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FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 (Page 71)

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Posted: 28 July 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged

One correction; Instead of Kunal'I use Ashwin for easy identification of character.

 

PART- 13

 

Sid:- Maa'.Priya chali gayi..iss ghar se aur Ram ke zindagi se'

Niharika:- Nahi sid'iss ghar se toh zaroor chali gayi hai'lekin Ram ke dil se nahi'.

Agar Ram ke dil se bhi Priya ka naam mitana hai toh hame Priya ki shaadi karani hogi'

 

Sid:- shaadi???mein kuch samja nahi'.

Niharika:- Sid..agar Priya kisi aur se shaadi ke liye razi hoti hai'toh Ram bhi shaadi ke liye haan kar dega

 

Sid:- haan lekin kya Priya maanegi shaadi ke liye'.

Niharika:- woh sab tum mujpar chodd do. Priya manegi bhi aur shaadi bhi karegi'aur Ram bhi Nisha se shaadi karega'

 

Sid:-lekin Priya se shaadi karega kaun????

Niharika:- Sid tumhe Ashwin !!!!'wahi jisse office k eek ladki ko chedne ke case mein nikal diya tha'.woh karega shaadi Priya se

 

Sid:- lekin woh hamari baat kyun maanega'.hamne toh khud usse office se nikala tha.

Niharika:- Sid'.woh ek eisa character hai'jisse thodi paise ki lalach de de toh woh kuch bhi karne ke liye taiyaar ho jaayega'.

 

Sid:- maa lekin aap eise ladke se'.

Niharika:- Sid'tum sawal hi karte rahoge ki kuch karoge bhi. Jao aur uska pata lagao ki Ashwin kahan hai'.agar Ram shaadi ke liye haan kar deta toh muje yeh kadam uthane ki zaroorat nahi padti'jao aur jakar pata karo aur mein chalti hoon aur Ram ko samjati hoon''

Saying this she left to office to meet Ram'''..

 

In office,

Niharika :- Ram dekho tum udhas matt hoo. Mein samaj sakti hoon tum par kya beet rahi hai. Lekin Ram tum Priya ke baare mein toh socho, aakir kab tak who tumhare saat tumhare ghar par rahegi. Usse bhi toh aage badna hoga na. inn sab ke liye tum apni  shaadi ke liye mana kar do yeh toh galat haina. Ram dekho Nisha ek bahut acchi ladki hai,ek achhe ghar se belong karti hai, accha status hai society mein,aur woh khud chahte hai ki unka rishta hamare saat ho. tum eise kisi ka dil nahi todd sakte na'

                                              Muje maalom hai tumhe Priya ki chintaa hoo rahi hai,lekin mein hoon na uski maa jaisi hoon, mein uska bala hi soochungi'meine bhi socha hai ki Priya ki ek achhe ladke se shaadi kara du. Uske liye meine ek ladka bhi socha hai'..

 

Ram:- shaadi ?????(shocked on hearing this)

Niharika:- haan beta..Priya ki zimmedari abb hamari hai, abb who zindagi bhar akele toh nahi jee sakti na'mere yahan aakar kuch hi din hue hai aur mein jaanti hoon ki Priya kabhi shaadi ke haan nahi kahegi, jab tak tum shaadi ke liye haa na kar de'.

 

Ram is not convinced.

Niharika:- mein janti hoon Ram aur kisi ke liye na sahi  lekin tum Priya ke liye zaroor iss shaadi ke liye haan kar donge'.

Niharika is almost succeeds in her deeds. She left the cabin with a winning smile.

 

Niharika thinks " jaisa baap waisa beta. Dono mere haato ki kattputli hai. mein jaisa chahu unhe uss tarah nacha sakti hoon. abb Priya tumhari baari'aur tumhe manana bahut aasan hai".

Niharika headed towards the Priya's hostel.

 

In hostel,

Priya is sitting in her room looking outside. She is in deep thought. She remembers the moments she spends with Ram. Suddenly everything was changed. Her life is in halt. Her thought is disturbed by her roommate. She told that one lady named "Niharika" wanted to meet you. She wash her face, tries to hide her tears. She gets down meeting Niharika.

 

Niharika:- kaisi ho beta

Priya(With a fake smile):- achhi hoon. yahan sab log bahut achhe hai..

Niharika:- chalo hum thodi der walk karte hai. muje tumse kuch baat bhi karni hai'

 

Both are walking in the hostel garden.

Niharika continues'.

"Priya tum janti ho, Ram ne Nisha se shaadi karne se inkaar kar diya."

 

Priya:-Nahi lekin kyun???

