet: Maan sir

Maan: Geet, tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Maan sir, aap ko kya ho gaya?

Maan: Geet, tum chali jao yahan se

Geet: mein nahi jaoongi

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap ne suna nahi meinne kya kaha? Mein nahi jaoongi, jab tak mujhe patha nahi chaltha ki aap ka problem kya hai, mein yahan se nahi jaaanewali

Maan: Geet, mein aakhri bar keh raha hoon, chale jao

Geet: nahi jaaongi

Maan pushes her off...she falls on the ground...

Maan hitshis fist on the wall hard and hurts himself...

Maan runs and lifts her...

Maan: tum mere baat ko sunthe kyun hai ho?

Geet: Maan sir, aapke haath

His hand is bleeding...

Maan: Geet, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: Maan sir, aapkke haath se khoon nikhal raha hai

Geet holds his hand and looks at the blood...

Maan: Geet, tum chale jao, mujhe akhela chod do

Geet: nahi, mein aapko akhele nahi chod sakthi

Maan: Geeet, tum samajthi kyun nahi? Tumme yahan nahi aana chahiye tha

Geet: mein aapko chodkke nahi jaoongi

she hugs him tight...

Maan too hugs her...

Maan: Geet, tum mujhe kyun nahi chod sakthi?

Geet: mein aapse pyaar karthi hoon, Maan sir, I love you

Maan: lekhin Geet, tum mujhe nahi jaanthi

Geet: mein aapko achche se jaanthi hoon, aap bhi mujshe pyaar karthe ho

Maan: nahi

Geet: Maan sir, mujhse joot mat bolo

Maan couldn't hide his love...

Maan: Geet, tum mujhe aaise kyun pareshaan karthi ho?

Geet: aap mujhse kyun bhaagthe ho? issiliye haina ki aap mujhse pyaar karthe ho aur usse accept nahi karna chahathe ho

Maan: nahi

Geet: kyun sir? Ek secretary apne boss se pyaar nahi kar sakthi?

Maan: Geeet, mujhse sawaal karna bandh karo

Geet: ya phir aap apne secretary se pyaar nahi kar sakthe?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: kyun sir? Mein aapki khabil nahi hoon? Mein aapkke layak nahi hoon?

Maan: Geeet, bas karo, stop it Geeet

Geet: kyun sir? Aapko dar hai ki aapka status kam ho jayega

Maan: Geeet, ab chalthe ho ya nahi

Maan is very angry...

Geet: aap mere sawaal ko jawaab do, mein chali jaathi

Maan: Geet, mein aag hoon, tum mere paas aathi toh jal jaooge

Geet: aap se dhoor rehne se behthar mein uss aag mein jalkke marjaathi

Maan: tum bhi ussi ki tarah ho, tumne ab stapith kar liay ki aakhir tum bhi bewakoof ho, mein kaise bhool gaya ki tum bhi ek ladhki ho

He drags her and throws her out of KM...

Dadi watches all this...

Next day dadi meets Geet...

Geet: aap?

Dadi: humme aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai

Geet: kahiye

Dadi: aapko patha hai ki Maan aapse kitna pyaar karthe hai?

Geet: haan, leklhin woh toh saaf saaf inkaar karthe hai, patha nahi meri kya kammi hai?

Dadi: kammi aap ki nahi hai bete, Maan ki hai

Geet: kya?

Dadi: haan bete, pehle bhi issi tarah Maan apne munshi ji ki beti sameera ko bahut pasand  kiya tha, jab humme usske barein mien patha chala humne unkki shadhi tey karli, par Sameera kissi aur se pyaar karthi thi, ye baat ussne hum mein se kissi ko nahi bathaya, ussne socha ki munshiji hummare bahut izzat karthe hai aur woh usski baat ko kabhi nahi manenge, aur shadhi ke din ussne shadhi ke mandap mein hi kudh kushi karli, sabko lagtha hai ki Maan ke wajhe se hi Sam mar gayi, par Sam toh Maan se darkke iss baat ko Maan se chupaya tha, Sam Maan se bhaagthi rahi, Maan ko laga ki woh Maan se sharmathi, unko galatfami ho gayi

Ussdin se Maan ladhkiyon se nafrat karne lage, par aajkal humne dekha ki Maan dhere dhere badal rahe hai, humme tabhi laga ki hummare Maan humme wapas miljayenge, ab aap hi humme hummare Maan ko wapas desakthe hai Geet, warna hum apne Maan ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kho jayenge

Geet: Dadi, ye aap kaise baat karthe hai?

