Wow that was an amazing and mind blowing update, written beautifully and perfectly well.
As usual hating Mami and Mama they are so insensitive especially towards Anjali, they didn't even care that her dad had passed away.
Hating Shyam as well, such a leech and he admitted to Khushi that he was the one that put the jacket in her cupboard. He goes he will help her and separate her from Arnav, but little does he know he actually played Cupid. I'm so glad he saw Arnav and Khushi getting intimate.
Wow loved the way Khushi greeted Arnav on Holi, the hug was beautiful and loved her cute little dialogue. She put colour on Arnav and in return he put it on her as well.
Loved the part where Khushi applied paste on Arnav that was so sweet and the way Arnav was teasing her was so adorable.
Wow there love making was so hot, beautiful and passionate, it was written beautifully. Love the fact that khushi had decided she will give herself to Arnav as he was going through so much emotional turmoil.
Loved the confession Arnav made to Khushi the following morning, telling her to forget the past as the feelings between them are a lot stronger to ignore.
An exceptionally well written update from start to finish.
Please continue soon xx
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