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FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 (Page 107)

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Posted: 16 August 2013 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
so we heading towards present track, interesting yet bit confusing, anyways am waiting to read it, plz continue ASAP

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 6:12am | IP Logged
nice preview...
hm...priya is too good...she has taken the right decision...
wats wrong wid shipra??????Angry

update soon...

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshirambalh

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PART- 16

 

Raya got married.

They had lunch in nevik's house. Media people are hoarded in Ram's house. Ram doesn't want to face the media. He cannot take Priya in his house. So he decided to stay in hotel for night.

 

Vikram made all arrangements and booked a luxury room for Raya.

 

Ram is not speaking with Priya from morning. She knows very well that Ram is very angry and he is avoiding her. She wanted to open up her feeling in front of Ram. Priya is craving for his attention.

 

In the room,

Neha and Priya were talking.

Priya:- Neha'pata nahi par muje eisa lagta hai Ram mujse naraz hai. jo kuch bhi hua uske baad se Ram mujse baat nahi kar rahe.

 

Neha:- Obviously Priya jo tumne kiya usse toh koi bhi tumse naraz hi hoga. Even muje bhi tumse shikayat hai'.I mean tum eise kaise kar sakti ho yaar..

 

Both were talking when Vikram entered.

Vikram:- tum dono abhi tak baate hi karte rahoge'bahut raat ho chuki hai, Ram aur Priya ko nikalna nahi hai kya'

Neha:- Oh sorry Vikram'hum abhi do minute mein aate hai..

 

Vikram:- jaldi karo'Ram wait kar raha hai.

Neha: mote ko bolo intezaar kare'

 

Priya is upset.

Neha:- Tum abhi tak wahi baat lekar baiti ho'chalo taiyaar ho jao. Woh tumse bahut pyar karta hai. achha tum apna chehra teek karo'aaj tum dono ki suhaagraat hai'eisa chehra lekar saamne jaaogi toh bechara aur pareshan ho jaayega'

 

 

Neha and priya entered into the hall.

Neha:- yes, we are ready

Ram:- ek minute ..ek minute..tum dono(Nevik) kahan chal rahe ho

 

Vikram:- arre Ram ham tumhe chodne chal rahe hai

Neha:- tu darr matt hum wahan rukne nahi wale

 

Ram:- hahahah'very funny'koi zaroorat nahi hai hum chale jaayege'waise bhi raat bahut ho chuki hai'tum dono yahi raho'

 

Vikram:- lekin Ram'

Ram:- lekin wekin kuch nahi'kal milte hai'.

 

Neha hugs Raya.

Neha:- Fatty'Priya ko jyada tang  matt karna'.

Raya feel embarrassed.

Ram:- Vikram'Neha ko lekar jaa andar'.and smiles'

Raya left.

 

In the car,

Ram was driving. Priya looked at him but he is looking straight.

There was silence. Priya broke the silence

 

Priya:- Ram'mein aapse'

Ram cuts her in between.

Ram:- Priya abhi hum hotel hi jaa rahe hai..jo bhi baat karni hai hum hotel mein karenge'

 

After half an hour, they reached Hotel.

Raya entered into the room. Room was beautifully decorated.

 

Ram:- Priya'tum baito mein fresh hokar aata hoon.

Without looking at Priya Ram goes from there. Priya felt bad. She understands something is bothering him. She wants to speak with him but Ram ignoring her every time. She becomes worried.

 

After some time Ram came out from washroom

Ram:- Priya'tum chaho toh fresh ho jao'

Saying this he goes from there and sits on bed stretching his legs, takes the remote and starts watching TV.

 

After some time Priya came from washroom and sits beside him and hugs him.

Priya:- Please Ram talk with me'.I can't take this anymore.

Ram switched off the TV and takes her hand and looks straightly into her eyes.

 

Ram:- Priya'.mein tumhare saat hoon bass tumse baat nahi kar raha hoon'aur tum itna bechain ho rahi ho'.toh socho mera kya haal hua hoga jab mein subah uthkar dekhta hoon ki tum mere paas nahi ho aur tum Ashwin se shaadi kar rahi ho aur fir baad mein pata chalta hai ki tumne apne aap ko maarne ki koshish ki'

                                     Kya lagta hai tumko ki apne aap ko maar dena inn sab ka solution tha'.tum toh inti kamzor ho ki Zindagi mein ladna tak nahi janti'..kya zaroorat thi wahan se aane ki'.kyu muje phone nahi kiya'aur yeh sab karte waqt tumne mere baare mein socha'ki mera kya hoga'.tum bahut selfish ho Priya'tum sirf apne baare mein sochti ho'

 

Priya:- No'Ram eisi baat nahi hai'aap galat soch rahe hai'

Ram:- hamare beech jo hua kya lagta hai'.woh sab mazak tha'tumhe kya laga ki inn sab ke baad mein tumhe chod dunga'.. tum wahan muje akele chodkar chali aayi'.