Dadi: ab aap hi hummari aakhri umeed hai bete

Geet: aapko kya lagtha? Mein unkko itne asaani se chod doongi? Nahi, mein bhi Geet Handa hoon

Dadi: ab aap akhele nahi hai, hum aapke saath hai

Geet kuch gundon ko hire karkke Geet ke upar hamla karne ki natak karthi...

Geet stands at the bus stop...Maan's car passes by  and Geet signals...

some gundas come out of the darkness and try to misbehave...

Maan stops the car and comes ...

They wait for Geet's next signal...

Geet Maan ko dekhthe hi apne aap ko bhool jaathi and the gundas keep looking at her in anticipation...

Maan ko shak hotha...

He turns back and Geet shouts...koi bachao

Maan had seen her wink...he knows that this is a drama...and he leaves...

Geet: hare, Maan sir, Maan sir, baabji ye plan bhi flop ho gaya?  ab mein kya karoon?

Gunda: madamji kahan jaathe ho aap?

Geet: hare, aap logon ko yahan koi kaam nahi hai,  jao

Gunda: aaise kaise jayenge?

Geet: phir?

Gunda: hummara paisa do, 10000

Geet: kya? lekhin aapne koi kaam nahi kiya tha

Gunda: ab tum paise dethi ho ya nahi

Geet: ye kya zabardasthi hai?

Gunda: madamji humme acting nahi aatha hoga, lekhin hum asli gunde hai, samji, paise do

Geet: mere paas sirf 1000 rupiya hai, ye lo

Gunda: kya?

Geet: haan, meinne socha Maan sir se paise leklhe tumme dethi

Gunda: haan, tummare paas paise nahi ho toh kya? Usske paas haina? Ab humme 10000 nahi 10 lakh milega

Geet laughs...

Geet: Maan sir tumme paise kyun denge? Unkko aapki madat ki koi zaroorat nahi

One of them ctaches hold of her hand...

Gunda: tum hummare saath aathi toh woh zaroor paise denge haina?

Geet: kya? mujhe chodo

Just them Maan enters and saves her...

After the gundas run for their lives Maan just leaves...

Geet: Maan sir, rukho

Maan doesn't stop...

Geet runs and stops him...

Maan: Geet, hatto

Geet: nahi hatoongi, aap ne mujhe kyun bachaya? Aap mujhse pyaar karthe ho, haina?'

Maan: nahi, tumme galatfami hui hai

Geet: phir se joot?

Maan: Geet, hatjao warna

Maan gets closer and is lost in her eyes...maneet eyelock...

Geet suddenly hugs him...

Maan tries to get rid of her hold...

Geet: mujhe patha hai ki aap mujhse bahut pyaar karthe ho, aur mein bhi aapse bahut pyaar karthi hoon, aap samajthe kyun nahi Maan sir, mein Geet hoon, aapki Geet, sameera nahi

Maan is shocked to hear that...

Maan: tum sameera ko kaise jaanthi ho?

Geet: mujhe Dadi ne sab kuch bathadhi

Maan: Geet, ye koi zabardasthi nahi hai, tumme aaise karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, mujhe kissi ki sympathy nahi chahiye Geet

Maan is scared that this girl is also in the same situation, she is afraid of him as well

Geet: aapko kya lagtha? Mein aapse darthi hoon?

Maan: what?

Geet: Mr.Khurana mein aapse darthi nahi, mein aapse pyaar karthi hoon pyaar, aap ko sunayi nahi detha hai kya

                "I LOVE YOU"...Geet shouts in his ears...

Maan: Geeet, chodo mujhe

Geet tightens her hold...

Geet: jab tak aap nahi kethe ki aap mujhse pyaar karthe ho, mein aapko nahi chodoongi, mein bhi dekhthi hoon ki aaj aap yahan se kaise jaathe?

Maan: tum nahi chodoge?

Geet: nahi

Maan bends down and lifts her...

