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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandhyasn

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Thx for the Pm.
Nicely written.
So priya has gained her memory back after 7 long years of their marriage, lets see how reacts.

Priya's emotions for her children, n that hurt feelings,wo kuch na kar paane ka dard, majboori nicely depicted when she said 'bahot buri maa hoo na' its so touchy.
Pihu's innocent questions and that fear of being away from her mom superb wriitng.
Shipra ki baatoan se to lagta hai she is not her real mom . she is behind priya's property i don't think so she loves priya. I think is just manipulating priya , usse Rajat ke naam pe mazboor kar rahi hai.
Ram rightly said, decision is Priya's no one can force her.
Priya ke hurt feelings when ram left angrily-don't u need to fulfill your duties as my kids mom? just superb.
So finally Vikki had planned something -hangout with kids cool.
shipra ki to mystery continues.
shipra will be there till the end...
yes shipra is forcing Priya to separate from Ram.
vikram had planned something..Raya ko milana bhi toh hai...
waise meine abhi tak clear nahi kiya ki Priya ki memory wapas aayi ki nahi Tongue...but u r right
thanks for commentsHug
Arre sandhya aapne clear to kiya hai na-when Priya shouts Rajat, that means she had got her memory back what is left is how she reacts after getting her senses back.
haan...yeh sahi hai...will update in two days tabb Priya ka reaction bhi dekh lena

Arre kal update kardo pls..aap busy rehte ho Sat and Sun

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 1:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bpatil3

Originally posted by sandhyasn

Originally posted by bpatil3

Originally posted by sandhyasn

Originally posted by bpatil3

Thx for the Pm.
Nicely written.
So priya has gained her memory back after 7 long years of their marriage, lets see how reacts.

Priya's emotions for her children, n that hurt feelings,wo kuch na kar paane ka dard, majboori nicely depicted when she said 'bahot buri maa hoo na' its so touchy.
Pihu's innocent questions and that fear of being away from her mom superb wriitng.
Shipra ki baatoan se to lagta hai she is not her real mom . she is behind priya's property i don't think so she loves priya. I think is just manipulating priya , usse Rajat ke naam pe mazboor kar rahi hai.
Ram rightly said, decision is Priya's no one can force her.
Priya ke hurt feelings when ram left angrily-don't u need to fulfill your duties as my kids mom? just superb.
So finally Vikki had planned something -hangout with kids cool.
shipra ki to mystery continues.
shipra will be there till the end...
yes shipra is forcing Priya to separate from Ram.
vikram had planned something..Raya ko milana bhi toh hai...
waise meine abhi tak clear nahi kiya ki Priya ki memory wapas aayi ki nahi Tongue...but u r right
thanks for commentsHug
Arre sandhya aapne clear to kiya hai na-when Priya shouts Rajat, that means she had got her memory back what is left is how she reacts after getting her senses back.
haan...yeh sahi hai...will update in two days tabb Priya ka reaction bhi dekh lena

Arre kal update kardo pls..aap busy rehte ho Sat and Sun
will update tomorrowSmile..

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandhyasn

Originally posted by bpatil3

Originally posted by sandhyasn

Originally posted by bpatil3

Originally posted by sandhyasn

Originally posted by bpatil3

Thx for the Pm.
Nicely written.
So priya has gained her memory back after 7 long years of their marriage, lets see how reacts.

Priya's emotions for her children, n that hurt feelings,wo kuch na kar paane ka dard, majboori nicely depicted when she said 'bahot buri maa hoo na' its so touchy.
Pihu's innocent questions and that fear of being away from her mom superb wriitng.
Shipra ki baatoan se to lagta hai she is not her real mom . she is behind priya's property i don't think so she loves priya. I think is just manipulating priya , usse Rajat ke naam pe mazboor kar rahi hai.
Ram rightly said, decision is Priya's no one can force her.
Priya ke hurt feelings when ram left angrily-don't u need to fulfill your duties as my kids mom? just superb.
So finally Vikki had planned something -hangout with kids cool.
shipra ki to mystery continues.
shipra will be there till the end...
yes shipra is forcing Priya to separate from Ram.
vikram had planned something..Raya ko milana bhi toh hai...
waise meine abhi tak clear nahi kiya ki Priya ki memory wapas aayi ki nahi Tongue...but u r right
thanks for commentsHug
Arre sandhya aapne clear to kiya hai na-when Priya shouts Rajat, that means she had got her memory back what is left is how she reacts after getting her senses back.
haan...yeh Smilesahi hai...will update in two days tabb Priya ka reaction bhi dekh lena

Arre kal update kardo pls..aap busy rehte ho Sat and Sun
will update tomorrowSmile..

