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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 32)

msin IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Kavi ... Do u know I just adore the Kurta clad Suraj in all your stories..starting with DND...where he had a supporting role. I waited for him to play a cameo in Desert rose .. He never came... Just his name was enough to make Arnav jump the gun there..
Over here also u have made him a silent character... But effective still. Why was Arnav angry 5 years ago... Why did he talk of low class in front of lavanya...just because bua ji behave like a shrew...

Sharada raizada played a starring negative role why did she agree for her daughter to marry Shyam... Did she not care enough..
Khushi thankfully got married to him...did they get married albeit childishly 10 years ago...or just sat under a tree...because Arnav remembers the braids...

I want more 10 year flashbacks... Pretty please with sugar on top..
Now will father in law make an appearance to clear the mess mom in law made..

Edit ur cover page... It still shows chapter 13.. This is for ur less dedicated readers..ur fans catch on whether u edit or notLOL

Edited by msin - 17 April 2013 at 4:12am

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Anupama. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged

I loved the description of the wedding..everything about it is so lovely..

Although the conversation in their bedroom was kind of confusing. I did understand what khushi meant when she had mused in the earlier chapters that she'l have to talk to him. Him being NK here. But everything else didnt sink in well.


Every emotion in the past felt so alive. Shrewdness, helplessness, anger ,cruelty and every feeling that each one carry.

Edited by Anupama. - 17 April 2013 at 5:11am

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soaringskies Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged
sharada...AngryDead i wonder how will arnav react once he gets to know what his mother did...Ouch
i don't blame khushi for anything...bas..!!

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applesauce. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:04am | IP Logged

Beautiful Update!

Finally,Arnav and Khushi are married.So who told NK's mum?Anyways,good NK dint turn up.

Arnav's concern for Khushi is most adorable in the Update.Loved the way he picked her up from the car and wasnt ready to put her down for Grihapravesh.Embarrassed

Day DreamingKhushi knows Arnav loves her.Now its going to be very interesting how things shape up between these two.They can fight as much they want,but they wont be able to fight off the desire..Knowing very well the rights given in past.Embarrassed

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charlotte74 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AquaSandhya

An outstanding opening scene.  Arnav in jeans and t-shirt with his hair flopped onto his forehead and Khushi looking young and  beautiful in the lehenga Arnav bought her made the most strikingly beautiful couple I have ever read about. What makes this wedding most special is Arnav's shaky hands while putting the manalsutra around her neck and his heart missing a beat seeing her raadiant smile. These simple words and gestures illustrate their undying love for each other. The way he takes care of Khushi understanding her exhaustion is beyond words. Such a tender loving and  caring husband. He wants to tip the rice bowl instead of Khushi coz he doesn't want to put her down ... Awww! 

Love Love Love Nani and Anjali :) and thank you Shyam creepo, for calling NK's mom.

Kids, kids, kids!!!! stop fighting. It is your suhaag raat after all. Not that we were expecting much to happen tonight with you going for each other's jugular all the time Angry instead of using the suhaag raat productively Embarrassed

I'm a bit confused about Khushi's actions. She confessed to NK but he still decides to marry her. she thinks he'll call off the wedding and then she can go to Arnav? So, why does she not tell NK to call off the wedding? why go through with it just because NK wants to? Well, that's KKG i guessConfused   

Another confusing thing for me is, why did Arnav say that Akash married a low class girl? Where was the need for that? Seems a bit odd. Sorry, if I'm asking way too many questions.

Khushi!!!!!!  Khushi appears lost despite knowing all the truths. She knows why she left him, she knows why he is angry with her you couldn't see that Arnav loves you behind all that anger? after all he is entitled to his anger coz he doesn't know the truth behind your actions. Atleast he confessed. I think it is time you made up for all the heart ache you caused him.

A great update K. Waiting for your updates is killing me. Not sure how I'm going to survive the next few weeks. The story is gaining pace and the excitement is palpable. Loved it.

She confessed to NK because she thought he deserved to know the truth. She wasn't really asking him to call off the wedding. She gave him the option to back out. If he had called off the wedding then her parents would have been saved from a breach of promise. 

This is the way she thinks.

'Akash is a big fool to be getting married into a low class family like that,' he said, 'I am no fool.'
He never said Payal is a low class girl. You have to understand that he has just come back from watching a scene created by Buaji. He was irritated with Buaji and lashed out.

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toeditor Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:49am | IP Logged
Loved it. 

Will wait for how he comes to know abt his mothers blackmail...

Good part they are married now..Smile

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john-angad Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:50am | IP Logged
khushi is under no obligation to keep any bargain grrr! arnav mom was EVIL!

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shijinareneesh IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:54am | IP Logged
Amazing update... Its true Sharada Raizada black mailed her past is revealed to us nw waiting for the day Arnav knw about this...he said 'after last night didn't u think u gave me some right on you' what happend there in the farm house??? Seems like next week is so far...

Edited by shijinareneesh - 17 April 2013 at 5:35am

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