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Shadows FF Last Chapter & Epilogue (strictly 16+) (Page 2)

neenabinu IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
interesting a flirt Asad...lookin to read this

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meow23 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
naam karan tho karlo ff ka.. luvd d charachter sketch.. so waitng for de action to strt..
me in.. do contd soon

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Ceon IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
it ws really intrstng

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ojaswi_kajen IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
nice concept...
cont soon...
waiting eagerly for ur update...
nd do PM...:)

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-Prinky- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 April 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
It seems nice
waiting for ur update

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rosamale IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 April 2013 at 12:07am | IP Logged
i am looking forward to read this ff. i loved ur other ff. please continue soon and please pm meSmile

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pinks73 Groupbie

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Chapter 1

"We'll see you on Friday Inshaallah beta" said Dilshad switching off her computer.

Asad walked into the sitting room and loosened his tie while he sat down on the couch. "Salaam Ammi" he said, "Was that Ayaan?"

"Wale kum salaam and Yes" Dilshad replied while walking towards the cupboard and taking out a large packet from it, "I was talking to him and Humaira, they were asking me if I wanted them to buy something special from New York, for the wedding"

"I can't wait to see Ayaan, it's been a year and I miss him" said Asad fondly.

"What's that Ammi?" asked Asad pointing at the the packet in his Mom's hands.

"These are the wedding cards, Asad, start writing the names on it at least" Dilshad said taking out one of the cards and handing it to him.

"Ammi" said Asad taking the card from her and putting it on the table "You know I don't have time for these things. You should have had the names printed on it like I suggested"

"Printed on it? Please!!! Where is the personal touch in that?" said Dilshad rolling her eyes.

"Well then wait for Ayaan to come and then you can have the groom write everyone's name on the cards. How is that for personal touch?" he grinned.

"Okay Asad I have to talk to you about something serious." said Dilshad.

"Yes Ammi" Asad was attentive. He knew he could joke around with Ammi as much as he wanted but her advice and thoughts were invaluable to him.

"Asad, I know you are not comfortable with Ayaan getting married to a girl we have not met and whose family we are not aware of but I am going to trust my son. Ayaan is mature enough to make his own decisions and I believe he will make the right ones." explained Dilshad.

"Ammi he is not as mature as you think he is" said Asad.

 "Please just behave yourself when they are here, okay?" warned Dilshad

"Aren't you concerned that she has never even been to India, doesn't even know Urdu and will be a total misfit in our traditional Bhopal surroundings" said Asad

"Asad sometimes I think I am the girl from the twenty first century and you are my grandfather, you can be so judgmental bachhe" laughed Dilshad. "She will learn Urdu, what's the big deal about that and as far as Bhopal is concerned she is not going to be living here, at least not for a while, so it doesn't matter. Ayaan was offered a job in a big reputable company in New York and he is seriously thinking about taking it."

"Ammi, I am just concerned that's all. He doesn't even know the girl too well. He just met her six months ago for God's sake and he wants to marry her. I can't believe it." said Asad, throwing up his hands in the air.

"Asad, let's be practical about it, he will marry her even if we don't approve so it's better we say yes and participate in his happiness rather than say no and loose him and his wife forever because whether we like it or not he WLL marry her." asserted Dilshad

"Maybe you're right Ammi, anyway if he decides to stay back in NY and get the job after he graduates in spring it will give them both sometime to adjust to each other before they come live here with us" chipped in Asad

"Adjustments? Huh? That's all your experience talking, right?" Dilshad laughed, "I want to maintain a good relationship with my son and his wife" she added seriously "and also with my future grandkids because God forbid YOU give me any" she smiled sweetly

Asad laughed "You know I don't want to ever get married Ammi"

"Of course you don't. Your wife will never allow you to have so many girlfriends" Dilshad shook her head.

Asad sighed. He had had this conversation with Ammi so many times. He had told her a few years ago that he did not want to get married. He was happy with the way his life was.

Of course he had not told Ammi that his so called 'girlfriends', as Ammi put it, were not romantically involved with him. There were no emotions involved. The relationships were mostly physical with no expectations from any one. The girls knew full well that Asad was not the marrying kind and no false promises were made and there were no illusions or deception from his side.

"Okay Ammi" said Asad trying to change the topic, "So Ayaan is coming on Friday?"

"Yes they are all coming on Friday" said Ammi going into the kitchen to set up the table for dinner.

"All? Ayaan and his wife, I mean his fiance, right?" said Asad, opening the cabinets and taking out the glasses to put on the table.

"Yes and Humaira's older sister is coming too, to participate in the wedding of course." said Dilshad, taking the dishes out of the fridge.

"Hmm that's nice, at least there will be somebody from the girl's family" shrugged Asad.


"Zoya" exclaimed Humaira placing the bag on her shoulder and checking herself in the mirror "You have to get this bag, it's so pretty"

"Please Humaira" laughed Zoya, "You are saying that for everything in the store" 

"I am going to dread taking you shopping in India. You are going to like everything there. It's just your kind of place, bangles and bags and jewelry'." said Ayaan, shaking his head.

"Yes, everything will be like Bollywood, right?" asked Humaira

"You are in for a shock babe" laughed Ayaan

"Humaira, why don't you just get the makeup stuff and the bags you came to buy and I'll meet you in the car in half an hour. I have to check out the shoes section." Zoya said walking away.

"Okay Humi lets go and please make it quick, will you?" pleaded Ayaan

"The green one or the pink one" she asked picking the bags in each hand.

"The green one" Ayaan answered without thinking

"Hmmm I think I like the pink one better, it will go with the outfit we picked out last week, what do you think?" Humaira asked

"Okaaay the pink one then" said Ayaan trying hard not to lose his patience.

"Hmmm the green one is pretty though" contemplated Humaira

"Humi please end my agony and pick one" said Ayaan

"Ayaan you are getting irritated just shopping around with me for a bag and we are not even married yet. What are you going to do with me for the rest of our lives?" asked Humaira with her hands on her hips.

"Well Humaira Begum I cannot tell you what I am going to do to you for the rest of our lives in a shopping mall, it wouldn't be appropriate but I can tell you that shopping is fine as long as it benefits me too" said Ayaan with a mischievous smile taking both her hands in his and putting them behind his back.

"So what would I be shopping for that would be of interest to you too?" smiled Humaira skirting the first part of his sentence.

"If you were buying something like that" he said pointing to the lingerie department, "I would be absolutely interested."

"Ayaan!!" said Humaira hitting him on his chest, "Let's go, I have to work on my project. It's due next week but I have to turn it in before we leave on Wednesday and I don't have much time."

"Let's pay for this then and go" he said taking the pink bag from the pile, "Zoya will be waiting for us in the car"


Chapter 2 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3528044&TPN=3
Please comment and let me know what you think. Thanks

Edited by pinks73 - 08 September 2013 at 1:03am

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Posted: 11 April 2013 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
Great start:)

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