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~~||special 37||~~#3 {IO}new writer list pg51 28/5 (Page 51)

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ok fine honey ill ask her and let u know

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changes in writers coz two writers left.. changes are in black
1-
kuts
2-sandy1
3-V3Od
4-Maithly
5-momo121
6-hira_arnie
7-Pancakes
8-TINA!
9-.crazy4arshi
10-ii..shilps..ii
11--saranya-
12-..paawani..
13-*khushii*
14-Anne_ArHi
15--chamkilli-
16-shraddska
17-RTlicious
18-Lord.voldemort
19-Jenji08
20-...chanchan...
21-Lazybeans
22-..hrideyy..
23-SuperstarSanaya
24-..Sugar_ArHi..
25-MishtyShah
26-Srivi01
27- -PariKC
28-ranjha_arnav
29-f aith_hope
30-evrydayirabbave
31-blek
32-ssyahoo
33-Anony_mous
34-Arshiangel
35-adventure_roks
36-Fleur_de_Lis
37-appy_indy-KD

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Note {very very important}

guyz here is the chapter written by me to give story some more twist and turns..


zINDAGI kA pEHLA rAAZ

Arnav did not know what made him say the next phrase, but he knew it was time.

"Marry me, Khushi".

The next thing arnav felt was a tight slap on his left cheek..

Yes khushi slapped him..

She didn't knew what made her do so but she did it. 

 

Arnav's saw her eyes full with fury and rage as if she will kill him right here'

Khushi-arush how can you do that?

Arnav-khushi listen..

Khushi-not a word'.. from you I am going'

 

Her heart was saying that it is right but her believes that she is already married were stopping her from doing so'.

 

Khushi started walking away alone in the heavy rain'

Arnav shouted from behindarnav-but why?

 

Khushi turned back and answered him

Khushi-becouse I am already married'..

 

And she left'

 

Arnav was not understanding why he did that. What made him get attracted towards her'

Till now she never had any girlfriend because he was never able to go close to any girl..

Maby girls tried to get him'

Seduce him..

One was soo much behind money that she stripped infront of him but she never felt anything for her alos'.

But the things were not same now'

From the time he has saw khushi he just want to be with her'.

Make her his'

Keep her with him and for himself only'

He dosent know why he feels that this time he don't wanna loose her'..

But at the same time he also thinks that when has he met her that he will loose her again'

 

He was not aware of the string binding them'

He was not aware of the curse which will bind them but it will still keep them apart'.

The curse which will destroy khushi..

Which will take her everything away from it'

Arnav sat down leaning against his car''..

On The other hand khushi was walking on the road..

Her state of mind was not with her today'.

She was devastated'.

She was feeling as if she has lost someone very important'.

She was feeling as she did a very big mistake'..

Only two words were repeating in her mind..

Marry me

Marry me

Marry me

Marry me'..

Khushi shouted'

Khushi-bas bas''.(enough)

She sat leaning against a tree'..

She closed her eyes to find some peace but fate had another plans for her'

After closing her eyes she saw herself in a dark room'

Without any source of light'.

Suddenly a bright light appeared..

And khushi closed her eyes feeling the strong light rays on her eyes'.

And then she heard a voice'.

Voice-who marega'.. tu maregi use'..(he will die.. you will kill him')

Khushi-who r u?

Voice-tujhe marna hoga use varna who tujhe aur terese jore har insaan ko khatam kardega'.(you have to kill him or else he will kill everyone related to'.)

Khushi-kon hai app? Aur yeh kya bol rahe hai?9who are you and what are you saying'

Voice-usne shuruat kar di.. tera bahut karibi koi marega' bahut jldi marega(he has started someone close to you will die very soon..)

Khushi-noo you are leing'

Voice-I am not leing my child'.. I am your father khushi' I am telling you all this for your benefit' my child'.

Khushi-my dad'.

Voice-yes' khushi arush aur tumhare beech ek dor hai joh tum dono ko ekdusre se bandit hai'.(khushi you and arush are tied by a string which keeps you both tied together)

Khushi-but..

