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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 11

awesome what an update at least Ram knows everything abt Nik so he won't fall for her evils tactics... but still have fear what she did with RaYa that Ram agreed to marry some other girl & she throw Priya out of house... plz post next soon waiting intersting Precap plz post soon...

will post tomorrow...thanks for commentsπŸ€—
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kya viru...jab realise hoga toh raya bhi ek ho jaayege


Kya sandi tune mujhe dara diya ki mein pagal ho gyi hun or mujhe aadhi chize samajh arhi hai..wo preview toh mujhe pata hai..mein jo tune baad mein preview diya na uske baad bol rhi thi yeh...mera matlab tha ki ab priya ke jane ke baad kaise ram react karega or kaise usse realise hoga ki wo priya se pyaar karta hai..yeh dekhte hai matlab judai ki wajah se usse realise hoga..ab samjhiEdited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
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PART 12

 

Next morning,

In the breakfast table

Ram and priya are ready for the office.

 

Niharika:-  Priya''tumne kuch socha hai aage kya karna hai'.

Priya looked at her confusedly

 

Niharika:- nahi'..abb toh tum poori tarah se teek ho gayi ho'toh aage kuch socha hoga ki kya karna hai'nahi karna hai'.tum yahan hamesha ke liye toh nahi reh sakti na'.

 

Ram is silent but he is not happy. He moves his chair'..

Niharika:- arre Ram beta'.tumne poora kaya nahi. Dekho aaj meine tumhari pasand ka aaloo ke parante banaye hai'

 

Ram:- nahi chotti maa'.muje jyada bhook nahi hai''.(then looking in Priya's face) priya ho gaya toh office ke liye chale'.

 

Priya nods her head'..

Niharika interrupted:- arre Ram beta priya office aakar kya karegi'.mera matlab hai ki mein din bhar akeli rehti hoon'.agar priya saat mein rahegi toh mera mann bhi behal jaayega..upar se itne din Priya yahan thi toh usse jyada pata hai cheezo ke baare mein kahan rakka hai'kyun Priya beta'

 

Priya:- Ram'aap chale jaayiye'.mein maa ke saat rukti hoon'..

Ram:- R u sure???

Priya:- haan aap ho aayiye'

Ram:- teek hai sham ko milte hai'.

Ram left to office''' Niharika winks to sid.

 

Niharika in her room'..

Niharika:- Ek kaam toh ho gaya''priya ko office jaane se rok diya'hame koshish karni chahiye ki hum Priya ko Ram se door rake'

 

Sid:- abb aage ki kya planning hai'.

Niharika:- abb Priya ko iss ghar se bahar pikwana hai'.

Sid:- maa'lekin yeh hum kaise karenge

 

Niharika:- hame kuch bhi karne ki koi zaroorat nahi padegi'Priya kud hi apna boriya bistar baadhkar yahan se chali jaayegi''''

 

Around 2 o'clock,

AK and sid is out for some office work. Rishab and Natasha are out with their friends. Only Niharika and Priya are at home. Niharika goes to Priya's room. Priya is taking rest.

 

Niharika thinks " Maharani apne kamre mein aaram kar rahi hai "

Niharika knocks the door. Priya open her eyes'

Priya:- Maa'aap yahan'aayiye baithye na'

Niharika:- nahi beta agar tum aaram kar rahi toh mein baad mein aati hoon

Priya:- nahi Maa..aap aayiye'

Niharika:- Priya mein yahan tumse kuch kehne ke liye aayi hoon

Priya:- haan Maa'kahiye'aap kya kehna chahti hai'

 

Niharika:- Priya mein seedhe mudde par aati hoon'.Priya tum janti ho bahar log tumhare aur Ram ke baare mein kya kya keh rahe hai'.Priya tum itni toh anjaan nahi ho ki tumhe kuch pata hi nahi hai kya chal raha hai'..mein janti hoon Priya tumhare aur Ram ke beech mein eisa kuch bhi nahi hai'.lekin yeh baat sirf hame pata hai'.tum agar logo ko yeh baat samjane jaaongi toh woh log nahi samajne wale'.aur inn sab ka asar hamare business mein pad sakta hai'.aur yeh risk hum nahi utha sakte'..

