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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 56)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
R.

Their father passed away.. I had'nt expected that plus death is always saddening.

Shyam! :/
'Khushi s' character had to be maligned to save her.' Is he some psycho or what? And if by chance he has to do something with their fathers death, no can save him from me! :/

Dr. Manav!! =)

oh! The 'I love you' scene finally. I really enjoyed reading it. (ofcourse ;) ) well narrated,passionate and beautiful.

What? Correct me if I m wrong- ArHi did it finally (in the present time.) ;) :D

Edited by Anupama. - 24 April 2013 at 4:20am

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Originally posted by akkasrk

i beg to differ with the other readers everytime i read every chapter of ff of urs they seem so new so refreshing and yet so intense to me man trust me i read vof again yesterday i read dr a couple days back (i have read around 6times already) yet i get all excited with the intensity anger and the madness...Embarrassed

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Awesome..just fell in love with your writing all over again...


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OMG arnav father died but atleast he shared his tears with kushi..
The FB part was hot
awesome update

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That was absolutely beautifully written, loved how she takes up for him and says he had some urgent papers he needed to get from the office, even though she is unsure where he is or who he is with. She does not allow that to come in between the need of the hour, even with Shyam trying to add fuel! Speaks volumes for her and the relationship she shares with Arnav.

Shyam is so evil I am glad his plans to stop the wedding backfired for him as they did! Unknowingly his actions worked in favour of Khushi and Arnav...

I loved how she just knows where to find him and her reaction to him in nothing but jeans ( he sounded like a model for CK) I loved how she makes him understand that he needs to go to his father or he will forever regret it...that he listened and went with her, loved that he takes her advice.

I get the feeling Shyam has a hand in the medicines not being taken properly...and or his death...I may be wrong but this is what I felt, death is always sad and I loved the way you portrayed that here, loved the routine of the days leading his death, Khushi taking lunch, not correcting him when he called her by some other name, felt like the father was remembering a pleasant incident from the past! 

I loved the flashback. It was so romantic and beautiful, you really make me fall in love with your Khushi and Arnav each time, without fail, and I then just want them to be together forever ! I love the comfort they provide at the darkest times for each other, the love and solace they find with each other. Loved how he hugged her and loved how just looking at her, their silence speaks volumes...he cannot help admire and feel so much desire for her...loved how he admires her sleeping form...


Waiting to read about their last night ...they consummated their marriage ! 

I am eager to see how their relationship progresses in the present will their past intervene in their future !? 


Edited by vandana.sagar - 25 April 2013 at 4:41am
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Amazin part.

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I read its plain awesome...
See I told u Wednesday is always yours  for me in IF ... A sure shot winner...Clap


U r right .. I guess I can read some of ur thoughts.., though I was not expecting 18 + ratings did a happy dance.. DancingBut I had anticipated father in law to make an appearance in the story... 
 He just came for a chapter without doing the parda fash of devil MIL he died..


But he helped in arshi bond...Embarrassed In grief.

I also knew they were not that innocent 5 years ago...see flashback...
I am quite 10 year flashback mein bhi some cheeky moments honge... Which will make us go aww...

 The description of arnie in ck...is possible we have the picture...and also the bearded grieving pic...

Now come on can we have more of ER 



Darling... Now that 5 year flashbacks are maybe done... Can we also have last night flashbacks..., in different italics..


Edited by msin - 24 April 2013 at 4:37am

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Oh man... its like too many things took place within a blink of an eye!

hmm their father being hospitalised was some sort of a welcome break i must say! it did help them deviate their minds off from the ruckus that took place both in their hearts and home!

Shyam... well understood that it was his doing to have created the unpleasant scenario ... nonetheless it all worked out in our favor! :) But the nerve of this man! what does he mean he needs to 'save' her? save her? really?

The farm house and the flashback related to the same... made me go a lill nostalgic of the show days! 
Hmmm so khushi knows to drive? thats good! i would love to see khushi if not sofisticated but modern in the worldly ways ... so yes i liked it... :)

It was a good thing Khushi was able to convince Arnav to visit his ailing father... and that must have been in Shyam's face... 

Why was their father connecting Khushi to Lali? who is lali? does this bit hold any significance in the story at all? or was it just to emphasize his illness and create a realtime like experience?

Whatever ... the moment he was introduced .. he was taken away... and i have no doubts again that it was Shyam's doing in this as well! his medicines not being administered correctly and causing his hospitalization in the 1st place... and then the sudden death when no one was around except himself at the hospital is the food for my thoughts! lets see how this gets shaped up in the future!

Lastly... WHAT?!?... Kavi!!!!! consummation happened even before we realized it!!? yaake Kavi .. yaake?*pouts* ... The one shown from the past cannot be countered as a replacement whatsoever!! :((  I am feeling cheated at this like during the case of the show!! he he he  

Again Arnav's mind still lingering around the past and her supposed betrayal! *sigh* .. when will he come around!?

P.S ... How did Lavanya take in all these? will we get to know abt it? i cant wait to know *evil smirk*

P.S.S... ouh and offcourse! Here comes Dr. Maanav!! :))) Welcome aboard Dr.. you were the missing piece in the puzzle!! *reminded of DR*

Thanks a lot for the update Kavi!! 
I shall get back to my waiting mode for the next weekly update!! :)


Edited by LeenaRocks - 24 April 2013 at 5:23am

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