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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 48)

Cute6 Goldie

Joined: 30 September 2012
Posts: 1047

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Just came across dis story..
Nd m totaly hooked to it..
U have written it so so beautifuly..
Reading dis i went thru your index nd read ur other 2 stories as well..
I absolutely loved d way u mixed up d past nd present..
It is one of d best stories on arshi..
Reading all d parts at once..
Y do u always keep khushi in so much pain in all ur stories??
Bt dis story my god poor
Each nd every part i felt lyk cryng for her..
Nt even in 14 parts i read dat khushi is smiling nd happy..
In d last part wen i saw dat arnav nd khushi got maried i thot she woud get some hapines nd love she deserved but it never came..
Poor gurl..
Nd arnavs mum shes such a stupid lady..
It would have been better if she would have been nt der..
Also d difference in attitude abt d various clases of society is due 2 her disastrous marriage bt i could not understand who was poor she herself or her husband..
But she is such a coward nd did such a bad thng to her own son..
I just instantly fell in luv wid dis fab piece of writting..:)
if u can, pm me or il just stalk no problm..
Pretty long coment nd bit foolish too but felt lyk expresing :)
would luv 2 c how will d story progress nw..
Vaiting :)

Edited by Cute6 - 20 April 2013 at 5:32am

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sanjeewi15 Senior Member

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Posts: 819

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
finally the flashback... poor Arnav and poor khushi... both of them are suffering because of Arnav's mother... :(

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-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 November 2008
Posts: 12285

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
i know khushi agreed to marry arnav because of her parents
arnav in his t-shirts and jeans and khushi in her bridal avatar...i m loving it

so much happen in past because of mother
its not easy for khushi to move on 
everyone get what they wanted except arnav khushi
sharada wants to separate khushi from his son arnab she don without caring her son feelings
Khushi never tell him about his mother
arnav still live in past betrayal 
no one knows the truth about sharada games
NK...if khushi told him everything about her and arnav relation 
why he can't take stand in front his mother if he loved khushi 

what happen now if arnav khushi get married 
tehy never and may be unable to sort out their past 
Because arnav doesn't know anything and still blame and accuse her
Saath ho ke door hoge arnav khushi 

i think arnav have full right to know the truth 

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amaypranay IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6210

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 11:17am | IP Logged
This is one if my most fav FF's of it very writing is so intense...waiting eagerly for the next chapter...

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rajvta Senior Member

Joined: 09 April 2009
Posts: 286

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
Great update. Read the entire story in one go and now I am hooked.
you are getting better and better with reeling your readers in with each of your stories. Desert Rose was a beauty, but this one is an absolute gem.
Also, like how you have kept each character's basic characterization similar to the show while turning them up a notch with your fresh perspective.
Please next update soon.

Edited by rajvta - 20 April 2013 at 12:41pm

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melonie IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6637

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 1:34pm | IP Logged

Very interested flashback. Glad Arnav and Khushi are married even after all that happened between them. Their love was too strong. So even though Khushi has promised Mrs. Raizada she will stay away from her son fate brought them together and today they are husband and wife. Is it still necessary to hold on to that promise...can't she not tell Arnav what happened in the past? 

I am sad when Arnav said why Aakash is marrying from a low class family..was it because of the behavior from Khushi's family...what will he say when he comes to know of his mothers behavior...what class can you grade her behavior as?

Khushi was really put under a difficult situation...her babuji's life, sister's many things were at stake.

Hope she finds her happiness atleast now. I feel it's time to let go the past :D

Pls cont soon...

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jisa IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8470

Posted: 21 April 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cry

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tina_1234 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 27 June 2009
Posts: 26779

Posted: 21 April 2013 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
Awesome story

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