Qubool Hai

India-Forums

   
Qubool Hai
Qubool Hai

FF: Ek Nikaah Aisa Bhi - LINK TO THREAD TWO (Page 19)

-Prinky- IF-Dazzler
-Prinky-
-Prinky-

Joined: 06 February 2013
Posts: 4178

Posted: 16 April 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
Wow !!!!! just mindblowing dear
 
Asad's state omg I thought he will kill Farhan at that moment
 
again who is other guy???
 
waiting dear update soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

Laila2009 IF-Rockerz
Laila2009
Laila2009

Joined: 27 October 2009
Posts: 7552

Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Just read chapter 3 - amazing writing - very romantic. Perhaps one of the best romantic chapters I have read on the forum. 

Just touched on Chapter 4 and 5. Advise. Don't make Asad weak; it is important in any romance to keep the male lead strong. If you make him too passive and rona dona, you can kill your story. Wink Core formula for all romances - do not make the hero so weak in comparison to the female lead - he doesn't have to super strong but his character must be. If he is indecisive, feeble-minded, overly possessive and jealous - you weaken him. 


Edited by Laila2009 - 16 April 2013 at 11:01pm
life4me IF-Dazzler
life4me
life4me

Joined: 04 March 2013
Posts: 2676

Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update. You are a very good writer.

Please continue soon want to know who is that guy.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

rennie Goldie
rennie
rennie

Joined: 07 February 2009
Posts: 2342

Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
loved asad all possessive and angry...and frankly that idiot was asking for it...now wonder who the new guy is...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

Chinnu.Munnu Goldie
Chinnu.Munnu
Chinnu.Munnu

Joined: 20 November 2011
Posts: 1052

Posted: 16 April 2013 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Amazing update.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

Rarepearl IF-Dazzler
Rarepearl
Rarepearl

Joined: 17 August 2012
Posts: 4107

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
oh this chapter was the best. I loved it. i'm glad Asad reached on time to help Zoe. I knew Asad would behave dat way only after seeing his life in danger. he was bound to react like dat. it was so sweet of Zoe to pretend all ok in front of Asad, although she was hurt & broken from within. her screams & cries in her room made me shiver widpain. I cud feel wat the poor soul was going through. I just hope dat idiot of a man dosnt reappear again. n I guess its Ayaan who's come to Khan house, who Zoe has mistaken for dat jerk.
do cont soon sweety.
love,
Nimra.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

Reyansh23 Goldie
Reyansh23
Reyansh23

Joined: 03 March 2013
Posts: 1168

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Gd job asad
Gr8 punch
I lyk dis angry young man
Continue soon
Thnx fr pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

KaBhiQHAsYa Senior Member
KaBhiQHAsYa
KaBhiQHAsYa

Joined: 11 September 2012
Posts: 324

Posted: 17 April 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
amazing...really good...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

MrMrsAsyaKhan

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
ASYA FF: Ek Nikaah Aisa Bhi (THREAD 2) Chapter 38/page25

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: MrMrsAsyaKhan   Replies: 213   Views: 32469

MrMrsAsyaKhan 213 32469 02 February 2017 at 8:11pm by Chillichick
AsYaFF: Thread #1 Train Ride.Thread #2 link on Page 1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 144 145

Author: .LilGreenRobot.   Replies: 1154   Views: 174939

.LilGreenRobot. 1154 174939 25 November 2014 at 1:12am by A.Kh_20
NIGHTMARE Thread -2 NEW THREAD LINK ON FIRST PAGE

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 151 152

Author: MILII_BAKSHI   Replies: 1213   Views: 88289

MILII_BAKSHI 1213 88289 16 November 2013 at 3:53pm by anopama
Nikaah or no Nikaah

Author: SANYAGAUTAM13   Replies: 0   Views: 814

SANYAGAUTAM13 0 814 19 June 2013 at 6:13pm by SANYAGAUTAM13
Zoe: Weaving into Asad thread by thread.

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11

Author: MoronsKiMallika   Replies: 84   Views: 10490

MoronsKiMallika 84 10490 24 February 2013 at 4:18am by shish15

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Qubool Hai Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index