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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 20)

Raila1014 Goldie

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
I have a huge smile on my face reading about the thappar as I struggle to keep eyes open at this late hour.  Boy I was commenting to another writer about how I loooved the scene in the show when he held Buaji's hand and said "I don't recall giving anyone permission to touch my wife, never mind slapping her . . ." And then here you are incorporating this beautifully in your story without marriage as this was her dilemma because her couple was not married either.

Loved this update as I was scared she was going through with this wedding.  Guessed they did need divine intervention after-all or shall we say the Jha intervention?  Why would she wear his gift on her wedding?  Should her outfit not come from her groom?  Was she trying to send a message that she still belongs to him?  hum to hamesha aapke hi thi . . .What a coward this NK man, not having the balls to call or show his face.  I am with this Akash, who seems to have a perfectly healthy backbone and stood up o his Mumwa.  The question is also what is our hero doing here?  I feel it is because no matter how betrayed he feels, he realized he could not live without her and he came back for her.  But this whole natak started before they could talk to each other.  So of course, he offered to marry her as he was going to do this anyway.  But I guess I kinda know why she said no, she does not want pity when she has listened to all his spiteful remarks.  However, she failed to see that these remarks came because he cares and because he was hurt by what he considers her betrayal.  Personally, I don't fault him.  I think enough of the Hindi movie tragic heroine act on her part and time for her to speak up, she can do it without bad mouthing his mum.  

Now you give us another cliff hanger, how will we cope for another week?

Edited by Raila1014 - 10 April 2013 at 10:28pm

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Amti4u IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
LOved the update and the best part is when Khuhsiii denied his proposal...
Superb update dear... Thank you for the PM

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TeriGalliyan. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Beautiful :D

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addicted16 Groupbie

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:32am | IP Logged
CONGRATULATIONS on new thread...And thanks a lot for the PM Smile
Kavi...u left me desperately asking for more with this chapter (sigh)!
Awesome updateClap...NK as i said earlier was an idiot and now a coward as well...nd Manorama mami and Shyam always play cupid for Arnav n Khushi though the way they do it is painful...well as they say no gain...he he heLOL. Hope Garima and babuji convinces Khushi for the marriage with Arnav. And i really hope Arnav gets to know about his mother's manipulation soon n stops insulting Khushi. These guys have a long way to go. And i m all set to enjoy that journeyBig smile... Really loved the update. Waiting for the next one...TcHeart

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huny.thebest Goldie

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
fantastic update dear...

can't wait for the next...

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sanjeewi15 Senior Member

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 3:03am | IP Logged
omg a cliff hanger... whn r u goin to update the next chapter... cant wait... actually thanx to ur PM i read 6 whole chapters...

thanx alot charlotte for the PM... i couldnt stalk the FFs recently as i was busy... thanx a lot darling... :) :)

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swatim318 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 5:20am | IP Logged
wooowww loved what Arnav did for Khushi in this update...

but a big time cliffhanger this is... hope u update soon dear... why did that snake shyam had to open his mouth...Angry

thanks for pm...

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chulbuli94 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 5:39am | IP Logged
WOW~~New thread
Congo shongoParty
the update was amazing~~Thank God,we got rid of worthless NK ~~~he
ll suit with Ria~~but I m dreading~~What will be the answer of Khushi & Gupta family?/
Cliff HangerOuch~~update soonSmile

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