Niharika:- Priya'woh chahta hai ki jab tak tum shaadi na kar lo'woh shaadi nahi karne wala. aur muje lagta hai ki woh sahi bhi hai. Priya'muje lagta hai tumhe settle ho jana chahiye. Ram nahi chahta ki uski shaadi ke baad tum akeli ho jao'

 

Priya:- nahi Niharika ji'muje shaadi nahi karni'

Niharika:- Priya '..tum kab tak eise akele zindagi bitaongi. Aur kuch nahi toh tum ram ke baare mein toh socho'usne tumhare liye itna sab kuch kiya aur tum uske liye itna nahi kar sakti'Priya..Ram apni zimeedari bahut achhi tarah se nibhata hai. tumhe settle dekhe bagair woh shaadi nahi karne wala.

                             Agar Ram Nisha se shaadi karta hai'toh uski saari khushiyaan jo kahi na kahi meri wajah se khoo di hai,usse wapas mill jayegi'mein apne bte ram ko poori tarah se apnana chahti hoon..usse woh saara pyar dena chahti hoon, jo uska haq hai'.priya abb tumhe sochna hai'ki tumhe kya karna hai.. tum agar kahi aur bhi chali jaaongi..tabb bhi Ram tumhe doondne ki koshish karega aur tabb bhi ram shaadi nahi karega.

 

Priya is really in dilemma. Priya knows very well Ram is alone and he deserves happiness. But she can't think any other person in her life.

 

Priya thinks " agar mere shaadi karne se ram ki saari khushiyaan wapas aati hai toh mein yeh shaadi karne ke liye bhi taiyaar hoon"

 

On the other side,

Ram thinks" agar mere haan keh dene se Priya bhi aage badne ke liye taiyaar hai toh muje shaadi ke liye haan kar deni chahiye.

 

Niharika thinks "Ram aur Priya ko maan gaye hai. dono apna faisla badal de isse pehle muje inn dono ki shaadi kara deni chahiye.

 

Niharika called Sid and asking about Ashwin.

Sid told her that Ashwin is ready for marriage but he is asking very hectic amount.

 

Niharika:-Sid' hame abhi paiso ke baare mein nahi sochna chahiye'woh jitna maangta hai de do..muje kisi bhi haal mein Priya ko Ram ke zindagi se door karna hai'

 

Two days passed,

Not Ram called priya, nor Priya called Ram, but both are missing each other. Both are wanted to share their feeling but something is always struck, nobody initiates.

 

Here,

Niharika announce the engagement party for Priya. It's not a big function. Only kapoor family, Ashwin and his fake parents, and vikram family. First time Priya going to meet Ashwin. Ashwin is neatly dressup so as Priya. Priya is looking beautiful but her face clearly shows that she is not happy. Ram and Priya are seeing each other after 3-4 days.

 

Ashwin looks at Priya. He cannot takes off his eyes from her. Priya don't even look at him.

Engagement function started.

First Ashwin puts ring to Priya and then Priya did the same to Ashwin.

After Engagement both Ashwin and Priya are sitting on the sofa.  Ashwin puts his hand around her shoulder and pulls near him and taking photos. Priya gets shocked and felt uncomfortable.

 

Ram who is watching all this cannot take this anymore. He is gritting his teeth. Whatever is going on he is not haapy. He cannot see Priya with anybody else. He left the party without saying anything.

Vikram notice this and follows him.

 

Niharika announce that tomorrow is a marriage.

Party was over. Priya goes back to her hostel. She takes out the ring and put it on the table.

 

On the other hand,

Ram reached office and goes to his cabin. He open the laptop and looking at the missing list. He opens the file and clicks each one by one. Then he open Priya sharma's file but identity and photo is not matching with her.

Then he clicks Priya kapur file, but just then vikram also enters'..

 

Vikram:- yeh sab kya kar raha hai'itni raat ko yahan'

Ram( looking at vikram):- No, Vikram'Priya Ashwin se shaadi kare isse achha hai ki Priya apne asli zindagi mein wapas chali jaaye. Mere paas missing logo ki list hai, Priya ne mana kiya tha dekhne ke liye'lekin abb mein yeh promise todd raha hoon.

 

Vikram:- Priya ne tumse mana kiya kyunki Ram woh tumse pyar karti hai'aur usse darr tha ki shayad uski poorani zindagi tumse alag na kar de'

 

Ram:- (smilingly) pyar!!!!agar Priya mujse sach mein pyar karti toh woh uss Ashwin se kabhi shaadi ke liye haan nahi karti'.

