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FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 (Page 120)

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 11:24pm | IP Logged
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PART"17

 

Priya went to her childrens room.  She saw both are sleeping. She goes and sits beside them. She touched Dhruvs forehead to check his fever. She gave numeral kisses on his faces and cry bitterly.

 

Priya:- aapki mama buri mamma na.aapko chodkar gayi

Priya then touched Pihu and kiss on her forehead and hugs her

Priya:- mamma aap dono se bahut pyar karti hai.mamma aapko chodkar kabhi nahi jaayegi

 

Ram and Natasha watching her standing near the door

Natasha:- bhaibhabhi bachho se bahut pyar karti hai .pata nahi kaise rahi hogi bhabhi bachho ke bagair..

Ram:- janta hoon aasan nahi hai Priya ko apne bachho se dur rehna.jabse yeh paida hue hai..ek baar bhi apni aakhon ke saamne se dur nahi hone diya..

 

Natasha:- bhaiaap ek baar fir se bhabhi se baat karke dekho nadhruv aur pihu bhabhi ke bagair nahi reh paayenge.

Ram:- nahi Natasha .abb jo bhi faisla karna hai priya ko karna hai

 

Priya sleeps clutching her both kids.

Ram and Natasha close the door and went to their respective rooms.

 

Next morning,

Priya stirred from her sleep. At the same time pihu also stirred from her sleep.

When she saw her mamma she jumps from her place and sits on her mammas lap.

She hugs her mamma and priya kisses her.

 

Pihu:- mamma aap apne pihu ko chodkar kahan chali gayi thi.aapko hamari yaad nahi aayi..

Priya:- eisi baat nahi hai pihu..mamma ne aap dono ko bahut yaad kiya.

 

Pihu:- aap janti hai mammaaapke jaane ke baad dhurv bahut bimar ho gaya.

Aap hame chodkar kabhi nahi jaayegi na

Priya cries and said mamma aapko chodkar kabhi nahi jaayegi.

 

By then dhruv also stirred from his sleep. Priya also take him in her lap and kiss him.

Dhruv:- mamma aap hame chodkar matt janahame bahut darr lagta hai

 

Pihu:- pata hai mammaaapke jaane ke baad papa bhi sad sad rehne lage the.

Priya hugs them both and said mamma aap dono ko chodkar kabhi nahi jaayegi

Priya wipes her tear and said achha abhi aap dono ko mein taiyaar karti hoon uske baad hum nastha karne jaayenge. Ok

 

By then shipra entered. Pihu and dhruv gets scared and clutch priyas hand tightly and hide their face behind her..

Priya:- Kya hua pihu.maa hai..

 

Pihu nods in negative and said: Nani aapko fir se hamse dur kar degi. Inhe bolo na ki woh yahan se jaaye

Shipra:- Priyadekh tere bachhe.

Priya:- Maa bachhe haiaap chaliyemein aati hoon

Shipra leftpriya said chalo fresh ho jao..

 

Pihu jump from the bed and Priya take dhurv and went to bathroom.

Aftersometimeeverybody gets ready. Ram also entered.

 

Both Pihu and Dhurv run and hug him and said Good morning.

Ram:- achha Dhruv dekhte hai..aapka fever uthra ki nahi and he touches his forhead.

And said arre mamma ko dhekkar aapka fever toh kam ho gaya

 

Pihu:- Thank u papaand she kisses on his cheeks

Ram:- achha aap dono neeche jaohum abhi aate haiboth runs from there

Ram:- Thanks Priya

 

Priya:- Ram yeh dono mere bhi bachhe hai..thanks bolkar muje aap chota matt kijiyeek baat bolumuje yahan laakar aapne sabse badi galti ki .

Ram:- Kya matlab????

