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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 88)

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
what i really like - of course including the hot hot consummation- is that arnav is willing to move forward with khushi, forgiving what he saw as her betrayal. i just wish mama mami get kicked out, arnav can afford to keep hi family separately

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:58am | IP Logged
Mamaji and Mamiji are so hateful. Poor Akash. It's a wonder he turned out well. Hmm looks like Anjali is not really impressed by Shyam in this story is she? Well good. What a callous man. SO what if her dad was ill for very long ,it still doesn't take away the fact that he died. I know he's involved somehow. That Holi scene, but of course Arnav couldn't stop his hand like he did in the show, but this was so much fun to read. And the waterfight later in the kitchen. I still want to know what Garima told Khushi on the day of the wedding that made her agree to the wedding. Lovely chapter, Charlotte :)

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:59am | IP Logged
hey kavi when is she going to be a real wife for arnav and tell him everything
i know its not so easy bcz then she also have to tell about her bauji being a dief
so its hard to tell half the truth
but she can well tell about shyams creeping ways cant she
she can tell that he put that coat in cupboard and 2 +2 togeather they can know who told nk's mother
and kavi u aare not telling us anything about lav and also nk and ria
i dont understand onething
arnav is richer then akashs familie so why dont he just buy other house (the white one) for khushi and nani
and they can live their togeather
and i hope plz on last i hope mami and mama begging arnav and khushi for help
and i hope that everyone get what they deserve plz i would like it
really love it
and how are you going to make repent buaji
and shyam is such a creep (but he did one thing good he bring arnav and khushi together)
i love this update
now just waiting how you unfold this story

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged

Shyam .. disgusting

Mami and Mama.. urrrggghhh
Anjali.. Please get her out of Shyam's clutches and hopefully with Doctor Manav soon.
Arnav and Khushi...mmm dreamy.
Very nicely written consummation
But Holi scene was best   

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Nice n awesome update
Arnav n Khushi r one now n nobody regret this is the best update ever. Stupid shayam is he blind it's crystal clear Arnav n Khushi love each other madly still he said she is forced to married Arnav
I hate Mami n Manaji .
Thanks for update.
Update soon.

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Awesome update! The Creep is just getting creepier! I loved the welcome Khushi gave Arnav ;) Also loved that they are both giving this relationship a clean start now :) glad neither of them regretted their physical intimacy :)
 
Looking forward to the next update :)

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Finally d flashback...
Ahhh its smoking hot...
Khushi's surrnder to him to seek him comfort is totally beautiful...she loves him nd dis proves dat today also to comfort arnav she can do nythng...loved it how khushi hugged arnav in front of evryone witout caring anythng nd arnav's words aftr d hug is simply way too awsum...nd khushi actually spatted colour on his cheeks nd he also did d same but not wit his hands but rubbing his cheeks wit her...awww dats sooo romantic Day Dreaming
shyam,hate him...simply hate him Angry
he actually tried to colour khushi first but poor guy could not get a chance also Angry
loved it how arnav took khushi out of d kitchen...ahhh he cannot resist her actually Wink
dis chappy is truly beautiful wit sooo many cute momnts btwn arshi...i am happy dat arnav has decided to go ahead of d past nd start a new life wit khushi...i wish him to knw d truth of his mom soon...!
Na kavi,truly wednesday is ur day in d Forum...
Dis update is as alwaz awsum...
U again cracked it up Thumbs Up
Lovely chappy simply wonderful...
Loved evry bit of it Heart

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Loved the update!!! So glad Arnav made it there for Holi.

The best part that put a smile on my face is Shyam realizing that Arnav & Khushi have a real marriage & they definitely "like" each other!!!!!

The chemistry between these two just sizzles even more when you write it. 

Can't wait for the next update! 

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