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FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 (Page 77)

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sharmirayanz

Ohho no... :( wht next?? Arre cant wait 4 next...give update soon...superb going..excitment is in high level...
 
thank uSmile. will post next part soonBig smile

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
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Originally posted by lpsakshi

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will update in the afternoonBig smile
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Note:- I showed Raya Milan on the request of my few friends in this forum. This is edited part of Raya Milan. Those who want unedited part please PM me, I will send in your inbox.

 

Part 14

In the hostel,

It's raining heavily outside. Priya is in her room. She is in salwar-kurtha. Girl is putting mehndi on Priya's hand.

 

Ram reached her hostel. Security guard tried to stop him, but Ram opens the gate and forcefully entered into the hostel. He called Priya's name loudly. Warden tries to stop him.

 

Priya hears and takes off her hand and ran towards downstairs. She saw Ram is standing. He is fully wetted in rain. Ram holds her hand and drag with him. Her mehandi is washed away in rain. He opens the car door and made her to sit. Ram started the car and left.

 

He is driving the car in the high speed. He took her to the cottage. Both are fully drenched.

Ram:- so, Priya'kal tum Ashwin ke saat apni naye zindagi ki shuruwat karne jaa rahi ho'bahut kush lag rahi ho'abb toh tumhe meri koi zaroorat nahi hai na'..

Priya:- (stammering) Ram'yeh aap kya keh rahe ho.

 

Ram:- No'Priya..mein tumhe kisi aur ke saat nahi dekh sakta'.jab tum Ashwin ke saat kadi rehti ho'.mujse bardasht nahi hota'.woh jab tumhe chuta hai'mein pagal ho jata hoon'usne apna haath tumhare kande par rakka tha na..yahan'(and he rub her shoulder with his hand) aur usme tumhara haath pakda tha na..(and again rub her hand)

 

Priya is confused with his behavior. She doesn't understand why he is behaving like this. Why such possessiveness.

Priya:- Ram yeh aapko kya ho gaya hai..aap eise kyun behave kar rahe hai'

 

Ram takes her face in his palm. He looks intently in her eyes with all his love. His eyes clearly show his anger, his pain of losing someone. He tightly pecks her lips.

 

Priya closed her eyes. She had tears in her eyes; she is waiting for this moment for long time.

After some time Ram broke the kiss. He back to his sense and realizes that what he is doing is wrong. He leaves her and turns to go, when Priya hold his hand and turns towards her.

 

Priya:- Ram'mein aapko kahi jaane nahi dungi. I want to make this moment special. Kal kya hone wala hai mein nahi janti lekin aaj iss lamhe ko mein jeena chahti hoon'.sirf aapke saat

Priya hugs Ram tightly. Both have pain in their eyes.

 

They are in that position for some time'..

It's raining heavily outside. Due to strong winds and rain lights were gone.

Raya came back into senses. Raya broke the hug.

 

Ram:- chalo'Priya mein tumhe hostel chod deta hoon'.muje tumhe yahan nahi lana chahiye tha'

Priya:- Nahi'Ram..aaj mein sirf aape saat rehna chahti hoon'

Ram:- nahi'Priya yeh galat hai'.

Priya:- Ram'jo abb tak ho raha tha..woh galat tha'abb jo ho raha hai woh sahi hai'nahi toh aaj hum dono iss waqt yahan nahi hote'

 

Priya slowly puts her right hand on his chest. She slowly moves towards him and closes the gap. Priya slowly stands on her toe to match with him and move towards his lips. She closes her eyes and takes his upper lips in her. Piya parted her lips to give him more access'both are lost in each other. They deepen the kiss with lots of sensations.

After some time both broke the kiss for need of air. Both smiles'Priya looks down and blushing'.

 

Ram:- Ek minute'(and goes inside)

Priya goes and stand near the window. She is looking outside. Rains drops hit her face. She is enjoying the moments.  Ram came back with two candles. He lit the candles and place near the bed side table. Ram then goes near her and stands behind her. He puts his hand on her hand and moves upwards and stops near her shoulder. He unpins her dupatta. He bends and put his chin on her shoulder. He slowly brushes his face with her. Priya closed her eyes. she is breathing heavily. Ram slowly kisses on her ears and bite slowly. Priya can't control and turns towards him. Both are looking into each other intensely.

 

Ram puts his one hand on her back and slowly lifts her and carries her to the bedroom.

He slowly and carefully laid her on the bed. She is looking passionately into his eyes. Ram reads her eyes. Her eyes telling her needs and desire'.her eyes are giving him permission to take inside her.

 

On the other side,

Vikram is disturbed. He is worrying for Ram and his fate. He doesn't know what to do. He reached home. Neha saw him disturbed.

