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FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 (Page 33)

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PART 8

Next day, Ram as usual went to office. Attend the meeting and doing his official work.

In the evening, when all employees left, he is relaxing in his chair putting his head back.

 

He gets a call from Vikram. He has been discharged and resting at home.

Ram:- hi Vikram kaisa hai.

Vikram:- kaisa hai???? pehle yeh bata tu kaisa hai

Ram:- muje kya hua hai.

Vikram:- achha'kal achanak kahan gayab ho gaya tu????. Koi khabar nahi kuch nahi.

Ram:- chod yeh bata kaisa hai'

Vikram:- mein teek hoon. Bor ho raha hoon ;ek kaam kar na yahan aa jaa..thodi baate karenge'.

Ram:- aata hoon '.tu rak phone.

 

Ram on his way,

Ram stops his car. He is confused where is go if he takes left then he will reach to Vikram's place and if he go straight then he will reach to hospital.

After little thought,

Ram starts his car and went straight to the hospital.

He met Dr.Amar and discusses something.

 

Ram:- Teek hai Amar mein abhi paise jama kar deta hoon aur saari formalities poori kar deta hoon. Tum operation ki taiyaari shuru karo. Lekin yaad rahe uuse kabhi nahi pata chalna chahiye ki meine uski madat ki hai.

 

Amar:- teek hai mein operation ki taiyaari shuru kar deta hoon aur Priya ko bhi inform kar deta hoon. Lekin'

Ram:- lekin kya!!!!!

Amar:- agar Priya ne mujse poocha ki uski madat kisne ki toh mein kya kahunga.

Ram:- keh dena ki kisi NGO ne help ki hai'.

 

Amar:- Ram'.tum apni identity kyun chupa rahe ho. Tum saamne se aakar kyun nahi bata dete ki tum uski madat kar rahe ho

Ram:- agar uuse pata chal gaya ki mein iske peeche hoon toh woh meri madat kabhi nahi lengi.

Amar:- mein kuch pooch sakta hoon''.tu Priya ki kyun madat kar raha hai

Ram:- shayad isse mera guilt khatam ho jaye.

 

Amar didn't understand anything he said thank u to Ram.

Ram left.

 

On the other side, Vikram is waiting for Ram with a glass of scotch. He even called in his mobile but he was not attended.

 

Next day,

Dr. Amar called Priya. She reached hospital.

Priya:- Dr. appne kyun bhulaya muje kya aapko mere parents ke baare mein kuch pata chala hai kya????(She asked very excitedly)

Amar:-Priya pehle baito toh sahi mein tumhe batata hoon.

 

Priya sits but very impatiently.

Amar:- Priyaaa'..meine tumhe issliye bulaya hai kyunki tumhare operation ke liye rupiyo ka itezam ho gaya hai. abb tumhara operation badi aasani se ho sakta hai.

 

Priya(little disappoint):- Dr''meine appse pehle hi bola tha ki mein apna operation nahi karana chahti.

 

Amar:- lekin kyun Priya??????...abb toh rupiyo ka bhi intezam ho gaya hai aur koi problem bhi nahi.

 

Priya:- mein kya karu''.mere paas meri apni koi pehchaan bhi nahi hai'..mein nahi jaanti ki muje aage kya karna hai,kahan jana hai'.mein kya karu zeekar'..isse toh achha yeh hai ki mere paas jitney bhi din bache hai usse mein mere apno ko dhundne ke liye lagau'..

 

Amar:-bas Priya'bas'shayad tumhe bura lage lekin mein bata du'.agar tumhare ghar walo ki tumhari chintaa hoti toh woh kabka tumse milne aa jaate. 3 mahine ho gaye tumhare gharwalo ki koi khabar nahi. Tum yeh jaan lo ki abb woh kabhi nahi aayenge.

 

Priya listening all this with wet eyes

Amar continue'..

Mein yeh nahi keh raha ki tumhe abb unhe doondna bandh karna chahiye..lekin uske liye tumhara zinda hona bhi zaroori hai. mein tumhari madad karunga tumhe aage badne ke liye, ek naye sire se nayi zindagi ki shuruwat karne ke liye. Bas tum iss operation ke liye haan kar do. Hamare paas samay bilkul nahi hai Priya.

 

Priya(wiping her tears):- mein yeh jaan sakti hoon mere liye kon madat kar raha hai.

Amar:- Ek NGO hai, meine tumhare case ke baare mein bola tha. abb woh saamne se aakar madat kar rahe hai.

