FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 - Page 112

Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Sakshiram


First i want to thank u for dedicating ths part, t really means a lot sandy...and extremely sorry for commenting late...the update s really emotional gt answers for many unanswered questions in this part...shipra s really vry much irritating in ths part hope she realises raya love soon and ram s vry angry and priya s vry confused...u depicted everything vry nicely and poor kids thy r struggling in midst of there elders,nandini rajath relationship s vry clumpsy...priya s really facing vry hard time and with many confusions in her mind and so as ram...hope thy gt out of all these clumsy ties as soon as possible..i think past s almost over waiting for their phase of present life   
no sorry dear. and yes, flashback is over. now story will move in the present.
Shipra not going to realised but Priya will speak out😊
priya really in tough situation. Ram is not understanding and on the other side Shipra is emotionally blackmailing her.
thanks for comments🤗
Posted: 10 years ago
Congrats for completing this thread with ur beautiful writings sandy
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by jineejiggs


toh Shipraji ke blackmail ke aage Priya haar hi gayi, koi maa kaise aise kar sakti hain, aur Priya, kya Nandini, Peehu aur Dhruv se bari hain, kya woh reh payegi inn dono ke bina, mujhe bohot gussa aa raha hain, but u plz continue, I want to see ke yeh maa beti kahan tak jaa sakti hain  
she is going back not only for Nandini..but for Rajat too...
thanks for comments🤗
will continue😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Sakshiram


Congrats for completing this thread with ur beautiful writings sandy
Thank u dear🤗
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by chillpc


Sry fr late cmmnts...

Very teary update... 😭

iss shipra ki toh...!!!
Bhagao yaar...nalayak...apni hi beti ke jaan ke peeche padi hui hain...nikalo use...

Feeln bad fr raya...

Contn soon...
Thnx fr the pm..
nahi bhaagegi,,story ke end takk rahegi 😆 aage toh abb Rajat bhi aayega 😆
no need to say sorry PC
thanks for comments🤗..will continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by krunalidivecha


nice one😊
thank u 😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by bpatil3


Sorry for being late.
THANK U  SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING IT TO ME. ðŸ¤—  IT FEELS SO GUD WHEN SOME ONE DEDICATE U THEIR BEST PART OF WORK. I HUMBLY ACCEPT THE HONOUR. THX .
sandhyaji accha laga  aap ne yehi part chuna mujhe dedicate karne ke liye - Issme Priya ki duvidha hai, ram ka ab tak  undekha roop hai, bachhoan ka maa -baap se door hone ka innocent  dard hai, priya ko insaaniyat ke naate rajat ke paas jaana hai, ya fir ye kahoo kisi ki ehsaanoan ka boz hai jo kisi roop mein utarne ka muaka , kahi na kahi ram ke saath choot jaane ka dar hai,apne pariwar ki khushiyan lautane ka mann hai firz hai, wohi kashmkash hai .

Bahot pressurized hai priya .  bahot udaas bhi hai ramji aur gussa bhi  hai , kyonki unhe poora yakeen tha priya will not live him.But priya said she will go with her mom- Priya's reaction towards ram when he shouted was quiet common kuch bhi wo apne maa baap koi aise bolega to sehna mushkil hai. Lekin priya ko ram ki dil ka halat bhi samjh mein aata hai, par wo calmly explain karna chahti thi, par ramji ka gussa -priya ne vishwas toda wo pain se hath uthaane tak gaya.
Very touchy n emotional.
Liked the strong bond they share, each and every emotion was built n written so nicely. Yahi strong reason hai priya ram pe gussa nahi hai uske itna gussa hone par bhi kyonki wo ramko jaanti hai. Wahi ram gussa hogaya, not letting her explain. he overreacted, but priya ki bhi ek galti hai wo apne maa ko bhi bol sakti thi , wo baat kar rahi hai ram se -no need to call police n all, Ship cannot talk to him like that, ye nahi boli to ram is hurt. he never expected. 
Last mein solid bomb tha yaar, rajat ko leke . Hurt ram , wants to hurt her..
sigh...

Just no words to explain the beautiful transition from soft conversation to anger n hurt till priya leaving.





first of all thank u for such a big comment.🤗
abb ek aur dedication hai jab Rajat coma se aayega...uska credit mein nahi le sakti 😆
thank u that u like the update 😊
Haan priya bhi bol sakti thi...ki woh Ram se baat kar rahi hai...lekin ram ne priya ko sirf kuch din ke liye jaane ki permission de thi...whereas Shipra Priya ko hamesha ke liye le jana chahti thi aur yeh baat Priya Ram se nahi kehti. haan muje bhi lagta hai Priya ne jyada bol diya rajat ke liye 😆.
thanks for comments🤗
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by sandhyasn



<font color="#ff0000">first of all thank u for such a big comment.🤗</font>
<font color="#ff0000">abb ek aur dedication hai jab Rajat coma se aayega...uska credit mein nahi le sakti 😆</font>
<font color="#ff0000">thank u that u like the update 😊</font>
<font color="#ff0000">Haan priya bhi bol sakti thi...ki woh Ram se baat kar rahi hai...lekin ram ne priya ko sirf kuch din ke liye jaane ki permission de thi...whereas Shipra Priya ko hamesha ke liye le jana chahti thi aur yeh baat Priya Ram se nahi kehti. haan muje bhi lagta hai Priya ne jyada bol diya rajat ke liye 😆. </font>
<font color="#ff0000">thanks for comments🤗</font>


I didn't realize it's such a big n long comment sorry for boring. Actually I was travelling home , to bus mein kuch kaam bhi nahi tha mujhe seat bhi mili thi maine kya kya likha abhi dekh rahi hoon.
Chaloji aage ka part interesting lag raha hai ab toh.
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Raya_some


Awesome .. You justified but why priya left like this .. its not a point for some one else's child you leave ur own kids .. Continue Soon .. : ) :) :)
Priya is leaving not for nandini but for rajat who is actually her husband and she can't escape.
thanks for comments🤗.will continue soon
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by bpatil3




I didn't realize it's such a big n long comment sorry for boring. Actually I was travelling home , to bus mein kuch kaam bhi nahi tha mujhe seat bhi mili thi maine kya kya likha abhi dekh rahi hoon.
Chaloji aage ka part interesting lag raha hai ab toh.
ha malthi comment to jyada hi chota hai dear...lagta hai tum bi try kar sakthi ho ,ek ff or ss shuru kardo bus mein hi.. jab yesa mauka milega...

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