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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 131)

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 9:17pm | IP Logged

Hey there,

Just read this story and what a beautiful one. Glad I found this. I am so in love with this Arnav and Khushi – You gave brilliant characterization to these two.

Khushi is being Khushi

She always puts others ahead of her happiness. She left love of her life back then for the sake of her family and for the sake of promise she made to Arnav's mom.

And today she wants to be sensitive and cautious of NK's emotions and feelings and doesn't want Arnav to hurt him.

But she always failed to realize that every time she sacrificed her love Arnav suffered equally or even more. This is probably because she has no clue how much Arnav loves her.

Arnav is being Arnav

He is putting Khushi, his love for her, her pride and respect above everything and everybody. He is completely focused on Khushi and his life with Khushi and is unwary to his surroundings and people in those surroundings. He just wants to protect Khushi and doesn't to her to get hurt.

 But Arnav fails to understand that in the process of protecting her he himself is hurting her.

They are both are in opposite directions of the horizon; yet one thing they have in common is the immeasurable love for each other and this love with bring them together forever and ever.   

Awesome update!!


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charlotte74

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Just caught up with all the chapters...and I tell you  I just love this story. I have said this earlier as well after completing Desert Rose and I shall say this again; the way you portray characters ...the setting, the clothes makes em feel as though I am a part of the scenario and it only escalates the interest in the story.

As for the current update...I liked the fight between NK and Arnav; that Arnav finally beat the hell out of him for stranding Khushi on their wedding day. Of course the resultant tiff between Arnav and Khushi was unwelcome but I suppose you'll get them to make up soon. 

Sending you a buddy request for PMs of further updatesSmile

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
simply awesome...continue soon...

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
awesome update nk is such a loser just like his mami ria will soon learn that being married to him and asr not controlling his temper glad he deafened his wife just wished he would do it at home and stop let mami insult her awesome update asr last remark was so uncalled for  hated khushi defending nk loved the asr punching him loved the update  

Edited by dumas - 16 May 2013 at 10:04pm

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Why doesnt NK leave Khushi to be happy...Arnav will so regret his behavior when he will find the truth...
Wonderful update.

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
I adored the first half of the story where Arnav and Khushi were like any other newly married couple. The morning teasing and playfulness followed by breakfast together...him forcing her to sit down...it was so beautiful and gutur gutur!!!!!!

Then comes mami and her viper tongue and I so adored Arnav telling Payal to go help in the Kitchen...when is Arnav going to decide that they will live elsewhere...I am waiting...how on earth do these people get to treat Khushi so bad.

Garima and Shashi deserve major kudos for talking Khushi into marrying her love. good for them. am I sensing that there is a past that Garima was so obsessed with that she ignored Khushi's emotional needs?

Arnav just stole the show on this day by being the utterly loving, caring and dashing husband. He made an allowance for her parents, he brought her clothes and jewellery, he is proudly defending her when she herself does not think she is defensible...

So what is wrong with her that she took NK's side and defended NK to the bitter end? I personally loved Arnav and NK exchange and was so satisfied when Arnav hit NK...but seriously, I am totally with Arnav...may be he is delusional if he thinks they can move on?

I am absolutely angry at Khushi. I do not even begin to understand her.

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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arshi21

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by arshi21

Originally posted by charlotte74

Originally posted by arshi21



Comments like these simply overwhelm me because of the indepth understanding of the characters. It makes all the effort I put in so WORTH IT.

Thanks!


I think since she knows Arnav belongs to her and she belongs to him and they are together and unconsciously is safe in that knowledge ... she is angry with Arnav for what he did rather being angry at NK or Lavanya. Maybe because she cares too much for Arnav and thinks she has a right over him.. Akhir Haq hai uska..Arnav se gussa hone ka.. and she has expectations from him... she behaved like that. From quite a young age, Khushi had involuntarily stopped expecting things from people... but I guess that didn't change for Arnav. For her, Arnav belongs to her.. so maybe that's why the anger.

Sigh. 



Clap


I made sense? Embarrassed

I thought I didn't..

Thanks man! Big smile

You made so much sense that I may have to quote this instead of me explaining this Smile

Often we show our emotions like love, anger etc  with those who we think belong to us rather than with those who don't mean anything isn't it?


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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
I was reading ur initial chapters ...again...it was insightful... There is something of a past that Garima has referred too and even buaji has talked about.. While taunting Khushi about her mother.


Another part...Arnav's parents had a third person in the relationship..in Arnav flashbacks in prologue..
Ur prologue was super cute..

And I confirmed lavanya is still married to some Singhania and she has abandoned her marriage.

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