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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 64)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:05am | IP Logged
wow, such nice updates!! and so much happened!!
 
it's so sad that anjali's and arnav's father passed away..i would have loved to see arnav and his father spend more time together!!  
 
i can't wait to know what khushi thinks of her first time with arnav..

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charlotte74

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Your stories are addictive and they have a characteristic intensity of their own.This story is no exception!!

Loved the update.It was thoughtful and hot tooBlushing

I hope more hotness is on the wayEmbarrassedLOLYou have spoiled me KaviD'oh

What exactly is Shyam upto??ErmmHe's such a moronLOLSleepy

Waiting for your next updateHug

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Oh no Aranv's dad died ...I wanted to see bonding between Father and son..I really really think that snake had to do something with his hospitalization and death..But it brought A and K closer ...
But who is lali??
I was actually not very happy with A and K marrying all of a sudden but now when I read about Shyam I think that was the best thing to happen...


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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
This is an awesome update..
There was so much happening and so much happened...
Arnav's father being hospitalised - I thought he would give some insights about Sharda alas it didn't happen but I'm sure what incoherent he was mumbling would later be understood by Khushi or someone else for that matter. Why do I feel that Shyam has a hand in it, he was alone in the hospital after all. Angry Leech..
Ohh my my.. Dr. Manav is here.. So finally a good guy for our dear Anjali.Tongue
Arnav was never able to control his desires when it came to Khushi. Even all those 5 years ago he made love to her, almost, yeah almost being the keyword here. But for me it was love even with their clothes on.Tongue
Arnav who didn't cry in front of Anjali cried in front of is wife whom he thinks has cheated him in the past. His heart still doesn't believe it though he tries to get that in his head and get over her. Khushi gives him peace the much needed contentment in his life.
He thinks he couldn't fulfill his promise of making her first time beautiful but ask Khushi. I'm 100% sure for her anywhere anytime is beautiful if its with Arnav.Smile
And about the present SR, are we going to get in another flashbackEmbarrassed
Next wednesday already seems so far.. Are there any chances of updating it earlier than that?

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Vry nice.
Did Arnav's mother pull a similar stunt with Arnav's father as she did with Khushi? Is Laali a  girl from Arnav's Dad's past? I was sad that Arnav and his dad did not get any closure, maybe you have left it for later.
The scene under the banyan tree was almost magical.
 
Waiting for the next  update

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:31am | IP Logged
oops.. Arnav's dad is no more.. good that he managed to cry finally... nice one..

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
wow that was so very well written charlotte,the love scene Embarrassed

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Siya6490 Senior Member
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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Arnav's dad is no more... he breaks down in khushi's arms...
Who is lali?
Continue soon

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