                                                  Ram ne yeh career bahut mushkil se haasil ki hai'.kya tum chahogi ki tumhari wajah se Ram ka career barbad ho jaaye'nahi na'. Ram kabhi tumse yeh baat nahi karne wala'because he cares for you'.lekin yeh tumhe sochna hai'ki tumhe kya karna hai'.

                                                   Ram tumhari sirf care karta hai'.tum uske type ki blkul nahi ho'.woh tumhe kabhi accept nahi karega'.Ram ne kabhi tumhare liye kuch socha hi nahi hoga'.kya tum chahti ho Ram ki yeh sachhayi jaankar bhi tum yahan uske saat raho'..

                                                 Hamne Ram ke liye ek rishta socha hai'ladki ko Ram bhi pasand hai'woh tumhare baare mein bhi jaanti hai'.lekin Ram kabhi aage nahi badd paayega jab tak tum uske saat rahogi'.Priya Ram ke balayi ke liye tumhe iss ghar se jana hoga'.tum jahan chahogi wahan jaa sakti ho'hum tumhara poora karch uthayenge'lekin tum iss ghar mein nahi ruk sakti.

 

Priya is very much hurtled. Her eyes are in tears. She is trying herself to control'.

Priya:- Maa'aap jaise chahti hai..waisa ki hoga'Ram ke liye mein yeh ghar chodkar jaane ke liye taiyaar hoon'..

 

Niharika:- mein janti thi ki tum muje nirash nahi karogi'..mein tumhara intezam kisi ladies hostel mein kar deti hoon'.abhi ke liye''''lekin uske baad  'tum Mumbai se door jaaongi'.teek hai'achha abb tum aaram karo..mein chati hoon'

 

Niharika smiles and came out from her room happily. Priya closed the door. She can't control herself''' She falls on the floor and weeping loudly'                      

 

Ram calls her in the afternoon. But, she did not attend. Ram becomes worried, he called in landline number. Niharika attended and told him that she is sleeping.

 

Next day,

Ak and Niharika decided to organize the party. Just get together. Only very close friends are invited. Niharika told priya that today she is officially introduced Ram fiance'.Miss Nisha Malhotra'. She also told her after that she will leave this house.

 

Ram saw Priya is disturbed for some days. He is trying to speak but Priya herself is avoiding him.

 

AK aur niharika ke aa jaane ke baad Ram aur Priya ko ek dusre ke saat waqt bitane ka time hi nahi mill paa raha tha. iss baat ko abb Ram bhi mehsoos kar raha tha'.woh Priya se baat karna chahta tha''

 

Just before the party'.

Priya speak to Ram. She entered in his room. Ram happy to see priya'

 

Ram:- finally tumhe time mill hi gaya, mujse baat karne ka'aajkal itni busy rehne lagi ho ki mere liye dress select karna, meri liye watch, mera hanki, sab laakar dena bhool gayi ho'

 

Priya:- Ram' mein aapse kuch aur baat karna chahti hoon.

Ram;- haan Priya'bolo'kya baat karna chahti ho'

Priya(looking down):- Ram'..woh mein'..woh Ram mein yahan se shift hona chahti hoon'

 

Ram(confusedly):- matlab????

Priya:- matlab yeh ki mein yeh ghar chodkar jana chahti hoon'.

Ram:- why?????kisi ne tumse kuch kaha kya

Priya:- nahi'muje kisi ne kuch nahi kaha'.abb mein teek ho gayi hoon'toh aapko aur takleef nahi de sakti'.