 

Priya:- jab inki maa inhe chodkar wapas chali jaayegi natabb inka dil aur bhi buri tarah se tutne wala hai

Ram:- toh tum abb bhi wapas jana chahti ho

Priya:- enough Ram.hamne pehle bhi bahut baar iss baare mein baat kar chuke haiaur aap mera jawab jante haimera unn logo ke liye bhi kuch responsibilities hai.

 

Ram clutch her hand and said tumhi ne kaha na ki tumhe chotta na karu..lekin jo tum kar rahi ho..usse dekhkar yahi lagta hai.apne bachho se badi tumhe kisi aur ki beti aur pati ki jyada fikar haiNahi Priya.mein apne bachho ki khushiyon ke aage kisi ko nahi aane dungakya yeh tumhari responsibilities nahi hai.

 

Priya:- chodiye mera haath..and removes from his grip and said meine apne bachho ki custody maangi thilekin aapne muje dene se inkar kar diyaabb meri koi galti nahi haibachhe mera neeche intezar kar rhe hai..mein jaa rahi hoon.

 

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Ram gets a call from vikram..

Ram:- Haan..vikram bol

Vikram:- Priya  tere saat aayi hai

 

Ram:- haan aur saat mein uski maa bhi hai.

Vikram:- Shipra Aunty!!!!!woh kya kar rahi hai..yahan

Ram:- unki yahi sharth thi agar priya aayegi toh woh bhi saat chalegi

 

Vikram:- tu janta hai na Ram pichli baar Shipra ji ne kya kiya.

Ram:-sab janta hoon lekin mein kuch nahi kar sakta.

Vikram:- achha teek haimein kuch sochta hoon

After some time he said one plan to Ram and Ram agreed too

 

Here in the breakfast table,

Priya feeds both the kids.

Shipra:- Priyakab tak tu yahan rahegi.

Priya:- Maa..please.bachhe hai..jo bhi baat karni hai baat mein kar lena..aur maa agar aapko jana hai toh jaa sakti hai.

 

Shipra:- kya matlab jaa sakti hai..mein yahan se jaaungi toh tu  bhi mere saat rahegisamjiaur zara Ram se pooch ki who saari property aur yeh ghar kab tere naam kar raha haiaur kitna time lagega..

Priya: Maa bass kijiye.

Shipra left from there fuming.

 

Priya:- Dhruv chalo aapko dawai kila deti hoon uske baad tum aaram karo..aur pihu tum apni drawing banao

Dhruv:- Maa muje dawai nahi chahiye.

 

Ram came down and said agar Dhruv dawai nahi lega toh teek kaise hoga aur agar teek nahi hua toh hum ghumne kaise jaayenge

Pihu:- wow!!!papa hum ghumne jaayenge.

Priya:- Dhruv pihu aap dono kamre mein jao mamma abhi aati hai..

Dhruv and pihu left

 

Priya:- aapko ho kya gaya hai ram..Dhruv ki tabiyat kharab hai aur aap ghumne ka plan bana rahe hai..

Ram:- Dhruv abhi teek hai..aur mein bass yahi chahta hoon ki bachhe kush rahejab tumne jaane ka mann bana hi liya hai toh jitney bhi din bachho ke saat hai kyon na enjoy kare.

 

Priya:- mein kahi nahi jaa rahiaapko jana hai bachho ko lekar toh chale jaayiye

Ram:- Hum jaa rahe haitum bhi chal rahi ho and thats final.

Priya:- maa pooch rahi thi..aur kitne din hai yahan..

 

Ram:- I am sorry Priya.apni maa ko jaakar keh do..woh agar abhi ke abhi yahan se chali jaaye toh muje achha hai..

Priya stare at him angrily and Ram left from there

 

Raya spend full time with Dhruv and pihu. They play ludo, carom, hide and seek.

Eisa lag raha tha mano kahi dino ke baad iss ghar mein khushiyaan wapas aayi hai

 

At night,

Raya bedroom,

Pihu:- mumma..hame aaj aapke saat sona hai

Priya:- toh usme kya haiaaj ham sab yahan soyenge

Pihu and dhurv were happy.