Thank u

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by viny_queen

so priya ki memory back
and priya leave ramthat is so wrong
iss shipria ki to asisi ki tasi

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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dsudipa

sry 4 late reply, finally Priya's memory is back , shipra is so chep she is behind ram's property
now Raya & kids go 4 vacation ClapClap  waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon, thx 4 PM
thanks for commentsHug.will update soon
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 2:11am | IP Logged
wow
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wow
wow
wow
wow
amazing update 
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Posted: 29 August 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
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wow
wow
wow
wow
wow
wow
amazing update 
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thank uSmile
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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:48am | IP Logged

PART 18

Note:- This SS is going very long so I converted this as FF.

 

Flashback continue...

After some time Ram back. Priya wipes her tears immediately. Ram sits beside her, takes her hand and looks into her eyes and said "Mrs. Kapoor tumne toh dara hi diya...achanak se itne jor se chillaya...waise tum kiska naam le rahi thi..muje teek se sunayi nahi diya...lekin tum behosh kaise ho gayi!!!!!!!!

 

Priya is looking down. Ram lift her chin, he saw wetness in her eyes. He asked "kya hua...tum roo kyun rahi hoo. Agar iss baat se chinta ho ki tumhari wajah se meri meeting cancel ho gayi toh tum uski fikr matt karo..mere liye tumse aur bachho se badkar aur kuch bhi nahi hai...aur tumhe kuch ho jaaye yeh mein bardasth nahi kar sakta...

 

Priya gave a fake smile.

Ram:- chale...bachhe hamara intezaar kar rahe honge...woh tumhe dekhkar bahut darr gaye the...

Both sit in the car. Priya is looking outside.

 

Ram is surprised with her behavior and thinks "ho kya gaya hai Priya ko...abhi takk usne mujse bachho ke baare mein nahi poocha...bachho se phone par baat bhi nahi ki...kuch toh hai jo who mujse chupa rahi hai...no ...I think mein kuch jyada ji soch raha hoon."

 

Silence prevails till the end and they reached the haveli. Kids are waiting for them. They saw their mumma and run towards her and hug her tightly. Neha is standing their only.

 

Pihu:- mumma aapko kya hua tha mein bahut darr gayi thi...

Priya said nothing. She kiss both the kids and left to her room. Neha is also surprised with her behavior.

 

Neha:- Ram!!! Priya ko hua kya hai...woh eise bina kahe kyun chali gayi.

Ram:- yeh toh mein bhi nahi janta...achha bachho ne khana kaya...

Neha:- Haan...abhi finish kiya..

Ram:- If u don't mind kya tum bachho ko sula dongi then tum chali jana

Neha:- don't worry...tum jao Priya ke paas.

 

When ram entered in his room, he saw Priya is sitting near the window keeping her head down. He goes near and sits beside her. He put his hand around her shoulder.

 

Ram:- kya hua Priya...itni udas kyun ho...

She looked at him and embraces him tightly. He lifts her chin, kisses on her forehead and wipes her tears and said Priya tum aaram karo...and takes her to the bed.

 

He laid her properly. Priya asked him to sit beside her. Ram sits and Priya keep her head on his lap and Ram holds her closely.

 

In the evening,

Kids woke up from their sleep and asked about their mumma.

Ram:- pihu...abhi na mumma so rahi hai...woh na thodi tied hai...issliye kyun na hum mumma ke jagne takk play Zone mein chale...

Pihu:- wow..papa...maza aayega na...lekin mumma

 

Ram:- hmm...arre mumma ko aaram karne dete hai...jab hum wapas aayege tabb tak mumma bhi teek ho jaayegi..

Pihu:- ok Papa...

Ram:- chalo mein aap dono ko ready karwata hoon.

Ram decided to take them out otherwise they will ask many more questions and disturbs priya also.

 

When Ram and kids left,

Priya woke up from her sleep and goes from there. She reached the nearby booth and called father...

Sudhir picks up the phone and said hello...here Priya hearing her father's voice after a long time becomes speechless. She keeps her hand over the receiver so that sudhir could not hear her voice.  After sometime he again said "hello'" but she said nothing.