 

Priya is upset. Amar came near to her, hold her hands and looks at her and said " Priya tum muje apna bhai samajti ho na. kuch nahi honga'ek baar operation ho jaye, tumhari memory bhi ek din zaroor wapas aa jaayegi".

 

Priya:- muje kab aana padega'

Amar:- Aaj sham..aur kal subah 10 baje tumhara operation.

 

Priya left the cabin without saying anything.

She thinks " muje ek baar uss NGO mein phone karke unhe thanks bol dena chahiye. Pata nahi phir kabhi kar paau ya nahi.

 

She turns but at that moment some other patient enters into Amar's cabin.

Priya "arre  Dr. toh patient ko attend kar rahe hai, pata nahi kitna time lagega. Mein receptionist se hi NGO ka number le leti hoon" and walks towards there.

 

Priya:- mein Priya..Dr.Amar ki patient. Mera kal subah operation hai.

Recep:- yes, Madam'.

Priya:- Actually mein yeh poochna chahiti ki jiss NGO ne meri madat ki hai, woh konsa NGO hai. actually muje uss NGO ka number chahiye tha. woh mein Dr.Amar se poochna  bhool gayi  aur abhi Dr.koi patient ko attend kar rahe hai pata nahi kab khatam hoga, aur muje jana bhi hai. aaj sham ko admit hone ke liye bhi kaha.

 

Recep:- yes, Madam'.ek min'.

She looks into the file.

Recep:- No, Madam'aapki fees koi NGO nahi koi MR. Ram Kapoor ne pay ki hai.

Priya (confuses):- Ram Kapoor'par muje toh bataya gaya ki koi NGO meri madat kar raha hai.

Recep:- No madam, apke operation ki full payment koi Mr. Ram kapoor ne di hai.  

 

When Recep gets a call from Amar and told her not to share any information about the person who is helping Priya's operation and not even Priya.

 

Priya is already left in confusion.

Recep told Amar about the conversation between her and Priya.

 

Priya aimlessly walks on the road, when a speeding truck passes near her.  She closed her eyes and puts her both hands in her ears in fear; she saw some blur image of her past. Picture is not clear but, she is fully sweated and scared.

 

In the evening,

Priya reached hospital. Receptionist directed her and one lady nurse accompanying her.

She entered in her room.

 

Priya thinks " Mr.Ram kapoor ne mere liye itna bada room book kiya, operation ka poora intezaam kiya. aakir yeh kon hai jo mere liye itna kuch kar rahe hai aur yeh saamne kyun nahi aana chahte".

 

Her thought is interrupted by the entry of Dr. Amar and a nurse. Priya changed into patients dress and nurse started giving her saline.

 

Dr. Amar:- Priya yeh papers hai isse sign kar do.  Agar koi bhi problem ho to muje inform kar do. Yeh nurse aapke saat rahegi.

Amar move when priya hold his hand.

Priya:- Amar '..Mr.Ram kapoor kon hai?????

Amar:-(with a stern smile)mein tumhe sab bataunga,lekin abhi nahi'''abhi tum aaraam karo.

 

Priya is alone and in order to kill her time she just closed her eyes. Drops of tear flow from the side of her eyes. After some time she had gone to sleep.

 

In the morning,

Everything is set. Priya is taken to the OT. She has given anesthetic

Before starts Amar called Ram " abhi thodi der mein operation start ho jaayega, kya tu hospital nahi aayega".

Ram said nothing and hangs up the call.

 

Operation started and Ram decided to go there. He is waiting outside the OT.

Operation is over by the evening. Amar came out and saw Ram is waiting outside.

He feels good and said that operation is successful and now she is unconscious, and will be awake only in the morning.

 

Ram requested him that he wanted to see her once. Amar gave him permission.

Ram entered into the OT with properly covering himself with head cover and mask.

He saw Priya with a head covering with bandage with a life support system. Glucose is given on one hand. He goes near her slowly touch her fingers and after sometime left from there.

 

Amar calls Ram into his cabin.

Amar:- Ram'.Priya ko pata chal gaya hai ki uski help kisi NGO ne nahi balki tumne ki hai

Ram:- Amar'meine tumhe batane ko mana kiya tha na..

Amar:- meine uuse kuch nahi bataya.recep se uuse sab pata chala. Operation se pehle woh tumse milna bhi chahti thi.

Ram:- Amar'.mein uuse nahi mil sakta'..