 

Priya:- achha mumma aapko ek story sunati hoon.

Ram:- mein apne study mein hoon.

Ram sits on his chair and remembers the incidence

 

Flashback,

At Night,

Raya bedroom,

Ram:- Priya pata hai na kal kya khas din hai..

Priya:- haan mein janti hoon..kal hamari shaadi ki saatvi salgirah hai

 

Ram:- rightpata hai meine bahut koshish ki kal ki meeting cancel karne ki but kar nahi paaya..delegates ke saat kal bahut badi important meeting hai aur woh bhi Pune mein

Priya:- Its Ok Ram..hum baad mein mana lenge..

 

Ram;- No. Priya its not OK.meine kuch socha haikal subah hum jaldi niklenge pune  ke liyemein tumhe guest house chodkar meeting ke liye chala jaaunga aur uske baad hum evening ko shopping ke liye jaayenge aur raat ko ek achhe se hotel mein dinner. Kaisa raha idea

 

Priya:- bilkul flop.mein bachho ko chodkar kahi nahi jaane wali.

Ram:- arre yeh mein bhi janta hoon.meine sirf hum dono ke jaane ki baat thodi kar raha hoon. hum sab kal chalenge.waise bhi mein janta hoon mera number toh bachho ke baad hi aata hai..

 

Priya:- aap eise kyun keh rahe hai..hamare hi toh bachhe hai na

Ram:- haanlekin mein bhi toh tumhara hoon and moves towards her lips

Priya:- Ram..abhi nahikal hame jaldi nikalna hai.

But he did not listen and they share a moment

 

Next early morning,

Ram wishes Priya and Priya did the same. Priya kiss lightly on his lips and ram catches her lips with turn into passionate kiss. They broke after some time.

Priya:- abb der nahi ho rahi.

Ram:- itna time toh hai

 

Priya:- chaliye abb jaldi uthiyemein bachho ko bhi taiyaar karati hoon.

Everybody gets ready and left for Pune

Kids are sleeping at the rear seat and priya holding her hubby hand and enjoying the journey

 

Soon sun rays hits on the glass. They were out of from trafficthey are in Mumbai-Pune highway.roads are almost empty and both sides are like jungle.

Kids stirred from their sleep and wanted to go to bathroom. Ram stops the car. Priya steps down from the car and walk straightly

 

Ram:- Priya kahn jaa rahi hoo

Priya:- aap bachho ko bithakar aayiye mein tabb tak thoda chalti hoon

Ram:- Yahan thode dur mein hi ek dhaba hai.hum wahan se naastha kar lenge..

 

Priya nods and walks little distance and suddenly some blur images comes in front of her. Similar place..similar people...she saw herself in Bridal costume and one man is sitting beside her. Images are not clearshe tried her hard to recognized. She puts her both hands on her foredead and tries to remembersshe recognizes they are talking and laughing she also sees their car is trying to overtake but then suddenly another truck coming from the opposite direction and hits the car .suddenly everything blank. and she shouts RAJAT  

 

Ram looks on her side. He takes kids back into the car and told them not to move and ran towards her. Priya becomes unconscious and falls on the ground. Ram came and holds her in his arms and called her he carries her. He sprinkles some water on her face. Kids get scared and started crying He decided to go back and turns his vehicle and goes back. He called Nevik on the way..

 

He takes directly to the hospital. Nevik were already there. Neha takes kids to the home.

Vikram:- yeh sab kaise hua

Ram:- pata nahi..achanak se Priya chal rahi thi.phir pata nahi chillane ki awaaz aayi..jaakar dekha toh behosh padi thi

 

Vikram:- kahi Good news toh nahi hai

Ram:- mein yahan tension mein hoon aur tumhe Mazak sooj raha hai.Priya pregnant nahi hai..ok..

