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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 76)

glitter5 Senior Member

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:20am | IP Logged
stupid shyam
update's nice

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msin IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:22am | IP Logged
It was a a sweet update...
I was upset with Arnav why did he not take Khushi along with him... He better get her passport and visa in order.. 
Why leave ur poor wife in the raizadas mercy..

In ipk Arnav was the master of the house.. Over here this is his maternal house...he should ideally move Khushi into his own place,.. The farmhouse or maybe the dream house Khushi showed him..

It's great to see the nok jhok between arshi... I don't need water to make u wet...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

And Khushi took holi powder from Shyam to smear on Arnav.. Cheek to cheek..

Why is Shyam being delusional...he himself had seen the proximity of arshi in the bedroom  a few months ago.. Knows about amarvilas.. And still has gone and revealed to Khushi u did not w ant to marry Arnav... Says who..
Khushi should have given one tight slap to him.. Or thanked him for bringing them together..

I am quite sure he gave Dhakka to Anjali,
Anjali is like able here for a change.. She wants to move back to her own place..her reason for feeling down is understandable she has lost her parent and so she does not want to play holi... She also has broken her leg.Her husband is being mean to her..poor her..
..actually ideally Nani should have forbade Khushi and Arnav both to celebrate holi...

Mami is ok... She just lost a relative..who had been estranged..

But Khushi having lost her father in law...

But it's ok..
I feel arshi should move to their own place very soon

I see the tea in the update...maybe Arnav should make it a morning ritual .. Serving bed tea to his wife...Embarrassed

Edited by msin - 01 May 2013 at 5:08am

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-tardisblue- Senior Member

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Loved the chapter. Great work :)
Looking forward to see what you've got in store for us :D

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nishi22 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Awesum update...manorama is acting really bad with khushi..shyam is still behind khushi..filthy man...arnav khushi finally became one..good that no1 regret anythng..and decid to start over again..waiting for next

Edited by nishi22 - 01 May 2013 at 4:48am

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Arilip Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:29am | IP Logged
Ooohh...brilliant , why am I surprised to wait for Wednesday a little more then weekendWink

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arshi21 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Such a painfully sweet update...I adored it.

Sigh. If only Arnav knew how much she loves him and how much she has given up for him.

Shyam is shyam. Stupid fool .

I am excited for the next update...wonder what we'll get?! 

I hope they come closer to each other than they already are :D

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sher_lock Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:37am | IP Logged
I love your stories like HELL..! But with each passing update I am loving u even more. LONG LIVE GIRL.. Star

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AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2013 at 4:45am | IP Logged
Just as Sharada Raizada's treachery is almost put to rest, Shyam's decided to up his game.

It seems, Shyam is an out and out villian who will go to any lengths to get Khushi. Pushing Anjali down the stairs so that he can live in the same house as Khushi ... he is EVIL :( and absolutely delusional. 

Good thing about this delusional character ... he ends up bringing Arnav and Khushi closer and closer. He made "bura na maano holi hai"  happen after all and  a super hot hug and cheek rub ... Thank you, thank you, thank you Shyam!!!!. 

I'm happy that Khushi has understood Shayam's ill intentions although she doesnt really know the damage caused by his evilness. However, I really do hope Arnav stands by Khushi unlike in Desert Rose, where he suspects her, albeit for a little while. That kind of suspision mars a relationship, however brief it maybe. Shows a lack of trust in your partner that will in big probability show up in the future for the couple. Hope Arnav and Khushi work together to help Anjali.

Their love making was beautiful and am so glad that Arnav took the mature route  by talking to Khushi. 

"If not his love" - Khushi darling! it is love. He just doesn't know it yet. Khushi is between a rock and hard place ... both the rock and hard place being Arnav's love. She loves him too much to tell him the truth coz he will be shattered by his mother's betrayal but by keeping the truth from him she is making Arnav question his feelings (his love) for Khushi. Ahhh! what a situation to be in for Khushi. Poor girl deserves a break. 

Will Sharada's betrayal come out only in the climax after Arnav realizes that he has fallen in love with Khushi all over again? That's my prediction and not expecting an answer from you. I understand that it would be giving away plot development. 

Waited and waited and waited and got an update replete with holi. Thank you.

BTW, do you have any plans of treating your readers with a bonus update?

Edited by AquaSandhya - 01 May 2013 at 6:36am

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