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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Laila2009

Just read chapter 3 - amazing writing - very romantic. Perhaps one of the best romantic chapters I have read on the forum. 

Just touched on Chapter 4 and 5. Advise. Don't make Asad weak; it is important in any romance to keep the male lead strong. If you make him too passive and rona dona, you can kill your story. Wink Core formula for all romances - do not make the hero so weak in comparison to the female lead - he doesn't have to super strong but his character must be. If he is indecisive, feeble-minded, overly possessive and jealous - you weaken him. 

Thank you so much dear for your comment. Yes I really do appreciate your feedback. I will try my best to take into account what you've mentioned. I think I have made him a little too expressive, maybe because I've always wanted to see him like that in the show. I wanted show that, even though he's really strong, her tears and pain reduces him to tears sometimes. And I agree the breakdown in part 8 was not something I planned. I just wanted to show him angry at another guy touching her. Thank you again. 

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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rarepearl

oh this chapter was the best. I loved it. i'm glad Asad reached on time to help Zoe. I knew Asad would behave dat way only after seeing his life in danger. he was bound to react like dat. it was so sweet of Zoe to pretend all ok in front of Asad, although she was hurt & broken from within. her screams & cries in her room made me shiver widpain. I cud feel wat the poor soul was going through. I just hope dat idiot of a man dosnt reappear again. n I guess its Ayaan who's come to Khan house, who Zoe has mistaken for dat jerk.
do cont soon sweety.
love,
Nimra.

Nimra :)
I forgot one thing writing this chapter, that Zoe never phoned him... her hand received the incoming call by accident. I hope I didn't go too overboard this time, because I have a few more action sequences planned in the future. Aww, I'm glad you connected to her pain in the room, I couldn't find the rights words to express her feelings. He's an obsessive lover, has been following her for 3 years, do you think he'll give up after one blow? was that blow enough? you'll have to wait and see. Keep keep guessing.
Much love,
Mojo xoxo
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 4:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kelly Evans

Hey I am loving your work here, the story is so engulfing. The sweet romantic scenes, first touch etc.

Can you add me to the PM list please.

Thank you for your comment, I'm glad you're enjoying the FF.
We have to be buddies for PM's right? I'll send you a buddy request and PM you when I next update :)
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Posted: 17 April 2013 at 11:45pm | IP Logged

loved it

and who is this another guy

i waiting for the next update eagerly

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
awesome update. Please update soon

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 4:15am | IP Logged
cliffyyy???Shocked
ye to galat bt hCry
it ws awesumClap
plz do cnt soonOuch
n pm me if u canSmile

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged
wow
just simply wow
loved it totally
cont soon

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Posted: 18 April 2013 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Poor Zoya, lucky Asad was there on time to save her.  

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