FF- Raya-love and lost part 20 page 146 - Page 27

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

abhi jo story hai woh Ram apni gaadhi mein Priya aur shipra ko leke aate waqt soch raha hai. afterthat Priyastory ko aage badayegi aur tabhi aapko pata chalega ki Y Priya is behaving likethis.

aapko jald hi sab pata chal jaayega,kyunki iske baad story jaldi aage badegi.

thanks for comments🤗

Okep..looking forward to it..

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

I am happy that u comment wch is very important for any writer. Thanks for comments😃

I know the value of comments as I am also a writer in Parichay forum.. 😊

Originally posted by: sinalbest

I know the value of comments as I am also a writer in Parichay forum.. 😊

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

wow then Y u r not writing here. I am ready to read ur work on raya.😃

Firstly I am not as good as u are.. 😊
Secondly my 2 ff's are in running in Parichay forum & due to busy schedule I m not updating it regularly..
And alreadt there are too good writers here..
Moreover I am not sure that will anybdy here like my way of writing..

Originally posted by: sinalbest

Firstly I am not  a good writer. when I started I really don't know how to take story forward. as I never write anything before but then our readers encourage me to write.

first u start if u have a good story line, our reader will definately accept u and when u start don't forget to PM me. 😃

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Whenevr I will write on Raya will surely pm u 😊

Lovely update.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Lovely update.

Just brilliant.. 

In the hospital bed without any dear ones by ur side.. what a tragedy.Lovely narration.

Nice going ..

Thx for the PM.

part 5

wah kya damakedar intro hua hai RaYa ka ek dusre se... something really diffrent aur jahan tak Ram k karne ki baat hai what ever he did he is right on his place kyunki ek aache intaintion k saath kiya hai jo bhi kiya so i m ok with it but i know Priya will start mahabaharat at next morning it self toh dekhte hain aaj kya hota hai...

part 6

yaar mahabhart toh nahi hui par kahani thodi twissted toh ho gayi akhir woh ladki thi kuan Priya ya koi aur ... & reading note next me pata chalega why Priya wants to divorce Ram yaar i m getting impatint to read it akhir manjra kya hai... moving on next...