 

Priya puts her finger on his lips and stops him to talk further'

Priya:- Bass aap kuch nahi kahenge. mein manti hoon jo kuch hua nahi hona chahiye tha'.par mein kya karti, mere paas aur koi raasta hi nahi bacha tha'Pehle Niharika ji ne aakar mujse kaha ki agar mein aapki bhalayi chahti hoon toh aapko chod du. Phir Nisha ne aakar kaha ki woh aapse pyar karti hai aur aapke bagair zinda nahi reh sakti...usne muje aapse baat karne ke liye bhi mana kar diya'mein kya karti'.Mein Ashwin se shaadi nahi kar sakti'infact kisi se bhi shaadi nahi kar sakti' because I love you'I only love you.

Mere liye pyar ka matlab sirf aap hai Ram'..

 

Ram:- tum unse keh nahi sakti thi ki tum mujse pyar karti ho'.

Priya:- nahi thi himmat'bolne ki'..

Priya cries and hugs him very possessively.

 

Ram broke the hug and holds her from her shoulders'.

Ram:- mein tumhe rulana nahi chahta tha'.mein tumhe samjana chahta tha ki tumne jo kiya galat kiya. Aaj ke baad hum kabhi biti hui baato par discuss nahi karenge'aur tum mujse wada karogi ki aaj ke baad tum eisa kuch karne ki kabhi sochogi bhi nahi'koi bhi problem ho hum baithkar discuss karenge'.

 

Ram wipes her tears with his thump.

Ram:- achha ek smile de do..arre aaj hamari shaadi hui hai'hamara first night hai'.ek smile toh de do'

Priya smiles. Ram hugs her.

Ram took her hand and asked "Jyada dard toh nahi ho raha na"

Priya:- Nahi'.

 

Ram:- Achha Priya'kal ko agar achanak se tumhari yaaddaash wapas aa jati hai toh tum muje bhool toh nahi jaaogi na'

Priya broke the hug.

Priya:- aap achanak se mujse eise sawal kyun kar rahe hai'.

 

Ram:- Priya'.tum itna darr kyun rahi ho meine toh bass eisi hi pooch liya..

Priya:- Nahi Ram'eisa kabhi nahi hoga'aur agar kabhi eisa hua toh aap hai na..aap muje saari baate yaad dila dena'mein aapkochodkar kahi nahi jaaungi'.she hugs him tightly.

 

Ram kiss on her forehead.

Ram:- mein tumhe kabhi apne aap se door jane nahi dunga'.

Ram laid her properly on the bed. He came on top of her and with other hand he switched off the light.

 

Next morning,

Priya stirred from her sleep and open her eyes slowly. She looks on the other side, Ram is sleeping very peacefully. His hand is over her waist. She slowly removes his hand and sits. She took the duvet and covers herself properly. She bends and runs her finger over his hair. She kisses on his forehead. She came out from bed wear her clothes and went to washroom

 

After some time she came out from bathroom. Ram still in deep sleep.

Priya goes near him and keep her hand on his chest and calls him.

Priya:- Ram uthiye na'kitna soyenge'.abhi thodi der mein Neha aur Vikram bhi aa jaayenge..

 

Ram lazily open his eyes and said "Good morning sweetheart"

Priya:- Good Morning'.

Ram:- tum itne jaldi taiyyarkyun ho gayi'.hum kahi jaa rahe hai kya..

Priya:- Kaisi baate kar rahe hai'subah ke 9:30 baj gaye hai ghar nahi chalna hai'

 

Ram:- Itni bhi jaldi kya hai'.ek Good morning kiss toh deti jao

He pulls her towards him and kiss on her lips. After some time both broke the kiss.

 

Ram:- tumne naha liya'

Priya:- haan abb aap uthiye'aur jaakar taiyaar ho jaayiye'mein tab tak breakfast order karti hoon.

Ram:- teek hai chalo mere saat dobara naha lo'

 

Priya:- nahi Ram..bilkul nahi'and tries to move but he hold her very tight. Priya understand she was struck. His eyes show his desire. She was pleading but it was too late. He carries her to the bathroom.

 

After bath, they order breakfast. By then Nevik also came.

They reached Haveli. Rest of the rituals is properly done. Neha help her for all this. Natasha and Rishab were also present.

 

Next day,

Ram decided to find out her parents and surprise her. He went to office and opens the file. To his surprise he could not found the file. He called Vikram'

Ram:- Vikram'.woh missing wali file muje kahi dikk nahi rahi'

 

Vikram was caught. He becomes confused what to say

Vikram:-(stammering) Ram meine woh file delete kar di'

Ram:- delete kar di'lekin kyun????