Amar:- lekin kyun?????.ek na ek din who yahan se teek ho jaayegi phir toh woh tumhe zaroor dundh legi'toh phir abhi kyun nahi. Aur agar tu uski madat kar raha hai toh zaroor uske peeche tumhara koi matlab hai'.

 

Ram gets angry

Ram:- yes, matlab hai aur woh yeh hai ki mein apni guilt se bahar aana chahta hoon. that's it.

Amar:- Guilt????kis tarah ka guilt.

Ram:- woh mein tumhe nahi bata sakta'..abhi mein jaa raha hoon, muje lagta hai mera kaam ho gaya'.thank u very much.

Ram left from the hospital.

 

Next day Priya gets conscious, doctors carry some more test, everything is normal. They shift her to the room.  She is weak and not in a condition to speak.

Two day passed,

Priya teek toh ho rahi thi,lekin uski aakhken kisi ko dhoondh rahi thi. Uski aakhon mein kahi saare sawal the.woh yeh jaanna chahti thi ki uski madat karne wala insan kon hai. woh uske saamne kyun nahi aa raha.

Priya har roz yeh sawal Amar se karti hai. Amar uuse sirf itna kehta hai ki woh zaroor tumhare saamne aayega. Har din uss pal ke intezaar mein woh kaat deti hai ki aaj uuse milne koi aayega. Amar ko uski bechaini nazar aa rahi thi,lekin Ram bhi ziddi tha.

 

It's 10th day in the hospital,

Priya is recovering fast, now, she can walk. She doesn't feel much pain. She can eat by her own. She is in recovery. But her heart is full of pain, full of agony; her life is left with lots of mystery.

 

Amar can see her pain. He decided to speak one more time with Ram and , make him understand that Priya needs him.

 

Amar speaks over phone to Ram.

Amar:- Ram'..meine tumhe issliye phone kiya taaki tumhe yeh batau ki Priya teek toh ho rahi hai'..lekin uska dard waise ka waisa hi hai. iss dard ke saat woh aur kitne din reh paayegi muje nahi pata. Uski zindagi ne waise hi usse bahut saare takleef di hai,abb tum bhi uske  iss dard ka bhagidaar matt ban. Priya tadap rahi hai yeh jaane ke liye woh kon hai. Priya jeena nahi chahti, usne jeene ki umeed chod di hai. Mein bas yahi chahta hoon kahi kuch galat hone se pehle tum uuse roko. Ram'Priya ko abb bas tum hi bacha sakte ho'. Agar Priya ko kuch ho gaya toh uske zimedaar sirf tum rahoge..sirf tum'.

Without waiting for an answer he hangs up the call''

 

Ram'.Meine Amar se pehle hi kaha tha ki mein inn sab par nahi padna chahta.

Mein nahi chahta ki Priya ko mere baare mein pata chale''''uff'''..isse achha mein madat hi nahi karta.

He bangs his hand on the table.

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 30 June 2013 at 8:53am

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 8:59am | IP Logged
awesome updt sandy Tongue
tho ram ji ne priya ki madat bhi karli
aur priya ki operation bhi hogaya
ye priya ke parents kyu nahi are
usey milney
aur flash back ki mystery bhi reveal
karo naa plz
jaldi updt karo
waiting
thanks for pm

Edited by .sangs123. - 30 June 2013 at 9:37am

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 9:50am | IP Logged
very touchy and emotional, I can understand Priya's  pain, ek toh apni identity bhool gayi hain upar se she can't even thank the person for whom she is alive, in fact I can understand Ram's thinking also but just for her he should come in front, at least ek baar beyth ke baat toh kar sakta hain, I hope MU can sort out, btw I was hoping a precap, anyways continue ASAP

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update was gud
continue soon

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 12:33pm | IP Logged

fabulous update ...

continue soon

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
Awesome nd emotional update sandi..
Priya is in soo much pain..first she forgot her identity, trying to find her family nd now trying to meet the person who helped her for this operation..she is struggling so much..
Toh ram ne hi madat ki finally but not coming in front of her for obvious reasons nd i cant even imagine what will be priya's reaction after seeing him as the person bcoz of which her operation happened..
All in flashback plz show some present also nd try to reveal the mystery slowly slowly..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

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Posted: 30 June 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
Amazing..wht can i say...in which way ur story is going...jst superbb..i must say its superb awsome so emotional...had soft..eagerly waiting 4 next so ple dnt be late thz time

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