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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 65)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Beautiful how she comforted him and despite what happened he still thinks of her happiness.

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Loved the update..:)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
U knw wat wednesday is ur day...
U alwaz make my wednesday better wit ur fabulous update...!
I love it how u describe arnav's pain wen his father died...its hard for him to loose both of his parents...may b he hated his dad but still its not possible to b fine wen u lost ur father...
Now cuming back to arshi's reltnship...so they consummate their marriage...i love it wen arnav cried by holding khushi...well we got d flashback of 5 yrs nd now i want d flashback of last night desperately...!
Nxt update flashback plzzz...
Dying to read it...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
Beautiful update. The FB was passionate but Arnav had his control but did the same control he had last night I guess no & I'm sure they did it.

Y i feel that Shyam has some connection with the dead of Arnav's father???

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
you are an amazing writer...
the update was beautiful...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
K aap ramanchi kar rahi ho...full jalebi promise karke toffee thama di... Not that i complain abt the toffee it was nice...

Nice insightful update...b4 i proceed chalo finally shyam kuch kaam aya.

One thing which comes across is the influence khushi has over arnav...even anjali could not bring him to their father but khushi could. Having said that i do not mean to discredit arnav's love for his dad. His interaction with khushi made me understand that where his dad is concerned arnav is still a 16 year old confused, hurt and deeply hurt by his dad's behavior. Somewhere i think his mom in her inability to cope with her life ciscumstances and her need for synpathy, attention used the problems in her life to control her children and ended up multiplying the anguish in her son's mind. I can't help but dislike her as in doing so she completely ignored the suffering she was exposing her children to...extremely selfish. No wonder she was threatened by khushi as that was an imp choice her son made without including

I hope khushi realizes that Arnav has a special regard for her much more than love, always he gas shared his deepest feelings with her, he trusts her but is confused. I hope her misguided notion for upholding her side of the deal does not prevent hrr from telling him what happened 5 years ago as even though with a good intent at heart she will b holding a imp info abt his life from him. He has a right to know, only then may b he will see the flaws his mom had and only then he will b open to the way anjali described the probs his parents had and what led to it. The man needs a closure ...


Waise b4 i end, did khushi remind arnav's dad of someone may b a childhood frnd, love? Or may b he was reminded of arnav's mom and the good days he shared with her before the accident? From what anjali said i felt the man did love his wife at one point..

Edited by memyselfandrshi - 24 April 2013 at 9:17am

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
lovely update.but when will he realise her true love waiting for that oneDay Dreaming

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 9:31am | IP Logged
awesome udpate, lovd the way khushi comforted him during the agony of his father's demise.
Kavi dear, the flash back romance was better than the present consummation.  In fact it was mentioned in a subtle way, very indirect still leaving doubts whether they really consummated?
hope will get the flash back of that too in italics, (i really love wednesdays)

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