 

Neha:- kya hua baby'itne upset kyun lag rahe ho'kuch hua kya'Ram teek toh hai na'tum baito mein tumhare liye paani lekar aati hoon.

Vikram:- nahi Neha..tum mere paas baito'

 

Neha:- Ok'lekin hua kya hai'

Vikram:- muje nahi pata hamesha Ram ke saat hi eisa kyun hota hai'khushiyaan aati hai aur usse diye bagair hi chali jaati hai

 

Neha:- kya hua Vikram'kuch toh bolo'

Vikram said whatever happens and also the truth of Priya

 

Neha was shocked.

Neha:- Vikram hame Ram ko sab kuch bata dena chahiye'isse pehle ki der ho jaaye'

 

Vikram:- Kya batayenge Neha ki Priya ki shaadi ho chuki hai'woh kisi aur ki biwi hai'Neha'hame yeh bhi nahi pata ki Priya ke saat hua kya tha..woh yahan kaise aayi'uske saat eisa kya hua ki usse abhi kuch yaad bhi nahi hai'.

 

Neha:- haan'lekin hum chup bhi toh nahi baith sakte na'.aur kal agar Priya ko sab kuch yaad aa jata hai'tumne socha kabhi tabb Ram ke saat kya beetne wala hai'isse achha toh yeh hai'ki Ram ke saamne yeh sachhaayi aa jaaye ki Priya uski kabhi nahi ho sakti'

 

Vikram:- Nahi Neha bina puri sachhayi jane hame Ram ko kuch nahi batana chahiye..

Neha:- toh kya socha hai..kya karne wale ho

Vikram:- mere paas Priya ka address hai'mein abhi issi waqt Priya ke ghar ke liye nikalta hoon. Pata lagata hoon'kya hua hai'

 

Neha:- vikram'abhi koi flight nahi hai'hum kal subah tak ka intezaar karte hai'kal subah ki pehli flight pakadkar hum jaayenge..

Vikram:- Nahi'Neha..tum yahan rahogi'Ram kuch pooche toh keh dena muje urgently apne ghar jana pada. Mein mobile switch off kar dunga taki Ram mujse baat na kar sake'

 

Neha:- (hugging sideway) sab teek ho jaayega na..

Vikram:- haan Neha'sab teek ho jaayega'hum hai na hum Ram ko kuch nahi hone denge

 

On the other side

In the cottage,

Ram comes on top of her and kisses her forehead, then to her both eyes. He brushes his cheeks with her and gave enormous kisses on her cheeks. Ram slowly comes down and starts nuzzling her neck. She moves her head back to give him more assess.  He bites slowly on her neck. Priya can't able to control and puts her hands on his face and tries to stops him. He took her both hand stretch it and entwine with his fingers. Priya moan'..

After some time Ram leaves her hand. Priya open her eyes'.

 

Ram slowly moves towards her'Priya understands, she smiles and turns back. Now her back is facing him. Ram moves towards her and slowly unhook the zip of her kurtha. He puts his hand under her cloth and caressing all over her back. He opens her bra. He puts her hair on one side. Ram bends and starts kissing and biting her back feverishly. Ram holds her hand tightly. Priya close her eyes and feeling heavily. She holds the bed linen tightly. She moans his name in pleasure.

 

Ram turns towards him. Now both are facing each other.

Ram remembers his first meet. Now, situation is also the same'

Ram:- Priya'jab meine first time tumhe undress kiya tha na'tabb meine apni aakhen sach mein bandh ki thi'meine uss din kuch nahi dekha'lekin tumne vishwas nahi kiya'.lekin aaj mein fir se wahi sab kuch karne wala hoon'lekin iss baar apni aakhen khole rakunga aur tumhe mehsoos bhi karunga'

 

Priya looks down and blushed profusely.

Just at that moment lights were on. Both were looked into the lights'now Priya is clearly visible. He puts his hand at side and switch off the light.

Priya:- lights kyun off kar di!!!!!!

Ram:- iss candle light mein u r looking divine beauty.

Priya smiles and feeling shy'.

 

Both made love and sleeping peacefully cuddling each other.

Rain is also stopped. Everything is so silent..

 

In the morning,

Priya stirred from her sleep. She looks on the other side. She saw Ram is sleeping besides her putting his one hand on her waist. She remembers her night and feeling shy.

 

Priya:- Thank u Ram for making me urs'love you Ram..love u very very much. Mere liye yeh zindagi ke sabse haseen pal the jo aapne puri kar di. Mein abb yeh zindagi sirf aur sirf aapke naam par jiungi'muje abb aur kuch nahi chahiye'mein hamesha aapko kush dekhna chahti hoon aur aapko yeh khushi tabhi milegi jab mein aapse bahut dur chali jaaungi'.