Vikram:- tu itne daave ke saat kaise keh sakta hai

Ram:- lookmuje filhaal iss baare mein baat nahi karni.Vikram smiles.

 

After sometime Doctor came and asked ram to come with him to the cabin..

Dr.Amar:-abhi batana mushkil hai Priya ko kya hua. she is absolutely normal.

Ram:- fir achanak se Priya behosh kaise ho gayi..woh kuch dekhkar darr gayi thi

 

Dr.:- abhi mein kuch bata nahi sakta. Ho sakta hai usse kuch pichla yaad aa gaya ho and this is not the first timeisse pehle bhi priya ne kahi baar apni pichli zindagi ke baare mein dekha hai abb Priya ko kuch yaad aaya hai ya nahi yeh toh hame uske hosh mein aane ke baad hi pata chalega

 

Ram:- (worriedly) Amareisa toh nahi hoga na ki yaaddash ke aane ke baad usse mere saat bitayi hui baate sab bhool jaayegi..

Amar:- eisa hone mushkil haisaat saal se Priya ek nayi zinagi jee rahi hai tumhare saat.aur yeh kaafi lamba waqt hota haikisi bhi patient ke liyeaur eise stage mein muje nahi lagta ki woh saari baate bhool jaayegirelax Ram..Priya ko hosh aane do sab pata chal jaayega

 

After some time,

Priya came back to normal. She sits on the bed. Nurse went to inform the doctor.

Priya looks around, she take her mangalsuthra. Tears fall from her eyes

 

By then, Doctor and Ram entered into her room

Priya wipes her tears immediately.

Dr checked and asked abb kaisi ho Priya????

Priya nods and looks down.

 

Dr:- tum exactly bata sakti ho kya hua tumko..achanak se tum behosh kaise ho gayi

Priya looks at Ram and turns her face aside

Priya:- pata nahi.muje kuch yaad nahi hai.

 

Dr:- Its Ok Priya tum aaram karoRam mein kuch dawai likk derta hoon tum Priya ko lekar jaa sakte ho

Ram:- Priya..mein abhi aata hoonand left with Amar.

Priya cry bitterly.

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 27 August 2013 at 12:06am

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 12:08am | IP Logged
nice update... ye kya priya kiske pati aur beti ke liye ram ko chod deConfusedConfused poor kids mumma ke bina rehna pad rha haiCry ye shipra aunty ki to AngryAngry shipra ka sapna money moneyLOL Haila priya ki memo aa gyiShocked priya aur rajjo DeadDead lo sandy aa gya aapka fav char. rajjo Angry kya yaar anniversary wale din hi ye sb hona thaOuch continue soon !!!!!

Edited by Mini1991 - 27 August 2013 at 12:40am

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 12:31am | IP Logged
finally Priya's memory is back Smile
she has already decided that she'll go back to rajatShocked
shipra behind ram's propertyShocked 
peehu n dhruv got tospent tym with their mom Smile and ram too Tongue
story is getting intresting, pls give update soonSmile
thanks for pmSmile

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 12:40am | IP Logged
Hi sandhya Smile

Full of twist..Wink & very perfectly handled.. & shown.. ClapClapStar 
U showed Vilan is neceesary for a hit story..LOL

So well executed with present & flashback..ClapClapStar
Waiting to see how Raya becomes together again..Smile

Thanks for pm
Continue soon.. Smile

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
nice one continue soon
story is progressing well
rhanx for the pm

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 1:53am | IP Logged
wow ab waiting tho mushkil hai but Clap

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 1:57am | IP Logged
OMG scary update .. but what does that mean dusre ke pati aur bacche hmm confusing .. it may be wrong but i think rajat was earlier married to some one else .. and then she died or something then priya married rajat ..dont know just a wild guesss. loved how you simply described priya's emotions she was avoiding eye contact with ram ... I think she is not happy about what ever happened ... but its awesome continue soon .. and before that come up with a amazing preview .. :) :)

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