Vikram:- arre mein dekha tha'Priya naam ke list mein usme Priya nahi thi'aur waise muje laga ki tu jo kar raha hai woh sahi nahi kar raha

 

Ram:- Kya matlab???

Vikram:- Ram tune Priya ko Promise diya tha na ki tu kabhi uske past mein nahi jaaoge'phir tuje kyun pata karna hai..

Ram:- Haan Vikram'.lekin Priya ne uss waqt issliye kaha kyunki woh muje khona nahi chahti thi'lekin abb yeh baat nahi hai'

Hamari shaadi hochuki hai'aur mein janta hoon kuch bhi ho hum dono alag nahi hone wale'aur waise bhi yeh uska past nahi hai' woh log Priya ke parents hai'usse apne past ke baare mein jaanne ka pura haq hai'

 

Vikram:- dekh mein samajta hoon'lekin phir bhi muje lagta hai..jab tak Priya tujse khud aakar nahi kehti hai tuje isme nahi padna chahiye '.aur waise bhi zaroori nahi ki woh tuje aceept kare. Woh yeh kehkar tuje Priya se alag karwa sakte hai ki Priya ne jo kuch bhi kiya anjaane mein kiya'usse kuch yaad nahi hai. muje lagta hai Ram jaisa chal raha hai chalne de'

 

Ram:- I think you are right'.

 

7 Years passed'Raya are now parents of two children'Pihu five years old and Dhruv three years old. All were happy together.

Even after two children Raya never miss to spend time together and romancing with each other. 

She never asked Ram to search for her parents.

 

Today was Raya's seventh marriage anniversary. Seven years ago Priya entered into his life. And today he lost her. It was an accident'.which change everything in Raya's life.

 

 

Present,

Suddenly, Car halt with sudden break and Ram back to his sense.

Driver:- Saab, ghar aa gaya'

Ram turns back. Priya and Shipra were stirred due to sudden jerk on the car.

 

Natasha opens the door. Everybody entered. Natasha smiles at Priya and in turns Priya also smiles'

Ram:- Dhruv kaisa hai????

Natasha:- bukar thoda kam hua hai'abhi so raha hai'

Ram:- aur Pihu???

Natasha:- woh bhi so rahi hai'raat bhar jaagti rahi'mummy aayegi..mummy aayegi karke'badi mushkil se sulaya'.

 

Priya had tears'

Priya:- mein bachho ko dekhkar aati hoon'

Natasha went inside.

 

Ram:- Priya'jab tak tum yahan ho tum mere saat mere kamre mein rahogi. Mein nahi chahta ki bachho ko kuch bhi pata chale

Shipra:-  Nahi'Priya mere kamre mein rahegi'aapke kehne par ham yahan aaye'.bass'

 

Ram looks at them angrily'

Priya:- Maa'rehne dijiye'mein Ram ke saat rahongi'.

Shipra:- nahi beta'Ram ki har baat maanne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai'

 

Ram:- Priya'.tum yahan wapas bachho ke liye aayi ho'.issliye hum bachho ke saamne bilkul waise rahenge jaise hua karte the'..unko koi shak nahi hona chahiye'ki tum unhe chodkar jaane wali ho'

 

Priya looked at him suddenly'.

Priya:- Ram mein aapke saat rahongi aur Maa aap meri chintaa matt kariye'

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Edited by sandhyasn - 17 August 2013 at 9:01am

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:06am | IP Logged
how did she come to KM . ? did i  miss anything.. 
any ways  aww shipra is so annoying. ram is her husband na y shipra is being mean. ?

liked this update so much .. looking forward to read moreee


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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Nice update sandy...kitini happy te ye dono par anniversary ki din hi kuch hogaya kya...par raaz kya hai ki priya ko unse door hona pada wo bi seven years ki baad...really lots of questions dear...clear it as soon as possible...want everything to be normal. And love the raya's first night conversation, finally thanks for pm..

Edited by sakshirambalh - 17 August 2013 at 9:20am

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvbalh

how did she come to KM . ? did i  miss anything.. 
any ways  aww shipra is so annoying. ram is her husband na y shipra is being mean. ?

liked this update so much .. looking forward to read moreee
yes, I think u miss part 3 or 4...
Ram brought her on a condition the he will sign the divorce paper once everything will be OK
for Shipra...Rajat is Priya's husband and that y she is indifferent to him.
thanks for commentsHug
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakshirambalh

Nice update sandy...kitini happy te ye dono par anniversary ki din hi kuch hogaya kya...par raaz kya hai ki priya ko unse door hona pada wo bi seven years ki baad...really lots of questions dear...clear it as soon as possible...want everything to be normal. And love the raya's first night conversation, finally thanks for pm..
Priya met with an accident. something happens to her which change Raya's life altogether.
U will know in next update. mess will be clear soon
thanks for commentsHug

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