Voice-khushi all your questions will be answer but before full moon eclips you have to kill him.. you have to kill  "Shiktal" he is on a mission to kill you but he dosent know that you are the weapon to kill him'.

If you will not be able to kill him then everyone close to you will die and then you'.

Khushi-but how me??

Voice-just realize your inner powers..god will send someone to help you'. He will himself come to you.. you are very special child khushi' your birth is for special reasons and this is the one of them'.. "shiktal" has been back after 4500 years'''. You have to kill him '. Its now or never.. will you do it beta'. It will be the key to your relation with arush' when will you kill him you will get a book.. in that book your entire life is written but you will only know when the time will come'

When "shiktal" will be killed you will get that book' only some first pages will be full other pages will be blank coz the time has not came for you know to that things' but the first chapter will reveal your relation with arush.. don't let him go'.

Khushi-I will kill him.. I will fulfill all the couses for which I have took birth' I will not let arush go'

Voice-it's the time to give you your first power god will bless you my child'

Then the white light disappeared and a golden ball of light got inside of khushi.. she jerked up and fely immense pain in her nody but after some moments she felt everything normal'

After that she fainted''

Khushi was lying unconscious on the road'.

 

Arnav was back to his hotel and was thinking about past moments''

Khushi was still lying unconscious on the road when a car came and halted infront of her..

A guy of around 25 got down from the car'

He was fair..

He was tall

And handsome..

He was arhaan mehta'. The person who will help khushi to kill "shiktal"

 

He will be her body guard her best friend'

He will be the person who wil reunite arnav and khusi.. but later'.

He came and sat beside khushi' he picked her up in his arms and settled her on the back seat and drove to his house'.

~after 3 hours~

Khushi gained consciousness and and she saw herself in a different room..

Then she saw a guy coming towards her with a tray of soup'

She was not understanding how she ended up here'

Arhaan-khushi khushi you think very much' I am arhaan'

Khushi-how you know my name?

Arhann-I know everything about you' remember your talks with your father you will come to know who I am'

Khushi closed her eyes nd her father's words repeated in her mind..

"god will send somebody to help you.."

Khushi-you r.??

Arhaan-yes I am now drink this soup.. you have to get better.. we only have 4 days with us to kill him and we have to save your diama.. he is going to kill her.. we have to hurry up khushi'

Khushi-diama? What' I cannot loose her' we have to go'

Without waiting a second they left..

To start their mission''

Note 1

you must be thinking i suddenly introduced arhaan and khushi was comfortable with him...

khushi was not comfortable with himmshe just wanted to save her diamaa...

arhaan and khushi bond will grow more and more as the story will progress...

arnav is a complex character here..

one of his soecvial thing is that he can read anybody's mind but he cannot read khushi's mind... coz khushi's minds is gaurded by special forces...

i think it is sufficiant for now..

imporant for writers...

arhaan will be there till the end of this story..

charcter development is on you people


Note 2

i know you all must be thinking how this chapter came but it was neccessary for some reasons to add it...

next chapter will be chapter 4 which will be written by maithly...

till them enjoy this part.


now comes the important note...

some things to be cleared for writers..

1-
shiktal is not the main villian.

2-main villian will be someone else.

for the book i mentioned book has many secrets of khushi's life.
after killing shiktal only 1 secret about arshi marriage will be out.
others will be still a raaz(mystry)

3-this chapter is written to give story a track soo we can make a plot coz after chapter 3 when arnav said "marry me" me and shraddask di thought that thye pace is very fast... if this will be continued the story will be restricted as an SS.so i wrote this chapter to mak it spicy...

4-we will be setting bench marks coz if we dont the story will be like this and readers will do this with us and we will be like this

4-arhaan is an important charcter keep him till end...

 hope all the confusions are clear now...


if there are more


feel free to Pm me or shraddask di.

or post it here...{its better}Embarrassed

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I give a warm welcome to ur 3 new members...

hira_arnie -->replaced titaliya_AP
Anne_ArHi-->replaced shimmer vani
Fleur_de_Lis---> replaced arhi6

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Posted: 29 May 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Welcome New writers :)

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Posted: 29 May 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

welcome the new writers :D

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Welcome to new writers!! 

Hope everyone is doing well..
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