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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 87)

-DobByDoDgeR- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:12am | IP Logged
Another smashingly beautiful update
So they've come to a truce and they are gonna move on with life
But i bet arnav will be mad with rage when he fonds out that his mum did whatever and khushi also didnt tell him
Anyway please update soon

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yush-swt Senior Member

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged
loved it...and finally we get an arnav and khushi who are though they havent figured out and solved their differences they are kind of trying to move on with the relationship...and even though love hasnt been taken an important part verbally, mentally these two love each other so i hope it would eventually find them too...
loved the carefree attitude...and arnavs father has atleast both these two i guess we can thank him for that...
i feel sorry for anjali, and shyam is such a creep...but according to this khushi seems to sense about him so i guesss she might not fall in to any trap of his...and arnav would be with her...
mami dont have any comments but am surprised on akash...oved the update...
by the way does arnav knows he is khushis first...

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akaps Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Nice update.  Arnav's return on the day of Holi  was unexpected for Khushi and the relief she must have felt on hugging him.

Wondering when will Arnav come to know about the truth of Shyam and his  own mother.  

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nikita-nair Senior Member

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:39am | IP Logged
so dey dcided  2leav d past bhind nd mov on..w8d long 4 dz...
nyc updt..

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vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Just brilliant...if not love then what he felt was close enough! Superb ! 

Just loved it all. Loved the welcome she gives him, loved the ease of their relationship, the comfort and the chemistry ! 

Loved the flashback...finally what they could not express in words...their actions did...loved how she could not see him in pain and let him find comfort in their coming together, loved how he makes her tea in the morning and talks to's time to move forward together...

Hate Shyam, loved Holi...I want this bond to get stronger and stronger...

You are brilliant, I jut love this story ! 

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arnshi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
awww good move arnie...n shyam creeps me out...Awesome update...

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charlotte74 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AquaSandhya

Just as Sharada Raizada's treachery is almost put to rest, Shyam's decided to up his game.

It seems, Shyam is an out and out villian who will go to any lengths to get Khushi. Pushing Anjali down the stairs so that he can live in the same house as Khushi ... he is EVIL :( and absolutely delusional. 

Good thing about this delusional character ... he ends up bringing Arnav and Khushi closer and closer. He made "bura na maano holi hai"  happen after all and  a super hot hug and cheek rub ... Thank you, thank you, thank you Shyam!!!!. 

I'm happy that Khushi has understood Shayam's ill intentions although she doesnt really know the damage caused by his evilness. However, I really do hope Arnav stands by Khushi unlike in Desert Rose, where he suspects her, albeit for a little while. That kind of suspision mars a relationship, however brief it maybe. Shows a lack of trust in your partner that will in big probability show up in the future for the couple. Hope Arnav and Khushi work together to help Anjali.

Their love making was beautiful and am so glad that Arnav took the mature route  by talking to Khushi. 

"If not his love" - Khushi darling! it is love. He just doesn't know it yet. Khushi is between a rock and hard place ... both the rock and hard place being Arnav's love. She loves him too much to tell him the truth coz he will be shattered by his mother's betrayal but by keeping the truth from him she is making Arnav question his feelings (his love) for Khushi. Ahhh! what a situation to be in for Khushi. Poor girl deserves a break. 

Will Sharada's betrayal come out only in the climax after Arnav realizes that he has fallen in love with Khushi all over again? That's my prediction and not expecting an answer from you. I understand that it would be giving away plot development. 

Waited and waited and waited and got an update replete with holi. Thank you.

BTW, do you have any plans of treating your readers with a bonus update?


thankyou for understanding Arnav's love for Khushi  Hug

Bonus update? kis khushi mein bhai?

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LeenaRocks IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Thanks for the update Kavi! :) 

You certainly made up for what we all thought went without our knowledge! he he he
I am so glad that Arnav Khushi's equation got better! 

Shyam! an excuse of a man! The effrontery of this sicko!! i telll ya! arrghh!! leering and lusting behind her!and has the audacity to knock at their door intending to spoil their private moments... that really did it for me! hated him to the core! 

Okie now the events that took place in the update... if seen from a pessimists point of view ... 1stly Anjali's fracture might not actually be an accident! With the vile wight in the vicinity you one can hardly expect so... 
So bang on target ... they moved in 3 weeks ago courtesy Anjali's state! 
Now with the new found knowledge that Arnav and Khushi are marriage is marked by physical intimacy as well... he will move ahead with his foul contrives and trick everyone into his devious plans...
Also with Arnav being away for the said num of weeks and with Khushi looking radiant ... the reason for the same when time comes will all be made to look like Khushi and Shyam have a thing going on between them... 

Man! this is inviting so much of drama now! :)
Lets see whats lined up next!! 

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