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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 97)

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Holi scene was the best part of the update. Can totally visualize shyam's face LOL.
Nice update.

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged

"I don't need water to make you wet"BlushingDay Dreaming

I was like a sponge,absorbing everything all the while reading the update and bam!It just endedBroken Heart

I'm really glad to see ArHi,letting go of their past,albeit temporarily and looking forward to this marriage of theirs.Physical intimacy is a part of a healthy  marriage and it's really hard to digest,"You sleep on bed,I sleep on sofa" shit,specially when the protagonists have this unbelievably crazy,sensuous connection between them.So Thank YouBig smile


I guess it's high time Arnav realizes what precisely his prejudiced mother had done to hurt Khushi and in some ways,him too!!Also ASR needs to do something to curb the snide comments of his bigoted Manorama Mami and Mama.He has been an asshole alright,but his extended family doesn't get to emotionally torture and humiliate Khushi,not when she is Mrs ASR now!!

I really admire your style of writing..whatever that is,mostly because you're able to bring out the vintage ArHi passion and chemistry in a very straightforward and real manner,it's like sensually caressing my memories of the showTongueEmbarrassed


PS:As someone else has already mentioned,Can ArHi move into a place of their own??ErmmAnd is there any possibility of them making a trip to "The Valley of flowers?"Day Dreaming


Will be waiting for the next update with a huge grin plastered on my face.That's your magic KaviHug

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 8:41am | IP Logged
good that AK are atleast talking and comforting each other..

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charlotte74

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 8:50am | IP Logged
That was superb...loved it
great work

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 11:31am | IP Logged
hello kavi,

sorry to have not commented for long...I was not exactly busy but was hibernating...mind was frozen...

good progress...you got them married hastily...things happened really quick...shyam is a catalyst between Ar-Hi...he always does things to get them close...

I really liked how you have got them close, arnav's dads death, khushi being a solace...then they get intimate...followed by a brilliant confession by arnav...I like the mature bit in him...he has finally made khushi happy...hopefully soon she expresses her love for him before any other fiasco by Shyam  or anyone else.

how did you make mamaji also worthless to support mami of all the people...

anyway good going dear...proud of the fact that they are good writers like you to keep Ar-Hi alive.

thx
sri.

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by srmirji

hello kavi,

sorry to have not commented for long...I was not exactly busy but was hibernating...mind was frozen...

good progress...you got them married hastily...things happened really quick...shyam is a catalyst between Ar-Hi...he always does things to get them close...

I really liked how you have got them close, arnav's dads death, khushi being a solace...then they get intimate...followed by a brilliant confession by arnav...I like the mature bit in him...he has finally made khushi happy...hopefully soon she expresses her love for him before any other fiasco by Shyam  or anyone else.

how did you make mamaji also worthless to support mami of all the people...

anyway good going dear...proud of the fact that they are good writers like you to keep Ar-Hi alive.

thx
sri.

Thanks Sri!

Always glad to hear from you. Hope your little one is doing fine?


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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
awww awww aww love it awww!!

my favs r those adorable holi scene welcome and the cutieee water splash and staircase scene!! awww i almost saw it happening in my mind!! sooo cute and adorable!!

how iwish we got to watch these moments in reality through our beloved couple in IPK..aww anyway thanks for painting such beautifully vivid pictures..it is almost as good...and makes me so happy to even read.

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Posted: 02 May 2013 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by droopy-asleep


"I don't need water to make you wet"BlushingDay Dreaming

I was like a sponge,absorbing everything all the while reading the update and bam!It just endedBroken Heart

I'm really glad to see ArHi,letting go of their past,albeit temporarily and looking forward to this marriage of theirs.Physical intimacy is a part of a healthy  marriage and it's really hard to digest,"You sleep on bed,I sleep on sofa" shit,specially when the protagonists have this unbelievably crazy,sensuous connection between them.So Thank YouBig smile


I guess it's high time Arnav realizes what precisely his prejudiced mother had done to hurt Khushi and in some ways,him too!!Also ASR needs to do something to curb the snide comments of his bigoted Manorama Mami and Mama.He has been an asshole alright,but his extended family doesn't get to emotionally torture and humiliate Khushi,not when she is Mrs ASR now!!

I really admire your style of writing..whatever that is,mostly because you're able to bring out the vintage ArHi passion and chemistry in a very straightforward and real manner,it's like sensually caressing my memories of the showTongueEmbarrassed


PS:As someone else has already mentioned,Can ArHi move into a place of their own??ErmmAnd is there any possibility of them making a trip to "The Valley of flowers?"Day Dreaming


Will be waiting for the next update with a huge grin plastered on my face.That's your magic KaviHug

@ bold I used to hate that and used to imagine ways to destroy that green recliner in ASR's room :-)
SInce I couldn't do that I managed to get them into the same bed in my FFs LOL

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