He takes her to the car...

Geet: hare, ye cheating hai, koi bachao, bachaooo

Maan:  sshhh, thode dher chup nahi reh sakthi?

Geet: nahi reh sakthi, kya karoge?

Maan closes her mouth...chup...bilkul chup...

He looks into her eyes...

Geet can see his love flowing breaking the barriers ...

Maan: Geet, tum aaise hi bak bak karthi rahogi ya mujhe bhi bolne ka ek moka dogi?

Ab Geet kaise bolegi? She is speechless...

Maan: I Love You Geet, tum meri ho Geet, sirf meri...Maan ki Geet

Maan looks at her and drinks her beauty with his eyes...

Geet is a little scared now, ab toh issko koi nahi rokh saktha...

Geet feels shy and tries to hide her face...

Maan: Geet, darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...

Geet: Mr.buddu, ye dar nahi hai, ye sharam hai, samje aap, babaji, lagthe hai ki inkko ladhkiyon ke adhaoon ko samajne ki tuition lena padega

Maan: usski koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet

Geet: kyun?

Maan: mein toh tummari har adha ko jaantha hoon

Geet: toh aapne itna dher kaise kardhi?

Maan: haan Geet, bahut dher ho chukka hai, ab aur nahi

Maan grabs her and palces a kiss on her lips...maneet mahi mahi shuru hothi...

                   

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lovely os. Finally maan ne haan ker hi di.
thanks for lovely os 😃
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Fab
ghsp replica wid a intelligent geet
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OS Ranjhna
excellent...
i just loved it so so so much...
too good...
Geet made him confess finally...
lovely...
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lovely os
cute story of maan & geet
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beautiful story dear😊
geet with her love brought maan out of his shell
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posting this on Maneet Jrs b'day...
happy b'day Jr...😉
 
                                         Mere papa...

 

 

Maan is busy in his work as always and Geet is busy with junior Khurana, let his name be Shaan rhyming with Maan...

So Geet wants to go shopping with Maan for the functions...

But Maan is too busy...

Geet goes to KC with Shaan...

She waits for Maan but he is with some client...

Geet tells Adi to go and inform Maan that a VIP client is here waiting for him for ages...

If Maan doesn't meet the client within 2 minutes then he will loose them for ever...

Adi: Geet, ye kya hai? Mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, Maan sir andar koi naya project ke barein mein baat kar arhe hai

Geet: unse kahiye ki pehle apne purani projects pe dhyaan de phir naye projects ke barein mein soche, haina Shaan?

Shaan: haan

Adi is so scared...

Adi looks at Geet desperately...but Geet is stubborn...

Geet: jao Adi sir

Adi: par Geet, mein iss waqt Maan sir ko kaise disturb kar saktha?

Geet: aap jaa rahe ho ya hum andar chalein?

Geet andar gayi toh Maan bahut gussa karega, Maan is always concerned that the clients are given utmost priority...jab koi client Maan ke saath ho toh unkke jaane ke badh hi Maan kissi aur ko milega, chahe woh koi aur important client bhi ho...

Adi andar jaatha...

Maan: Adi, presentation tayaar hai?
 

Adi goes speechless...

Presentation ki CD toh Geet ke paas hai...

Geet refused to give it till Maan comes to meet her...

Adi: he he he he he...

Adi blinks...

Maan gets angry...

Maan: Adiii, presentation shuru karo

Adi: presentation?

Maan: haan, hammare Noidawale  project ki presentation

Adi: shuru karthe haina

Maan: jaldhi karo Adi, hum tummare liye pure zindagi wait nahi kar sakthe

Adi: sir,  koi paurane client bahar aapka intrezaar kar rahe hai

Maan gets angry again...aaise kaise sabke samne kissi aur se milne jaa saktha, aur iss Adi ki dimag toh kabhi kaam hi nahi kartha...

Maan: pehle inkka kaam katam hone do, phir dekhthe hai

Adi: par ye bahut khaas client hai

Maan: ye bhi toh khaas hi hai, hummare liye har client khaas hi hothe hai, samjhe tum ?

Adi ke paas toh Geet ke diye hue CD hi hai...

Maan snatches it from him and runs it...

Geet comes on the screen...

Maan is shocked...

