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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 60)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
I feel so sad for Arnav and Anjali- to lose both parents one after the other, that must  be so heartbreaking. Just wondering, did our dear Shyam hasten his death? Because he was getting better, and suddenly developed wheezes- I coudn't help but think of Babuji. I do hope they catch Shyam soon, he is not only disgusting, but scary too as he seems to be mentally imbalanced. So Khushi's name had to be maligned because NK doesn't deserve her, and Arnav doesn''t either. But yeah the creeper of the year deserves her. And what plans for Khushi? Someone get rid of him before he does something else.
P.S. It's so nice to see Dr Manav again ;)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged
What an unexpected chain of events...! Who would even guessed you'd bring in arnav's dad, abhi!

I liked that no matter how things are between them, when a calamity hits truce is called..instructions are followed without even blinking twice. It was nice how khushi took control of everything, from convincing arnav to visit his father to letting the siblings grieve, even though u tell us it was arnav who was standing strong. Like they say behind every successful man is a woman (arnav's mum would add - cause women don't go after unsuccessful men lol).

I wonder what lali and the fair thing was about? If there is any significance to that?

Dr manav is here *fist pump* I cannot waiiit

Shyam killed him, didn't he? I don't understand his motive in this case!

There is something about a vulnerable arnav..the way you described his breakdown was so true to his character. Who can deny him anything..when he is like that? And especially the selfless khushi?!

The flashback was beautifully written, the final piece to the mystery it seems. The way you connected such a passionate encounter to a sense of peace then and also now, was impeccable.

So now that arnav has taken something in a bittersweet moment, where is this going to leave them?

Hitashi

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:18am | IP Logged
I don't know why but I think Shyzm has something to do with the older Raizada's death.
Love your stories. They are so intense they touch the heart.
Arnav listened to Khushi and visited his father. 
Loved the fact that he cried only in her arms. He still loves her and can be himself only with her.

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Awesome update...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:22am | IP Logged
I have no words..so many things happened in this chapter...the peace he is looking for, he will only get with Khushi and I hope he will realize this soon..their love has transcended everything including fate, even hate in Arnav's case..ultimately his hatred did not matter, did it. I hope they soon realize that what they have for each other is very rare and build the trust that this relationship needs, in spite of everything.
Beautifully written!

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
I hate Shyam BASS!

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
they did it???
OMG that was unexpected and i think flash back is finally over but i loved it !!!
and arnav father passed away ...does shayam has a hand on it??
well shayam is creepy and i am waiting for lavanya reaction for arnav marriage !!
awesome update
cant believe i wait whole week for this update and everytime u surprise me with your writing !!

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Amazing update.
Beautifully written.
loved it.

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