 

Then she hears the voice of her mother..:kaun hai!!!!!

Sudhir:- pata nahi...koi baat hi nahi kar raha...

Shipra:- aap rakk dijiye...galti se wrong no. lag gaya hoga...

 

Then she hear another voice "naanu jaldi aayiye na...muje yeh complete karna hai "

Sudhir:- haan ek minute beta..and hang up the call.

Priya understand it's Nandini...she keep the receiver back into the place and sits and cries loudly...

 

Here kids enjoyed in the play zone after that Ram took them to dinner. He calls priya once but she did not attend. He decided to talk with her later.

When he back, kids are already in sleep. He carefully took them to their bedroom and laid them properly; cover them with duvet and left.

 

When he entered in his room, he saw Priya is standing near the windowand engross in her thought. She did not notice about Ram arrival.

Ram had one packet in his hand. He kept it on the table. He takes it out the box from the packet; it was a cake with a message "Happy 7th marriage anniversary". He lit the candle. 

 

He slowly goes behind her and hold from her waist and kiss on the back of her neck.

Ram:-  kya soch rahi ho...

Priya turns towards him and said "Ram muje aapko kuch...

 

Ram suddenly keeps his hand on her mouth and said "jo bhi kehna hai baad mein...pehle chalo mere saat". He closes her eyes with his hand...

Ram takes her near the table and removes his hand. She saw the cake. She doesn't know how to react; she turns towards him.

 

Ram:- Happy anniversary darling. Jis tarah meine socha tha ki hum apna anniversary manayenge waisa to nahi ho paaya ...lekin cake katt kar celebrate toh kar sakte hai na...waise raat abhi bhi baaki hai aur mein isse puri tarah se utilize karne wala hoon...he winks and hug her from side and said chalo cake kaathe hai...

 

Priya:- Ram please pehle meri baat toh suniye...uske baad aap jo bolenge mein sunungi...

Ram:- ok...batao kya kehna chahti ho...subah se tumhe dekh raha hoon..kuch toh hai..jo tum mujse chupa rahi hoo...bolo kya bolna hai...

 

Priya:- Ram...meine aaj papa se baat kiya...

Ram;- what????? Mein nahi samja...papa!!!!!!

Priya:- (takes a deep breath and said )Ram...muje apne pichli zindagi ke baare mein sab kuch yaad aa gaya hai...sab kuch...ki mein kon hoon...mera naam kya hai...mein kahan ki rehne wali hoon...mere parents kon hai...sab kuch

 

Ram:- OMG Priya...I am so happy pirya...tum soch bhi nahi sakti ki aaj mein kitna kush hoon...itni badi kush kabri aur tum muje abhi bata rahi hoo...tumne yeh baat mujse pehle kyun nahi batayi Priya...

Ram was so happy; he hugs her very tightly and kisses on her forehead.

 

Ram:- achha yahan baito...muje sab kuch detail mein batao...tumne papa se baat kiya ..kya kaha unhone...bola na ki tum kaha ho...woh toh bahut kush ho gaye honge na...tumse baat karke...woh aa rahe hai na tumse milne...achha yeh batao kon kon hai tumhare ghar mein...maa se baat kiya na...dhruv aur pihu ke baare mein bola na...bataya na ki tum abhi priya nahi...Mrs.Priya Ram kapoor ho...tum abb sirf unki beti hi nahi ek biwi bhi ho...maa bhi ho...arre yeh toh batao tumhara naam priya hi hai na...ki kuch aur...tumhara naam job hi ho mein tumhe sirf priya hi bulane wala hoon...kuch toh kaho Priya...eise chup kyun ho...OMG I am so exited...

 

Priya controls her feeling and said:- haan mera naam Priya hi hai...Mrs Priya Rajat Kapur...

Ram face change into a question mark:- what????

Priya:- Haan Ram meri shaadi ho chuki hai...Rajat se...hamari ek beti bhi hai Nandini...

Ram is numb. Ram does not believe in his ears... He looks down and keep his hand on his head.

 

After sometime,

Ram(stammering):- yeh kaise ho sakta hai...tum nandini ki maa nahi ho sakti...muje pakka pata hai...tum mere saat Mazak kar rahi ho na...

Priya gets up from the place and walk towards the window.

 

Priya:- Haan Nandini mere apni beti nahi hai...meri chooti behen Ayesha ki beti hai...