Maan turns back to Adi and stares...

The video is playing...

Geet: Maan sir wahan kya dekhthe ho? yahan dekho, picture shuru honewali hai

The clients are also excited ...seems to be interesting...

Geet: sorry gentlemen, I had no other choice but to steal a few minutes of our Maan sir's precious time like this...

Everyone looks at Maan...Maan is embarrassed...

So Mrs.Khurana wants to convey a message ...

Maan tries to stop the video...

Geet: hare Maan sir, band kyun karthe ho? picture abhi bakhi hai

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ha

Maan pauses it...turns to his clients...

Maan: sorry for the trouble, lets continue tomorrow

Clients: no problem Mr.Khurana, hum bhi family men hi hai

They leave...Maan stares the screen...

Adi: sir

Maan: what?

Adi: picture abhi bakhi hai

Maan: what?

Adi: woh...Geeet

Maan: Adi, jao apna kaam karo

Adi escapes...

Maan plays the video...he doesn't know that Geet is here...

Dekhthe hai ki Geet kya kehna chahathi...

Geet: toh Maan sir shayad aap apne ek purane client ko bhool gaye

A flashback of Maneet runs on the screen with some old photographs...

 
 
 
 
 
 
Geet continues: aapko yaad hai ki ye aapki bahut khaas client hua karthe the aur aap inke saath zindagi bar chalne ka wada khiye the, aur bas theen saal mein apna wada bhool gaye?
 

Then there is Shaan's photo on the screen...

Geet: issko yaad hai? Aapke basha mein kahe toh ye hummari donno companies ki joint project hai jo ab hummare company akhele handle kar rahi hai, aap toh isske zamedari utane ke liye tayaar nahi ho, toh humne faisla kiya hai ki aaj se isske zamedari aapki aur hummare company isse aapke hawale karkke kuch aur zaroori kaam pe dhyaan dene ki faisla kiya hai, toh ab se aap apne naye projects ke saath issko bhi sambalo, good bye Maan sir

Maan: Geeet

Adi: sir, apne bhulaya?

Adi enters Maan's cabin with Shaan...

Shaan heads to Maan's chair and the little prince takes over the crown...

Yahi toh KC ka agla crowning prince haina?

Maan: Adi, ye sab kya hai?

Adi: sir Shaan

Shaan grabs the paper weight from the table and starts playing with it...

Maan tries to get it back from him...

Maan: Shaan yahan aao, papa ke paas

He climbs the table and crawls towards Maan...

Shaan goes and hugs Maan...: papa...

Maan lifts him and kisses him...Shaan kisses back...

Maan: mama kahan hai?

Shann: papa papa, aaj mein aapke saath kheloonga

Maan: Adi, Geet kahan hai?

Adi: Geet Pinky ke saath bahar gayi hai sir

Maan: what? Shaan ko yahan chodkke?

Adi: sir Geet ne kaha ki Shaan aaj yahi rahega

Maan: what?

Shaan: haan papa, mama ne kaha ki aaj mein aapke saath kheloonga, aao papa

Maan: par Shaan, papa ko bahut kaam hai, aap ghar kyun nahi jaathe, apne mama ke paas

Shaan: nahi mujhe yahi rehna hai

Maan: teek hai, aap yaha beitiye, aur ye lo sketches, aap kuch draw karo

Shaan: par mujhe drawing nahi aatha

Maan: try karo, aajayega

Shaan: papa aap sikao

Maan tries to draw a skyscraper...

Shaan: ye kya hai?

Shaan makes a face...

Maan: kyun? Ye achcha nahi hai?

Shaan: nahi, mujhe pasand nahi hai

Maan: teek hai, aapko kya pasand hai?

Shaan: lion, deer, elephant, peacock

Maan: what? Mama tumme jungle book ki mogli banana chchathi hai? MSK ke beta jungli tarzan banega?

Shann: papa, mujhe yahi pasand hai, aap sikhao

Maan: haan haan

Maan tries to draw an elephant, but it turns out to be a disaster...he is used to lines aud cuts and arches and not animal figures...

Shaan: papa, ye koi naye animal hai kya?

Maan: ye elephant hai

Shann laughs...

