i loved their morning after conversation...and i am all geared up for this new phase of their life...
I absolutely fangirl over the way you write passion...honestly it is one of the best here...the way you add a lot of depth to Arnav's character makes the whole passion so intense...so raw...preethi and myself were discussing your update so thoroughly and we noticed your description for arnav's muscles downright sexy!!!!! hope our kids dont find what their moms are upto :)
And after the intense emotions in this story my personal favourite is the humour (I mean Shyam)...omg he is just so hilarious...hahahahaha...i was ROFL when he was perplexed at Arnav and Khushi's intimacy...please please more of that...will you?
Boss , I can survive on Arshi updates sans Shyam. I just can't stand that creep.
No I dont want option 3 too...and I dont find him creepy here...he is totally ridiculous...and i love the humour he brings to the story...he is the real flopwa...
And I choose option 1 :) Edited by asr2kkg - 10 years ago
Kavi... So u r on off?? We are just back after a vacation and looks like this month is going to be tough for fiction readers... Most of them are on off writing mode... Sad sad sad... Missing u n wishing u fun...
Coming to the update... Kaviji only u can present us this raw Arnav... Ahem ahem... What a passion what a passion!!!! The way you had written his muscular frame made me blush for an hour after reading it... I could clearly understand an happy Khushi for three weeks without her husband... Just a night n Khushi could roam around with blush for days together... Kaviji are you not making our Arnav over macho here ๐ณ... I am not complaining even a teeny bit about it... Arnav can do lot more... Bring it on kaviji we are waiting to see what is in store for us... 3 weeks of separation n passion that would have got built out of it... We are waiting to read... N one more point... Of all the shyams I have come across yours is the funniest...