Ram:- tumhe eise kyun lagta hai ki tum takleef de rahi ho..tum kahi nahi jaa rahi'.samji'

 

Priya:- nahi'.mein yahan nahi rehna chahti'aur kyun rahu'kiss rishte se rahu'.kya lagte hai aap mere'.shayad aapko pata nahi hai..lekin bahar log hamare rishte ke baare mein ulta seedi baate karte hai'mein yeh sab aur nahi dekh sakti'.I am very thankful ki aapne meri madat ki'mera operation karwaya'meri dekhbal ki'lekin inn sab ki wajah se mein aapke saari baate sunkar yahan nahi reh sakti''

 

Ram is really angry'and said" aaj achanak tumhe yeh sab kyun lagne laga hai"

Priya:- muje aaj kehne ka mann kiya. Bass'.

Ram:- oh!!!! Tum bhi baaki sab jaisi hi  ho'matlab ho gaya toh phek diya'.meri hi galti hai ki meine tumhe baaki sab logo se alag samja'.ok fine'..tum jana chahti ho jao'jahan jane hai jao'.aur jitni jaldi ho sake jao'.

 

She left the room .

She back to room and cry very loudly''''.Ram is disturbed with her words.

 

In the evening,

Priya is getting ready for the party. She is wearing peach color sari and looking very beautiful. She is trying to hook her blouse'but it not happens'.

Ram is ready for the party but his mind is full of Priya's words. He thinks" woh mujse eisa kaise keh sakti hai". He decided to talk with Priya and goes to his room.

 

Priya's room was closed but, not locked. He entered and saw Priya is trying to hook her blouse. Priya did not notice this. He goes near to her and stands very near to her. He takes the side of her blouse and hooked it.

With the touch she looked into the mirror. She saw Ram is standing and helping her. She closed her eyes and feeling his touch. Her heart is burning. She controls her feelings.

 

Ram could say something'.Niharika entered. She saw Ram with Priya'she is angry seeing them together. She gives fake smile'and said" Ram tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..sab mehmaan aaye hue hai aur tumhara intezaar kar rahe hai'priya tum bhi chalo'it's a big day for Ram"

 

Both entered into the party. Priya saw one girl in dark blue color gown looking very beautiful. She is standing with her parents. Priya understands its none other than Miss Nisha Malhotra.

 

Priya Ram ke paas se chali jati hai aur Natasha aur rishab ke saat jaakar khadi ho jati hai. Ram ko bahut bura lagta hai'.Ram Priya ko dhekte rehta hai'priya bhi jaanti thi ki Ram usse dekh raha hai'but priya apne nazre fer leti hai'.

 

Party was started and Niharika announce and introduce Nisha as Ram's fiance. Ram shocked and don't understand what's going on. Niharika gave ring to Ram and told him to wear it to Nisha. Nisha smiles and forwarded her hand. Priya has tears in her eyes. She is broken. She can't see this.

 

 Priya decided to move from there, when Niharika stops and said" Priya kahan jaa rahi ho beta, eisa achha thodi lagta hai mehmaano ke saamne eise chale jaane ka aur aaj toh itna bada din hai Ram ke liye"

 

Ram is helpless. He puts the ring and Nisha did the same. After the ring ceremony, Ram moves from there. He goes near to Vikram who is also in shock, when Nisha came and hold his hand possessively. Ram tried to move away from Nisha, but she holds Ram's hand tightly.

 

Ram is feeling very awkward. Ram looked at Priya who is behaving normally with everybody as she has no problem with this.

 

Party was over. Everybody retire to their rooms.  Priya change into night dress and trying to sleep.  Her heart is burning.

Here, Ram is very angry on his family. He decided to talk with AK.

He enters in their room.  