Shann: papa elephant aaise nahi dikhtha

Maan: mujhe patha hai, elephant aaise hi hotha

Shaan: nahi, ye elephant nahi hai

Maan: Shaaan, I'm telling you this is an elephant

Shann: nahi, papa ko elephant banana nahi aatha, papa ko elephant banana nahi aatha

Maan: ssshhh chup, bilkul chup

Shaan starts crying...

Adi comes running...

Adi: kya hua sir? Apne Shaan ko kya kiya?

Maan: what? Adi, meinne kuch nahi kiya

Adi: Shaan kyun ro raha hai?

Maan: usse hi pooch

Adi: junior, aap kyun rothe ho?

Maan: bilkul apne mama ki tarah har waqt rothe rehtha hai, aane do Geet ko, MSK ke bte ko kaise crying baby banake rakha hai usne

Shaan: mujhe elephant chahiye

Adi: hathi? Sir, mein jaake hathi lekhe aaoon?

Maan: Adi, pagal ho gaye ho kya?

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha, mera matlab toy elephant

Maan: kuch bhi karo, jaldhi isska muh band karo

Adi: yes sir

Adi gets a toy elephant...

He gives it to Shaan...

Shaan throws it away...

Maan gets angry...

Maan: ye kya hai? Tumne elephant manga aura b kya hua?

Shaan: ye nahi woh

He shows the paper...

Maan: Adi, tum ek chote bache ko sambal nahi sakthe

Maan is frustrated,,,,how many times has he got angry with Geet that she couldn't handle a little boy whenever she complained...

"Geet stop whinning , mujhe chain se apna kaam karne do, issilye mein ghar aane se dartha"

Now he knows that it's not child's play to take care of a kid...

He is angry with himself for treating Geet like that...

She should have felt bad...mein kya se kya ban gaya hoon?

Aajkal mujhe apne Mishti ki fikar hi nahi...

Meinne kabhi nahi socha ki Geet kaise issko dinbar sambalkke tak jaathi hogi?

Mujhe sirf apna kaam ki padhi hai, jaise mein koi pahaad apne shir pe uttakke aaaya hoon...

Har raat Geet jab thode dher Shaan ko apne paas chodkke jaathi toh Maan kitna gussa kartha ki Geet ghar pe pura din aaram karthi hai aur phir bhi mujhe hi disturb kyun karthi?

Ab Maan ko apni galthi ka ehsaas hua...

Adi tries all the tricks to stop Shaan crying...

But he insists that Adi made an elephant on the paper...

Poor Adi, however hard he tried he ended up with something else...

Shaan: ye chua hai hathi nahi, ye bimar elephant hai, dekho kitna pathla hai

Maan: Adi, iss office mein kissi ko bhi achche pictures banana nahi aatha?

Adi: haina sir, Mr.Kumar bahut acheche plans banathe haina

Maan: Adi, humme hathi ki picture banana hai

Adi: par mujhe kaise patha hoga sir?

Maan: itne saal yahan kaam karkke ye bhi nahi jaanthe?

Adi: apne pehle bar aaise kaam diya haina sir? Humne pehle kabhi kissi zoo ki construction nahi kiya hai sir

Maan: Adi, kuch toh karo

Adi: sir hum net se download karthe hai

Maan: teek hai

Maan downloads a beautiful elephant picture...from the National Geographic site...

Shaan: ye photo hai, isse dekhkke mein kaise draw kar saktha hoon?

Maan: kyun? Ye toh asli hai, isse dekhkke tum teek se seekh sakthe

Shaan: par mein kaise draw kar saktha?

Maan: ye tummari problem hai

Shaan: aaise nahi, pehle aap isse dekhkke ek elephant banao

Maan tries to recreate it...

Btu it was too real and he couldn't convert it into a picture...

Maan koi artist nahi haina?

Shaan is disappointed...he starts crying...

Maan: Adi, tum isske copies banakke sabko distribute kaor, ada gante mein mujhe isski drawing chahiye, jaldhi

Adi takes copies and gives it to the staff...

It's already noon and Geet returns to take Shaan for lunch...

Geet is surprised to see that KC is so silent inspite of Shaan's presence...

Ye kaise ho saktha? Kahin Maan Shaan ko bahar thodi nahi le jaye?

Achcha hai, ab mein aur shopping kar sakthi...

