very suspence
will asad find zoya 😕
and zoya not kill her self
waiting for next
update soon
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I was sooo scared. OMG poor zoya... Thank god she's OK. BUT WHAT IS SHE DOING!?And Asad... I have... I'd say no words.. but that's not true.His pain, his disbelief, his hope and his desperation are all so beautifully portrayed. The way he robotically checks every room twice, and tried to convince himself that she's ok, that nothing happened, was heart wrenching. And my favourite part of this entire chapter (besides the Zoya's insistence that Farhan was insane and explaining the difference between love and obsession, my second favourite part) WAS HIS DAYDREAM.When he was making coffee, how casually he was having a conversation with her, reminiscing their moment on the bench, how he thought for a split second that everything was ok, and then in the next moment reality comes crashing down on him... too well written.Loved, as always hun! Can't wait for the next update 😳
Originally posted by: Enchantress
Hey, hello... M here... Yeah.. yeah.. I told you i'l not come until my exams finish but then I couldn't control.. Ek nikaah has that effect to it.. You put that effect to it.. that you couldn't stop yourself from reading it... God, how much in love I m with this story. This story , the entire plot , the twists and turns , just whoa... I m so very captivated. I m at Aww.. with the entire imagination of yours.. It is so good that I so wanted the real QH to be based on the same plot. You write so so well...
The last chapter that I read god.. I was so very captivated.. Wasn't it the entire dream that both had was coming true... You executed the entire thing so well. I was living it. Perfect , would be an understatement... Its is more then that. Girl , you really need to continue this asap. Although , I am now gonna get engrossed back in my books but still there is no harm if I read a single update from you, haina.. I'l come just for your update...Do continue soon!!!Love,Dee
Originally posted by: jazsidhu
aww wat a great update...
pity zoya wat she hv to go through n tat farhan guy y cnt he just live her but luckly he come to the rescue n save her frm the goons...hope asad reach there on time before anything happento zoya n take zoya away frm farhan n kick tat farhan guy...it just awesomely brilliant...thx fr the pm...please continue soon...eagerly waiting fr the next part...👏
Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
Farhaan is so creepy. OH MY GOD! NO Zoe. Please don't Asad will be here soon. I'm sure Asad will come on time. Amazing. Continue soon!:D
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