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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 44)

dpotnis Senior Member

Joined: 03 September 2006
Posts: 700

Posted: 19 April 2013 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
So as expected Arnav's mom blackmailed Khushi. I can understand a moms concern about her son but to take such drastic steps was a bit too much. On the positive side, it has hardened Khushi to face the world alone. 
I wonder how will you bring out the truth. No one else knows what happened and Khushi will keep her promise not to tell Arnav. So either she will tell someone else what happened (Anjali maybe?) and Arnav will come to know thru her. Or may be Arnav finds out about those papers Sharada used to blackmail Khushi and gets to the root of it. Or are you planning to make use of Shyam in uncovering the truth and spilling it out and Arnav overhearing. Uff...Too many possibilities...But finally Arnav Khushi toh sath mein hain... hamesha...

Edited by dpotnis - 19 April 2013 at 11:19pm

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chulbuli94 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 13 April 2012
Posts: 5752

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Khushi's suffered a lot due to Arnav's Mom~~~.but she's still holding the truth to an adoring son~~~

I want her to tell the truth to Arnav~~~~but will he believe her??

Arnav's confession was lovely~~'waiting for Arhi's romance~~~~but I can't expect it in near futureLOLLOL

Amazing update,Kavi di !!pls never ever forget to pm me in future !!!

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ara_000 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 21 May 2011
Posts: 27796

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 3:30am | IP Logged
d opening scene...
Hayeee dats way too awsum...arnav in his jeans nd shirt nd khushi in lahenga...
Awww dats sumthng different yet d most beautiful marriage ceremony...
I loved it how arnav tied d mangalsutra nd put d sindoor on her...they r sooo much in love...their respective xpressions nd feelings r potrayed xcellently...!
Nd ya naani is r8...they r destined to b together...i loved it how arnav carries her to his house nd as soon as d rice pot ritual is finished he did not wait for another second also nd just picked his wife in his arms...
Awww dats sooo sweet of him Smile
nd wat d hell yaar...!!
They were again fighting wit each other nd dat too on their suhaagraat...nly they can do dis Wink
happy dat khushi confessed evrythng abt NK to arnav nd arnav confessed dat he loved her nd though he will not say it but its already official dat he loves her even khushi got evrythng clear abt why Mrs.RAIZADA had said all those bloody non sense to her in d can a mother do dis to her son...!! Angry
hate her Angry
waiting for their married life to start...wat will khushi do now aftr knowing dat arnav is simply trapped by his mom nd he is not at all in fault rather he loved her wit all his heart...
Tough situation for khushi...
Ahhh dying to read d nxt chappy...
Kavi,yet again anothe superb update...
Thumbs Up for u again...
Awsum update simply fantastic...

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addicted16 Groupbie

Joined: 28 March 2012
Posts: 117

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Hi Kavi...i wanted to add something to my previous comment that i forgot to mention... I really  loved the way u described the marriage ceremony... each and emotion was described so well... like when he was tying the mangalsutra and then khushi's reaction when he placed the sindoor on her forehead...i could imagine the whole thing as if its happening in front of me. U paint such an awesome picture that it automatically takes the reader in that worldDay Dreaming. Thanks a lot for such beautiful updateHug...eagerly waiting for the next one. TcHeart

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anamunir Goldie

Joined: 18 March 2012
Posts: 2184

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 4:40am | IP Logged
hey kavi ,
can't wait fr the next update buddy!!!!
hoping u update  it soon !!!!

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Cute6 Goldie

Joined: 30 September 2012
Posts: 1047

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 5:26am | IP Logged
Just came across dis story..
Nd m totaly hooked to it..
U have written it so so beautifuly..
Reading dis i went thru your index nd read ur other 2 stories as well..
I absolutely loved d way u mixed up d past nd present..
It is one of d best stories on arshi..
Reading all d parts at once..
Y do u always keep khushi in so much pain in all ur stories??
Bt dis story my god poor
Each nd every part i felt lyk cryng for her..
Nt even in 14 parts i read dat khushi is smiling nd happy..
In d last part wen i saw dat arnav nd khushi got maried i thot she woud get some hapines nd love she deserved but it never came..
Poor gurl..
Nd arnavs mum shes such a stupid lady..
It would have been better if she would have been nt der..
Also d difference in attitude abt d various clases of society is due 2 her disastrous marriage bt i could not understand who was poor she herself or her husband..
But she is such a coward nd did such a bad thng to her own son..
I just instantly fell in luv wid dis fab piece of writting..:)
if u can, pm me or il just stalk no problm..
Pretty long coment nd bit foolish too but felt lyk expresing :)
would luv 2 c how will d story progress nw..
Vaiting :)

Edited by Cute6 - 20 April 2013 at 5:32am

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sanjeewi15 Senior Member

Joined: 01 February 2012
Posts: 819

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
finally the flashback... poor Arnav and poor khushi... both of them are suffering because of Arnav's mother... :(

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-Cheeni- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 November 2008
Posts: 12285

Posted: 20 April 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
i know khushi agreed to marry arnav because of her parents
arnav in his t-shirts and jeans and khushi in her bridal avatar...i m loving it

so much happen in past because of mother
its not easy for khushi to move on 
everyone get what they wanted except arnav khushi
sharada wants to separate khushi from his son arnab she don without caring her son feelings
Khushi never tell him about his mother
arnav still live in past betrayal 
no one knows the truth about sharada games
NK...if khushi told him everything about her and arnav relation 
why he can't take stand in front his mother if he loved khushi 

what happen now if arnav khushi get married 
tehy never and may be unable to sort out their past 
Because arnav doesn't know anything and still blame and accuse her
Saath ho ke door hoge arnav khushi 

i think arnav have full right to know the truth 

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