Geet finds everyone busy with some serious work...

What's this? Koi naye project ke plan bana rahe hai kya?

Geet:Adi sir, yahan kya ho raha hai?

Adi: Geet, humme disturb mat karo, hum bahut important kaam mein lage hue hai

Geet looks at Adi's desk...

Adi is drawing an elephant...

She looks at the others, they are also doing the same...

Geet:  what? KC kab se art school bana?

Adi: Geet, ye Maan sir ke orders hai'

Geet goes to find what Maan is upto?

She finds Maan sleeping in his chair after struggling all day with his son...

Bechare Maan sir, office mein sorahe hai?

Geet finds Shaan watching cartoon on Maan's lappy  sipping his drink...

She finds a big ice cream tub and chocolate wrapers scattered around...

Geet: Shaan, ye sab apne khaya?

Geet is worried that he will get throat infection eating all this at a time...

She snatches the cold drink from his hands and he starts crying...

Maan wakes up...

Maan: Adiii, kya hua?

Geet: Maan, ye sab kya hai?

Maan: Geet,  woh mein so nahi raha tha, bas soch raha tha

Geet: achcha?

Maan: haan

Geet: kya soch rahe the aap? Agla issko pizza order karein ya burger...

Just then Adi enters with the Pizza...

Shaan: pizza

Geet stops him...he cries louder...

Geet: Maan, ye kya hai?

Maan: pizza Geet

Geet: meinne poocha ki aapne itne sare cheez order kyun kiya?

Maan: mujhe kyun poochthe ho? Tum roz issko aaise khilathe rehthi toh aaisa hi hoga

Geet: aapko kissne kaha hum roz pizza order karthe hai?

Maan: phir ye pizza ke liye itna zidd kyun kar raha tha?

Geet: issiliye kyunki mein issko kabhi pizza khareedhke nahi dethi

Maan: kya?

Geet: aapko patha hai ki ye aaise hi kathe rehtha toh bimar hojayega

Maan: par Geet

Geet: Maan, aapko ek chote bachche ko sambalna nahi aatha?

Maan: what?

Geet: abhi dekho

Geet takes away all the goodies from him...

" Shaan good boy haina? Ye sab bad boys hi kathe hai, haina?"

He keeps silent...he doesn't cry...

Maan' s surprised...

Ye kaise jadu hai?

Geet just lifts him and pats him on the back...

He falls asleep on her shoulder...

So he needed to sleep?

She puts him on the couch...

Maan is relieved...

Geet feels pity on him...

Poor Maan, itne bade KC ko apne ungliyon pe nachatha aur apne hi bte ko sambal nahi patha...

Maan: Geet, tumne lunch khaya?

Geet: nahi, mein Shaan ko ghar lekhe jaathi hoon

Maan stops her...

Maan: tum abhi bhi mujhse naraaz ho?

Maan gets closer...

Geet : nahi

Maan: toh chalo hum saath mein lunch karthe hai

Geet: par Shaan

Maan calls Adi...

Adi comes in...

Maan: Adi, hum bahar jaa rahe hai, you take care of Shaan

Adi is scared...

Adi: lekhin sir?

Maan: Adi, aaj yahi tummara boss hai, so don't mess with him

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha ...babaji mujhe bachao

Maan: chalo Geet

Geet is confused...

Geet: kahan?

Geet is happy to go out with Maan after a long time...

She is excited and she keeps chatting with him about Shaan's b'day and what all they have to do this time to make it special...

Maan just enjoys this ride with his Mishti and keeps driving without knowind where they are heading...

It's almost 3' pm and they have come  a lond distance away from the city...

Geet batein karthe karthe tak jaathi...she is hungry...

Geet looks out and they are in the middle of nowhere...

Geet: Maan, hum kahan aagaye hai?

Maan looks out...

He has no clue where they are now...

Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut bhook lagthi hi

Maan: haan Geet, hum lunch karthe haina? Yahan ek bahut achcha restaurant hai

Geet: yahan?

Maan: haan, tum dekhthe hi raho, yahi hai, paas

Luckily they find some place to eat...

Maan manages to take her to her favourite eatout...koi punjabhi daba...iss waqt toh yahi khana milega...lunch time has passed long back...

