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Shadows FF Last Chapter & Epilogue (strictly 16+) (Page 103)

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 2:24am | IP Logged
aww this is over :( damn you need to come up with something new soon.
I loved the ending but I wanted to know more about how they spent their days without each other, lol I'm a sadist LOL but then every thing is fine and it makes up for that xD and Zoya's past :( Farhaan was such an animal. :x I'm so glad Zoya came out of that (: and now Asad and Zoe are together <3
 
give us an epilogue soon :)

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Aah! Finally!! :D

Epilogue. SOON.SOON.SOON.

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Awww... lovely ending!!

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Wow! What an awesome update...totally loved it. Asad came back Smile
Zoe's past was painful Ouch glad she has Asad by her side now.
They got married Smile and the last Asya scene was hot:)

I loved this story and will miss it a lot. Do give an epilogue if you can. Please start another story soon. You are an awesome writer. Thanks again for sharing this lovely story with us.

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Read lst two orts onbe go
Awesome
Loved it

Waiting for epilogue

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 11:06am | IP Logged
I enjoyed reading your story; while the premise was nothing new and what i have seen in this forum over and over again - hot and handsome Asad, many women, never been in love breaks the icy exterior of Zoya Farooqui who has had a terrible time in love...you kept our interest by inviting us into a lovely wedding. 
However, your ending did not fit in well with the style of the story - the light and warmheartedness of romance with a tragic closure with the two departing over a misunderstanding did not fit well but was a still a good ending and did offer the reader an interesting twist.  I believe your viewers will be disappointed...and i have a way to bring it back...

Overall, I liked that what you wrote was your work and an original as i have seen stories here that look plagiarized...

Perhaps you can share with other writers what it is that allows you to write the way you do...
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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 12:45pm | IP Logged

It was a perfect ending,

When Asad called her baby as she was telling him her past, I nearly fainted with over adorableness, 

Glad that the two are married now, 

Please write an epilogue soonBig smile

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
Wow. I didn't expect! Shocked

AsYa are married!!!!! Day Dreaming

Loved it! Heart

Continue soon! Big smile

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