 

Vikram:- tune bhi toh kabhi nahi kaha ki tu Priya se pyar karta hai..hamesha priya ko ek responsibility samajkar uske saat raha hai. aur tum yeh kyun nahi dekh paa raha hai..ki achanak se itna sab kuch tum dono ke zindagi mein kaise '

 

Ram:- kya matlab?????

Vikram:- Matlab yeh ki inn sab ke peeche Niharika ji ka hatt hai. woh tuje Priya se alag karna chahti ti'taaki tu Nisha se shaadi kar le aur uske father ke shares unke company se saat jud jaaye taaki Niharika ji ki company world ki No.1 company kehlaaye.'aur yeh jo Ashwin hai na ek number ka flirt insaan hai. chor hai..kahi baar jail jaa chukka hai'yeh bhi Niharika ji kaa hi aadmi hai'tuje bura lage ya na lage lekin tere father yahan wapas tere liye liye nahi balki tumse apni business ko expand karne ke liye aaye hai'

                                  Agar abb bhi tuje shaq hai toh soch'yeh sab tum dono ke saat hi kyun ho raha hai'Ram'.(calmly) abb bhi waqt hai'priya ko apni zindagi mein wapas lane ke liye. Jaa aur jakar keh de ki tu usse bahut pyar karta hai'jaa Ram apni dil ki baat usse bata de, bata de ki tu uske bagair nahi rah sakta'tum uski responsibility hi nahi uski zindagi hoo.

 

Vikram Ram ko apne jagah se uthata hai.

Vikram:- Jaa Priya se mill aur apne dil ki baat bol de. Mein tera laptop sab bandh karke, cabin lock karke nikalta hoon.

 

Ram ran from there to meet Priya. It's raining heavily outside. Without caring about rain he runs towards his car, start the car and left.

 

On the other side,

When Vikram turns, He gets shocked to see the picture of Priya in the missing list. Named as Mrs. Priya Rajat Kapur.

Vikram to himself "iska matlab Priya ki shaadi ho chuki hai, Vikram had sweat in his forehead. He wipes the sweat. Ram Priya ko paagalo ki tarah pyar karta hai aur Priya bhi Ram se utna hi pyar karti hai'muje yeh baat chupani hogi sabse'Priya bhi toh yahi chahti thi ki uske baare mein kisi ko na pata chale'muje yeh raaz dil mein rakna hoga'mein Ram ko thoothe hue nahi dekh sakta'Vikram takes the details of Priya and delete the folder permanently from the laptop.

 

I will post the rest part tomorrow.

Please comment and hit the like button

Sorry for the mistakes'.

 



Edited by sandhyasn - 28 July 2013 at 11:40pm

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nice part  but too short  what abt precap ,...





Edited by luvbalh - 28 July 2013 at 11:54pm

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
ye niharika kabhi nhi sudhar skti Angry
Kya priya mrs. rajat kapoor Dead
oye ab ye kya kr diya...
ye rajjo haddi bhi hai aapke ff mein Ouch
ab nxt kya hoga ???
are preview part kha hai Unhappy
continue soon !!!!!

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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvbalh

nice part  but too short  what abt precap ,...



that part I will post tomorrow...Smile
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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mini1991

Awesome update...
ye niharika kabhi nhi sudhar skti Angry
Kya priya mrs. rajat kapoor Dead
oye ab ye kya kr diya...
ye rajjo haddi bhi hai aapke ff mein Ouch
ab nxt kya hoga ???
are preview part kha hai Unhappy
continue soon !!!!!
 
mera ff ho aur Rajat na ho eise kabhi ho sakta hai kya...LOL. abb toh samaj aaya na why she wanted to go back...
don't worry Niharika part almost khatam ho gaya hai...
preview part hi mein kal post karungi...uske liye hi Ram bhaga haiLOL
 
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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lpsakshi

MM GOOD ONE VERY INTRSTNG 
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Posted: 29 July 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
OMG, last part is really scary. Mrs.Priya Rajat Kapoor.Unhappy What the hell is this Rajat doing all these months/years, didn't he ever bother to search his wife?Does he love his wife still or moved on with the belief that he won't get her back??

Vikram hid the truth for his friend's love sake? But might not have thought of the consequences.
This is called destiny. and a person ought to  take certain decision knowing that this will trouble one or the other day. OMGShocked.

Niharika the evil lady, will always play her trick and trap Ram n Priya. But after all there is something supreme exists, which will play its part intelligently when two hearts turn into One.
Where there is happiness coming on the way as Ram n Priya are united, but their a heavy heart knowing the fact that , their togherness is temporary don't know when it ends.Very Sad.
Lets see how things work out for our RaYa.

Nicely written SandhyaClapClapClap

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