After lunch he takes her to their farm house...

They have come so close to their farmhouse na...

Geet: Maan, hum yahan kyun aaye hai?

Maan: Geet, tum Shaan ki b'day ko yahi celebrate karna chahthi haina?

Geet: aapko kaise patha?

Geet forgot that she had told him just now...

She thinks that Maan is still not aware of Shaan's b'day plans...

She had been planning on her own...waise Maan ke paas time kahan tha Geet se aaise beitkke baat karne ki...ya phir Maan ab Geet se baat karna bhi nahi chahatha...

Geet looks at him and Maan knows that he had disappointed her all these days...

He can see the longing in her eyes...she wished this evening never ended...

She just wanted to be with her Maan just like this...

Maan: tumme kya lagtha mein apne biwi ki itna bhi parwa nahi kartha?

Geet: aaise nahi

Maan looks into her eyes...Maneet eyelock...

Geet swimmimg pool ki tarafh jaathi...

She is thinking of setting the dinner tables around the pool, moonlight dinner...

Maan apne mishit ko hi dekhthe rehtha...

Aaj bhi ktini khoobsurat hai...

Geet keeps telling her plan...

Maan ko kuch sunayi nahi detha...

He just keeps staring her...

Geet then enters the hall...

She looks at the walls...and the curtains...

Everything looks dull...Maan ke pasand ke soft colors lage hai...white and grey...

This is no fun and the kids would feel like they are is some boring class room...

She wants it to be repainted...with some exciting cartoon pictures...

She keeps chatting...

Geet: Maan, hum yahan ek chote se dance floor banayenge, aur yahan sare toys honge, aur ek magic show bhi hona chahiye, Shaan ko magic shows bahut pasand hai

Maan is in no mood to listen...he is admiring his pyaari Mishti...

Geet looks at him and has this starnge feeling that Maan has got other plans for her now...

Geet: Maaan?

He closes her mouth with his hands...

Maan: chup...bilkul chup...

Geet pushes him and steps back...

Maan gets closer...Geet steps back till she is cornered...

Maan locks her in his arms...

Geet: Maaan? Ye kaise mazak hai, aap bahut bhure ho

Maan: toh Geet, mein bahut bhura hoon, haina?

Geet: mujhe bas yahi shikayaat thi ki aap apne bachche ko hi bhool gaye

Maan: bache ko bhool gaya ya apni pyaari Mishti ko?

Geet : Maan, chodo mujhe

Geet bends down and escapes...

She goes near the window and looks at the pool...

She could see the moon's reflection on the water...

Geet: Maan, ye chandh kitna sundar hai dekho

Maan: tumse sundar nahi Geet

Geet: Maan, hum party yahi karenge, pool side, teek hai, aur pool ke centre  ek shaandar stage banayenge, with all the kids around, Shaan will be in the centre with a huge cake...

Maan: nahi hum party yahi karenge, andar, pool mein abhi nahi, kissi aur din,raat ko, jab koi nahi hoga, sirf tum mein aur

Geet: aur chand

Maan: nahi, Geet, chand nahi

Geet: Maan, chandini raat hai toh kaise hoga?

Maan: nahi nahi, amavaas ka din teek hoga, mein tum aur hummare beech koi nahi, chand ki roshni bhi nahi, jo humme disturb kare

Geet: mujhe andere se dar lagtha

Maan: mein bhi wahi chahatha

Geet: kya? Aap mujhe darana chahathe ho?

Maan: tabhi toh tum mere paas hogi, warna aaise hi dhoor bhaagthe rahogi, haina?

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: aur abhi party shuru karein?

Maan winks...

Geet: ye aapko kya ho gaya?

Maan gets near and hugs her from behind...

Geet:  Maaan?

Maan pushes her choti aside and makes room for a hot kiss...

He places a warm kiss on her back...

Geet swoons...the warmth of his lips sets the fire inside her...

She is engulfed by his fiery passion...she is ready to melt in his arms...

Maan lifts her and takes her in...

Geet: Maaan?

Maan: ssshhh aaj mujhe  rokho mat Geet

Geet bhi rokhna kahan chahathi? Mahiii...

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u have posted here its good...
awesome dear...
excellent...
so loved it...
lovely...