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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 55)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Loved the update !!! I feel Shyam was involved in giving the wrong medication to his father in law which in turn caused his death !!!! I hope Manav finds about this and Investigates further into the matter ... Loved the flashback so much ... It was so nice of Arnav not to take things far as he wanted her first time to be very memorable !!! But looks like something happened last night Embarrassed  Pls pretty please update that :)  Shyam is totally creeping me out . Kavi , you are the writer right do something quite nasty to him na !!!! I will be gleefully happy Big smile and celebrate the occasion !!!! If you want you can conduct a poll to give out sadistic  ideas LOL 

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Wonderful update, Arnav is grieving his fathers death, and he finds solace in her..., hoping that you are not planning for a MU due to Shyam, and we get entry of Dr Manav...Shyaam planned it all and it worked or ASR married her. Will his viewpoint change as she was a virgin. I was hoping Arnav will talk to his dad and something interesting opens up...liked that Kushi knows where to find him and bring him back. Also waiting to see if in this story will he standup for her from now on? 

This time he did not love her but gave into his want, how will he justify himself, he still loves her but not acknowledged yet..., so many turns still

Liked the way turmoil between ARSHI written


Edited by arnkhunostalgic - 24 April 2013 at 5:03am

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Khushi knew exactly where to find him. So did Arnav is the one who bought the guest house from Nani?
His father died.but he was unable to communicate with him.


Shyam is a leecher and will leave no stone to proove it.

Kavi- why did you stop here? Please do not leave the details of there first night.
I am sure you have planned a better one.

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
hope shyam doesnt create mu in between arshi

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
awesome update 

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:10am | IP Logged
fantastic update dear...

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:16am | IP Logged
I feel so sad for Arnav and Anjali- to lose both parents one after the other, that must  be so heartbreaking. Just wondering, did our dear Shyam hasten his death? Because he was getting better, and suddenly developed wheezes- I coudn't help but think of Babuji. I do hope they catch Shyam soon, he is not only disgusting, but scary too as he seems to be mentally imbalanced. So Khushi's name had to be maligned because NK doesn't deserve her, and Arnav doesn''t either. But yeah the creeper of the year deserves her. And what plans for Khushi? Someone get rid of him before he does something else.
P.S. It's so nice to see Dr Manav again ;)

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged
What an unexpected chain of events...! Who would even guessed you'd bring in arnav's dad, abhi!

I liked that no matter how things are between them, when a calamity hits truce is called..instructions are followed without even blinking twice. It was nice how khushi took control of everything, from convincing arnav to visit his father to letting the siblings grieve, even though u tell us it was arnav who was standing strong. Like they say behind every successful man is a woman (arnav's mum would add - cause women don't go after unsuccessful men lol).

I wonder what lali and the fair thing was about? If there is any significance to that?

Dr manav is here *fist pump* I cannot waiiit

Shyam killed him, didn't he? I don't understand his motive in this case!

There is something about a vulnerable arnav..the way you described his breakdown was so true to his character. Who can deny him anything..when he is like that? And especially the selfless khushi?!

The flashback was beautifully written, the final piece to the mystery it seems. The way you connected such a passionate encounter to a sense of peace then and also now, was impeccable.

So now that arnav has taken something in a bittersweet moment, where is this going to leave them?

Hitashi

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