 

Priya slowly removes his hand from her waist. She kissed him on his forehead. Wipes her tears; Covering herself in duvet she gets up from bed.

She takes her clothes and goes to washroom. After change she once again looked at Ram and left from there.

 

After some time Ram stirred from his sleep. He looked beside and Priya is not there. He thinks "maybe she is in bathroom"

Ram looked on her side and saw the blood stain on the bed. He smiles and said "tumhare past mein jo bhi hua ho Priya'lekin tumhare zindagi mein mein tumhara pehla pyar hoon aur aakiri bhi. Mein tumhe kahi jaane nahi doonga Priya. Hamesha apne saat rakunga..apne paas'love u Priya'love u very very much'u completes me..aur kal raat hamare zindagi ki sabse hassen raat thi''lekin yeh ladki hai kahan'.

 

Ram called her name and gets up from his bed. Wear his clothes and checked into the bathroom. But Priya was not there'.he checked everywhere but Priya is nowhere. Ram becomes worried'and thinks"Priya kahan chali gayi'muje bataya bhi nahi"

 

On the other side,

Vikram is left to Pune in the first flight. He reached Pune and headed towards Priya's place. He opened the gate and saw small girl is playing with a ball. Girl throw ball on him. He takes the ball and gives back to the girl. Just then, a lady came out and called her name NANDINI. She turns and ran towards her and hugs her.

 

Lady:- Nandu andhar jao'dekho tumahre dada ji tumhare liye kya bana rahe hai..

Nandu:- teek hai Dadi'and goes inside.

 

Lady looks at Vikram

Lady:- aap kaun hai beta!!!!

Vikram:- yeh kya Rajat ka ghar hai'

Lady:- haan'lekin aap kaun hai'aapko isse pehle yahan nahi dekha'

 

Vikram:- mein yahan pehli baar aaya hoon. darasal mein uske uske college ka friend hoon. kal ki Dubai se wapas aaya hoon. Raj'.Raj naam hai mera' Kya mein Rajat se mill sakta hoon'.

 

Lady called vikram inside.

Lady:- mein Rajat ki Maa hoon. Rajat yahan nahi hai'.

Vikram:- kahan hai Rajat'

She cried and goes inside. Just then, R's father came out.

 

R's father:- Rajat hamara eklauta beta hai. ek din shaadi se aate waqt Rajat ke car ka accident ho gaya. Aur unki gaadi kaayi mein gir gayi'.Priya bhi saat mein thi'accident ke baad hame priya kahi dhikayi nahi di'aur Rajat dusri taraf behoosh pada tha. kuch logo ne usse hospital pahuchaya'lekin tabb tak kaafi khoon beh gaya tha'Rajat coma mein chala gaya'doctor ka kehna hai'ki rajat ka wapas aane ka chance bahut kam hai'

 

Just then, nandu came outside..

R's father continue'.

Yeh rajat ki beti..Nandini'5 saal ki hai. accident ke waqt Nandini dusri gaadi mein thi'Nandini toh hame mill gayi lekin iss bachhi ne ek saat apne papa aur mummy dono ko kho diya'Nandini Priya se bahut close thi'

He had tears in his eyes'.

 

Vikram takes Nandini on his lap.

Vikram:- kya mein Rajat se mill sakta hoon.

R's father takes vikram to the hospital where Rajat was admitted.

 

Vikram then also met Priya's parents.

Vikram came back with broken heart.

 

 

Precap:- Priya in hospital. Present:- Ram takes Priya home. She hugs dhruv and pihu'.

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 30 July 2013 at 2:09am

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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 2:38am | IP Logged
wow nice stain mark matlab dat ltl girl rajat s duther not praya ka mm intrstng

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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Pm me full part...plz asap..

What a twist.. Clap Clap .. just awesome.. Clap
I m sure Nandini is not Priya's kid.. She was of Rajats first marriage...
Well lets wait for ur next update. Wink

thanks for pm
continue soon

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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Wow ...awesome update... par ye priya kaha chali gayi .. !! aww toh ab kahani samjh aa rhi hai priya ke do pati kaise ... continue soon .. going interesting ... but priya kyu chali gayi ??

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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Rajat in Coma? BT land se medicine khilavo uth jaayega ek din mein.LOL
Rajat and Priya have a daughter? Or is it a adopted one or rajat ki pehli shaadi se hai ?ok lets see.
whole scene was emotional. The one who had lost her parents and the who have lost their son/daughter. 

Ramji to aaj pure khullam khulla pyar kar rahe haiWink.
Why Priya had left him alone, now she realized he loves her? Then was it necessary to move out of his life is my question. Since there is no memory of her past , i think her leaving Ram is a wrong decision. How can one be happy without their loved one?

Ncie update . Continue soon.


Edited by bpatil3 - 30 July 2013 at 3:35am

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