Nandini ke paida hote hi Ayesha ka death ho gaya...pregnancy mein kuch problem ho gayi thi...doctor usse bacha nahi paaye...Ayesha aur Rajat ek dusre se pyar karte the...mein shaadi nahi karna chahthi thi...mein wahan k eek college mein lecturer thi. Ayesha ki death ke baad Rajat buri tarah toot gaya tha...Nandini ko meine pala...ek maa ka saara pyar meine usse diya...woh mere zindagi ka ek hissa bann gayi thi...aur nandini ke liye mein uski maasi nahi Maa thi...aur muje bahut achha lagta tha...Nandini badi hoti gayi  lekin rajat wahi ke wahi reh gayaa...aage badd hi nahi paaya...

                                                  Fir ek eisa waqt aaya Nandini ke liye muje Rajat se shaadi karni padi...mere liye itna aasan nahi tha yeh karna lekin muje yeh karna pada. Nandini ne apne maa ko toh kho hi diya tha, Mein usse ek baap ke pyar se khone dena nahi chahti thi...Jab mujse Rajat se shaadi karne ke liye kaha gaya mere saamne sirf Nandini nazar aayi.

                                                 Rajat ke parents ne hamari bahut madat ki hai...jab papa bimar pade tabb bhi..karthik ko aage ki padai ke liye bolo...Ayesha ki modeling ke liye bolo. Rajat ke parents ne har waqt hamari madat ki.Rajat ki maa ne mujse unke bte ki zindagi maangi...aur meine shaadi ke liye haan kar diya...

                                                Shaadi ke baad mein aur Rajat Mumbai ke liye nikal pade. Nandini ko uske naani ke paas chod diya. Mein bahut kush thi ki Nandini abb hamesha mere saat rehne wali hai. hum Mumbai pahuchne hi wale the ki hamari gaadi ka ek truck se overtake karte waqt accident ho gaya...saamne se aate hue truck ko dekh nahi paaya aur hamari gaadi uss truck se takra gayi . Uske baad se muje kuch bhi yaad nahi...mere saat kya hua..muje kisne Mumbai laaya...jab muje hosh aaya...mein ek hospital ke bed par padi hui thi...uske baad jo hua aap jante hai...

 

Ram is listening all this. It was shocking for him...

After sometime,

Ram:-(with all courage) tum kya chahti ho...

Priya turns and goes towards him.

Priya:- mein apne papa se baat karna chahti hoon..

Ram:- tumne baat nahi ki

Priya:- himmat hi nahi hui...

Ram:- ok...muje number do mein laga kar deta hoon and dial the no.

 

It's already very late night...

Sudhir:- hello

Ram:- kya aap Mr. Sudhir Sharma baat kar rahe hai?????

Sudhir:- jee baat kar raha hoon...aap kaun baat kar rahe hai...

Ram:-Pa...Sir, mein Ram baat kar raha hoon. Ram kapoor.

 

He stopped and again starts "aapki beti Priya aapse baat karna chahti hai"

Sudhir:- yeh koi waqt hai Mazak karne ka...mein aapse binati karta hoon aap jo bhi hai...please...bahut mushkil se hamne iss sachhayi ko accept kiya hai...ki hamari beti Priya hamare saat nahi hai...

 

Ram:- nahi nahi...Sudhir ji...mein koi Mazak nahi kar raha hoon. Priya mere saat hi  hai...aap unse baat kariye...

Ram hand over phone to Priya...

Priya crying:- Papa...

 

When sudhir hear her sound, he becomes shocked and does not believe in his ears...

Priya:- Papa..mein aapki beti baat kar rahi hoon...Priya...

Sudhir:- Priyaaa...meri beti Priya...beti tu zinda hai...kahan chali gayi thi tu beta...hamse baat kyun nahi ki itne saalo tak...

Priya:- Papa...I am sorry papa...

Sudhir:- ruk mein teri maa ko bulakar lata hoon.

Priya:- nahi papa raat bahut ho gayi hai...mein aapse baad mein baat karti hoon.

 

She hang up the call and cry bitterly.. she hugs Ram...and Ram also support him and caresses her back. News is spread like a fire.

Shipra called her .then she talk with her brother... Rajat's family also called her. All are very happy...

Ram looked at the table where cake was kept. He blew the candles and went to his study.

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 30 August 2013 at 1:49am

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