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Arhi: Valley of Flowers #3 Ch 18 upd in new thread (Page 130)

Bavari Goldie

Joined: 12 November 2012
Posts: 1293

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
Fab chapter.worth the wait.thanks for the longer update.

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vks11 Goldie

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Posts: 2294

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
 awesome awesome. loved it.

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N0306 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 November 2011
Posts: 4062

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 5:14pm | IP Logged
thank you very much.. i was waiting for this one.. lots of issues to be solved.. and Khushi is seriously strong.. to see that NK betrayed her before knowing anything about agra.. i am sure he trusted her when she said the man was Arnav and she would never cross a line while being in relationship with him..

and still had the ball to blame khushi when he did the same with Riya.. not that khushi warmed Arnav's bed..

beautifully written.. enjoyed reading it as always..

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Nidsubh007 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 May 2011
Posts: 10215

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!! I'm not sure if I've told you but your Arnav is sizzling hot!!

Looking forward to the next one.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 19 May 2013 at 7:26am

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cheesemad IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 April 2013
Posts: 11854

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 6:46pm | IP Logged
gr8 update...
m glad they acted like normal couple, totally in love with each other initially though...shirtless arnav always a treat to read...Blushing
What is the issue with that mami?? can't she just accept what happened n stop passing derogatory remarks to khushi...Angry

NK's engagement..!! now that was a shock..some days back he jilted khushi at altar n now he's ready to marry another woman...crazy dude...

Awww arnav reminded garima for pag phera he can't get any sweeter...he already handled monthly allowance issue too..m loving him...Heart

i loved the way garima confessed her feelings of not being a good mother...loved the mother daughter convo...u wrote it beautifully...Clap

Arnav bought a beautiful saree for her which she thot is gaudy...seriously only khushi can label a designer saree as gaudy...LOL

Really loved the way arnav was with khushi throughout the engagement...he is such a supporting hubby... Another crazy character of the story lavanya kashyap...she's totally insane..cant blame her she just lost the hottest guy on the surface of earth...shes allowed to feel jealous...lavanya n her delusions...

And here comes the greatest scene of the update...i enjoyed it so much.. NK is spineless guy...the excuse he gave for leaving khushi was just pathetic...n loved the heroic entry of our ASR...NK really thot khushi would marry him if arnav wouldn't have come...what a delusional man...
 'I told you he will hit you.' i seriously don't know y but i loved this lineBig smile
i really loved ASR in this whole scene...the way he was fighting for khushi was just amazing...u r a starStar

i am disappointed in khushi she is still supporting that coward man...hope she'll understand soon that he's nothing but a craven... n they fought again..i really hope they reconcile soon... poor arnie boy he thinks he is delusional...

wow initially i thot i would write that this update left me ineffable n i didn't realize i would write so much ..hope u didn't get bored reading it...
continue soon...m already waiting for the next updateSmile

Edited by cheesemad - 16 May 2013 at 6:54pm

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rajvta Senior Member

Joined: 09 April 2009
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Posted: 16 May 2013 at 7:35pm | IP Logged
NK is one week character. Rhea will soon come to now she chose a looser.
Seriously Khushi... you cant please everyone . This way you will only end up hurting Arnav and yourself.
And what can we say about Arnav.. fighting with mami for Khushi, arranging for her pag phere, getting her the dress and then confronting NK for her .. wow he is being a perfect husband to Khushi.
Great update.

Edited by rajvta - 16 May 2013 at 8:13pm

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meera06 Goldie

Joined: 12 July 2011
Posts: 2240

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
I'm actually a little disappointed with Khushi after this update...
She doesn't speak the truth about what happened 5 years back to Arnav but he tries to forget everything and is moving forward...And now she is supporting that idiotic NK for what?? only Khushi can say...
I kept saying throughout this story that Khushi is being treated like a doormat but what can others do when you yourself is giving the opportunity for others to treat you like one...Her not speaking against Mami I can understand...but what about Lavanya..why does Khushi need to take her crap also.. ??
The first part was good..Arnav showering his love to Khushi and her family..I liked his thoughtful gestures..he is actually supporting her and standing for her... words...she is still in her delusional world...
Dr.Mannav and Anjali???Thankfully there wasn't too much of Shyam in this update...Lavanya and NK are more than enough...

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avchowdhury IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 April 2012
Posts: 2528

Posted: 16 May 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
just amazing update

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