 

Ram:- yeh sab kya hai'.engagement and all that'agar mere baare mein kuch faisa lena tha toh muje pata bhi rehna chahiye. Mein Nisha se shaadi nahi karsakta'

AK:- Ram..abb tum yeh shaadi nahi tod sakte'

 

Ram:- (Angrily) kyun nahi tod sakta. Muje bataya gaya ki yaha normal party rakki jaa rahi hai, yeh nahi bataya ki mera engagement karaya jaa raha hai'..mein jisse janta nahi, pehchanta nahi'aap unse meri shaadi kaise kara sakte hai'.aur aap mere liye itna sab kuch kyun kar rahe hai''

 

Niharika:- uss ladki mein kya problem hai'.ek dusre ko jaanne mein kitna waqt lagta hai''..shaadi ke baad sab teek ho jaayega'..tum chaho toh mein tum dono ki meeting karwa deti hoon'.

 

Ram:- uss ladki mein koi problem nahi hai'. yeh aap usse wapas kar dijiye'.(and hands over the ring to Niharika) aur keh dijiye ki mein yeh shaadi nahi karna chahta.

 

Ram turns to go'when AK stops him

AK:- ek min beta'tum kab tak shaadi nahi karoge'yeh hamara farz banta ki hum tumhe settle karaye'..

Ram:- oh really!!!! Papa mein apna achaa bura janta hoon. aap sirf aapki iss family ka dhyan rakiye' mein jaisa hoon teek hoon, kush hoon'mere baare mein itna sochne ki koi zaroorat nahi'..

 

Ram left from there''.

 

Both have sleepless night.

 

Next morning,

Priya is ready to go. She packed her bags. Ram once again tries to stop her but, she already takes her decision.

 

Ram:- agar tum bhi muje chodke jana chahti ho toh mein tumhe nahi rokunga'waise mein kon hota hoon tumhe rokne wala'.chalo mein tumhe chod deta hoon'

 

Priya:- (in her mind:- Ram'ek baar keh toh diya hota ruk jao'.muje chodke matt jao'u r special to me)

 

Priya takes blessing from everybody and leaves from there. During the journey both are silent. She reached the hostel and Ram left from there without saying anything.

Priya goes to her room, closed the hostel room and cried.

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ye me first πŸ₯³
fantastic updt dear πŸ˜›
loved it a lot
but iss nihi ki toh 😑
ram is so silent did nt tell nihi anything
but am sure in next updt raya will get united πŸ₯³
iss nisha ko baagadho dear 😊
thanks for pm πŸ€—
cont soon😊
Edited by .sangs123. - 10 years ago
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continue soon dear :):):):):) waiting
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Awesome update 
Continue soon
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Nice update...
grrr bhootni dayan niharika 😑😑
ye ram ki engagement bhi ho gyi nisha se 🀒
oye ram ji ek baar roka to hota 😭😭
ab kya hoga...
continue soon !!!!
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Thx for the PM.
Niharika and her dirty tricks.😑
Ram kaise ring pehna diya without knowing her. Na jaane pehchaane ye ram kabhi bhi apne gharwaloan ke dabaav mein aake kuch bhi karta hai.. Yaha pe he very well know AK and Niharika thrown him out phir bhi. Society ke saamne ghar ka maan samman rakhne ke liye kaha phas jaata hai insaan. Portrayed it so well.πŸ‘πŸ‘I thought he will ask sorry to Nisha and clearly tells he will marry a girl when he sure about her.Little dramatic. But accha twist lag raha hai..
Ramji idhar bhi -hook mein atke.. But ye thoda ajeeb nahi lag raha hai from Ramji's point of view, priya ki POV se no problem bcoz she knows she loves him. Par ram πŸ˜†
continue...
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Superbb one sandi... πŸ‘
Yeh niharika ki toh.. 😑
Priya is so hurt nd ram is silent.. didnt said anything nd tried to stop her πŸ˜’
Chalo next mein he will realise his love nd they will become one too.. πŸ˜ƒ
Cont soon nd thanx for pm...

Sandi precap mein toh priya bhi shaddi ke liye haan kehti hai na kisi se uska kya hua??..though i dont want to see but just curious to know abhi wo aage ayega ya wo drop kar diya?